Bike— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Your answer is understood but has many hesitations, tense errors and repetition. Aim for a clear topic sentence, correct past tense, and one or two specific supporting details. Keep the response to 2–4 sentences and use linking words (for example, "and" or "so") to make it coherent. Practice forming a concise statement: say you had two bikes, when you used them and one detail about why you rode to school.

Ejemplo: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. In fact, I owned two bikes and I rode one to school regularly when I was in grade five because it was quicker than walking.

Sugerencia: The idea is clear but the sentence has grammar mistakes, misused words and hesitations. Start with a direct statement, then give specific reasons and use linking words (for example, "because" and "so"). Use correct verb forms and vocabulary (e.g., "popular," "ride," "cheaper"). Keep it to 2–3 sentences and avoid filler words like "uh."

Ejemplo: Yes, bikes are very popular in Taiwan because many students ride them to school. For example, most junior high students in my city cycle every day since it is cheaper and more convenient than taking public transport.

× Yes, I have a bike when I, uh, was, I have, I have, uh, I had two bikes and I, I ride a bike to school when I was, uh, in grade 5.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I had two bikes, and I rode a bike to school when I was in grade 5.

The response describes past situations, so present tense 'have' and present 'ride' are incorrect. Use simple past 'had' and 'rode' to match the past time reference. Suggestion: identify the time frame words (when I was, as a child, in grade 5) and use past tense verbs consistently.

× Yes, it's very bags is made very popular in Taiwan.

✓ Yes, bicycles are very popular in Taiwan.

The original contains multiple issues: incorrect noun choice 'bags', incorrect verb phrase 'is made very popular', and subject-verb mismatch. The correct statement uses plural 'bicycles' with the plural verb 'are' and the adjective 'popular'. Suggestion: choose the correct noun, ensure the subject and verb agree in number, and use a simple adjective rather than an awkward passive construction.

× Uh, basically every, uh, junior high school student in my country in in my city will rode bike to school because, uh, this cheaper than.

✓ Basically every junior high school student in my city rides a bike to school because it is cheaper.

The sentence mixes future/modal 'will' with past form 'rode' and omits correct verb forms. Use simple present 'rides' to express habitual action. Also replace 'this' with pronoun 'it' and add the verb 'is' for the comparative clause. Suggestion: for habitual facts use simple present; ensure verbs match their subjects and include necessary auxiliary verbs for comparatives ('is cheaper').