Bike— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be more concise, use correct tense and clearer sequence words. Start with a direct topic sentence, then give 1–2 specific supporting details with correct grammar and linking words. Avoid redundancy and long run-on sentences.

Ejemplo: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. In fact, I owned one bike and often used my brother’s as well. Later I bought two more, but had to sell them due to financial problems at home. I plan to buy two new bikes in the future.

Sugerencia: Provide a clear topic sentence, support it with specific, relevant reasons and use linking words. Correct grammar and avoid vague or unfinished statements (e.g., clarify 'not earning more than 50'—50 what?). Use varied vocabulary but keep it natural.

Ejemplo: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country. This is mainly because they are affordable and cheaper to run than cars, since they use less fuel and cost less to maintain. For example, many low-income workers prefer motorcycles for daily commuting because they are economical and convenient.

× I in fact had two bikes out of which one was of my brother, 1 was of mine and after that I even bought two more bikes but I had to resend them because of the bad situation at my home later.

✓ I in fact had two bikes, one of which belonged to my brother and one was mine, and later I even bought two more bikes but I had to sell them because of a bad situation at my home.

The sentence has plural/singular and word-choice issues. 'out of which one was of my brother, 1 was of mine' is incorrect wording and uses a digit '1' instead of the word 'one'. Use 'one of which belonged to my brother and one was mine' for correct singular/plural reference. 'resend' is the wrong verb; the correct verb is 'sell' given the context. Also punctuation and clause linking were unclear; use commas and 'and later' to join ideas. Suggestion: replace awkward phrases with clear noun ownership structures and use the correct verb for the intended meaning.

× I am having a plan to buy two more bikes in the future.

✓ I have a plan to buy two more bikes in the future.

Use of continuous 'am having' with 'have' as a stative verb is incorrect in this context. Stative verbs (have meaning possess or hold plans) are usually used in simple present: 'I have a plan'. Alternatively, a more natural phrasing is 'I plan to buy two more bikes in the future.' Suggestion: Use simple present for possession/plans or use 'plan to' for intention.

× Yes, I firmly believe that bikes are way more than popular in my country since people don't have that much money to afford cars and any other vehicle so they generally buy bikes.

✓ Yes, I firmly believe that bikes are very popular in my country because many people cannot afford cars or other vehicles, so they generally buy bikes.

'Way more than popular' is incorrect and informal; use 'very popular' or 'more popular'. 'Don't have that much money to afford' is wordy and slightly ungrammatical; use 'cannot afford'. The sentence is long and needs clearer connectors: replace 'since' with 'because' for clarity and add commas to separate clauses. Suggestion: Use standard expressions ('very popular', 'cannot afford') and simplify clause structure.

× It uses less oil, less petrol and also works for longer periods.

✓ They use less oil and petrol and also last for longer periods.

The pronoun 'It' is singular but refers to 'bikes' (plural), so use 'they'. Also, 'works for longer periods' is not natural for vehicles; use 'last for longer periods' or 'require less maintenance' depending on meaning. Parallel structure: 'less oil and petrol' rather than repeating 'less'. Suggestion: Ensure pronoun number matches the noun and choose verbs appropriate for inanimate objects ('last' instead of 'work').

× So even the people who are not earning more than 50.

✓ So even people who do not earn more than 50 [currency units] buy them.

This is a sentence fragment lacking a verb and an object; it's incomplete. It also omits the currency unit after '50' and uses 'are not earning' awkwardly. Use simple present for habitual income: 'people who do not earn more than 50' and complete the thought by adding what they do (e.g., 'buy them'). Suggestion: Always include a verb and complete the clause; specify currency if relevant and use simple present for typical facts.