Bike— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Cevabınızı daha doğal ve akıcı hale getirmek için cümleleri düzgün bir yapı ile kurun, gereksiz tekrarları çıkarın ve fikirleri bağlayan uygun bağlaçlar kullanın. Ayrıca zaman uyumuna dikkat edin (geçmişte olup bitenlerden bahsederken geçmiş zaman kullanın) ve maksimum 5 cümlede net bir konu cümlesi ile başlayıp kısa destekleyici detaylar verin. Örneğin, ‘I had a bike when I was a child’ ile başlayın, sonra neden sevdiğinizi ve neden zorlandığınızı bağlaçlarla açıklayın.

Ejemplo: I had a bike when I was a child and I loved riding it. However, I wasn’t very good at turning corners, which made me a bit nervous. Because of that, I usually rode in quiet streets rather than busy roads.

Sugerencia: Cevabınızı daha düzenli ve tutarlı yapmak için karşılaştırma yaparken bağlantı ifadeleri kullanın (for example, however, in contrast). Ayrıca net bir görüş ifadesiyle başlayın, sonra Hollanda deneyiminizden spesifik bir örnek verin ve son olarak kendi ülkenizle karşılaştırma yapın. Böylece fikirleriniz mantıklı bir sıra ile sunulur.

Ejemplo: I don't think bikes are very popular in my home country. For example, after I moved to the Netherlands two years ago, I noticed almost everyone cycles to work or the market. In contrast, in my country people mostly use cars or public transport, so cycling is less common.

× Yes, I had a bike when I was a child I love.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child; I loved it.

The original sentence lacks proper sentence boundary and has incorrect verb tense for expressing past preference. Use a semicolon or period to separate clauses and 'loved' (past tense) to match 'had'. Suggestion: split into two clauses and use past tense for feelings about the past.

× Riding a bicycle, but I'm not good at it.

✓ I liked riding a bicycle, but I wasn't very good at it.

The fragment 'Riding a bicycle, but I'm not good at it' is a sentence fragment and mixes present and past. Change to a full sentence using past tense 'liked' and 'wasn't' to match 'when I was a child'. Also include subject 'I' to form a complete sentence.

× For me, it's hard to turn around because right now.

✓ For me, it's hard to turn quickly, even now.

The phrase 'because right now' is ungrammatical here and mixes time references. Replace with 'even now' to convey current difficulty and use 'turn quickly' for clarity. Keep present tense for current ability.

× Actually, I don't think so, but I moved the Netherlands two years ago and I saw the people, everybody going to work, market or everywhere with bicycle.

✓ Actually, I don't think so, but I moved to the Netherlands two years ago and I saw people riding bicycles everywhere, going to work or the market.

Missing preposition 'to' after 'moved', incorrect article 'the' before 'Netherlands' (Ok to keep 'the Netherlands' but needs 'to'), awkward word order and gerund use. Use 'riding bicycles everywhere' and 'the market' for natural English. Maintain past tense for past actions.

× But in my country it's not like that.

✓ But in my country it's not like that.

This sentence is correct; no grammatical change needed. It uses appropriate contraction and singular/plural forms. Kept for completeness.