Bike— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be concise and correct grammar. Start with a clear topic sentence, then briefly give one or two specific supporting details. Use correct tense and remove redundant words. For example, say you had a bike, mention why you stopped using it, and conclude with a short comment about how you felt or what you did next. Avoid repetition like “was was” and incorrect phrasing such as “throw away it.”

Ejemplo: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. However, I crashed it and the frame was badly damaged, so my parents decided to throw it away. After that, I usually walked or took the bus to school.

Sugerencia: Give a direct answer then support it with clear, specific reasons and use linking words correctly. Correct grammar (e.g., "most people" not "almost people"), avoid filler words like "uh", and form coherent comparisons (e.g., "cars are more popular than bikes"). One or two concrete examples (commute patterns, infrastructure) will improve clarity.

Ejemplo: No, I don't think bikes are very popular in my country. Most people prefer motorized transport because cities are busy and cycling lanes are limited. As a result, cars and buses are much more common for daily commuting.

× I had a bike when I was was a child and however my bike was broken by a crash so I have to throw away it.

✓ I had a bike when I was a child, but it was broken in a crash, so I had to throw it away.

Errors: repeated 'was' (typo) and incorrect sequence of tenses and verb forms. Use simple past consistently for past events: 'had' and 'was' are past; 'was broken' is passive past which is okay but 'by a crash' is unnatural; use 'in a crash'. 'have to throw away it' mixes present obligation with past narrative and wrong word order for object. Change to past 'had to throw it away' and place object before particle. Also replace 'and however' with 'but' to connect contrasting clauses appropriately.

× I don't think bikes are popular in my country because almost people use using transportation and also uh using car is as popular as but transportation.

✓ I don't think bikes are popular in my country because most people use public transportation, and cars are just as popular as other forms of transport.

Errors: 'almost people' is incorrect quantifier; correct is 'most people'. Redundant and incorrect 'use using transportation' should be 'use public transportation' or 'use transport'. Awkward comparison 'using car is as popular as but transportation' is ungrammatical; use 'cars are just as popular as other forms of transport' for clear comparison. Also remove filler 'uh' and fix word order and parallel structure.