Bike— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be more concise and use correct tense and cleaner pronunciation. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details. Use past simple consistently for past events and avoid fillers (uh, like). Link ideas with a simple connector (for example, so, and).

Ejemplo: Yes, I did. When I was a child I had a small bicycle, and on weekends my mother would take me on bike rides to the park. Those trips were fun because I could explore nearby streets and spend time outdoors.

Sugerencia: Give a clear, organized answer with accurate vocabulary and specific details. Begin with a direct opinion, then explain why using correct nouns (bike-sharing system) and clear reasons. Use linking words like because and for example. Avoid repetition and unclear phrases.

Ejemplo: Yes, I think bikes are very popular in Taiwan because we have an extensive bike-sharing system. For example, you can rent a bike from many stations across cities, which makes it easy and convenient to travel short distances.

× Yes, uh, when I was a child, I did have a bike and when on weekend my mom, uh, will take took me out to like a a bike travel.

✓ Yes, when I was a child, I had a bike and on weekends my mom took me out on bike rides.

The original mixes past simple, emphatic 'did have', future 'will take', and an incorrect phrase 'bike travel'. Use simple past consistently for past habits: 'had' and 'took'. Use plural 'weekends' for repeated occasions and idiomatic noun 'bike rides' instead of 'bike travel'. Suggestions: use consistent past tense for past routines; replace awkward phrases with common collocations (e.g., 'on weekends', 'bike rides').

× Yes, I think the bike is popular in Taiwan because in Taiwan there is a you buy system.

✓ Yes, I think bikes are popular in Taiwan because there is a public bike system there.

The student used singular 'the bike' where plural 'bikes' is appropriate for general statements (Grammar Problem Type 1) and wrote an unclear phrase 'you buy system'. Also 'in Taiwan' repeated. Use 'there is a public bike system' to describe availability. Suggestions: use plural nouns for general facts ('bikes are popular') and choose clear nouns for systems ('public bike system', 'bike-sharing system').

× It's that our it's that us really easily to borrow the bike and we can use it whenever we want to go to anywhere.

✓ It makes it very easy for us to borrow a bike, and we can use it whenever we want to go anywhere.

The original uses incorrect pronouns ('our', 'us') and an awkward structure 'It's that our it's that us really easily'. Rephrase to 'It makes it very easy for us to borrow a bike' to show causation and correct object pronoun use. Also remove redundant 'to' before 'anywhere'. Suggestions: use 'for us' after 'easy' to mark the beneficiary, avoid repeated fillers, and use 'anywhere' without 'to' when following 'go'.