Bike— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Give a direct short topic sentence but expand with 1–3 supporting details using linking words. Mention what kind of bike, when you got it, who gave it to you, and a brief memory or reason why it mattered. Keep answers natural and within five sentences.

Ejemplo: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. It was a small red bicycle with training wheels that my parents bought me for my seventh birthday. Because it was sturdy and easy to ride, I learned to balance quickly and used it to visit friends in the neighbourhood. I remember feeling proud the first time I rode it without help.

Sugerencia: Answer the question directly and then explain your view with clear reasons and examples. Avoid unclear phrases like “energetic bike.” Use linking words (however, because, for example) and give specifics about who uses bikes and in what situations. Keep it natural and concise.

Ejemplo: Not very popular overall, but they are common in certain situations. For example, many people use electric bikes for short city trips because they are convenient and save time. However, cars and public transport are still the main choices for long journeys in my country.

× No, they use the energetic bike.

✓ No, people in my country use electric bikes.

The original sentence uses the pronoun 'they' with no clear antecedent and the adjective 'energetic' which is incorrect for describing a type of bicycle. This is an incorrect use of pronouns (type 12) because 'they' does not clearly refer to a noun previously mentioned; and a word choice error where 'energetic' should be 'electric'. The corrected sentence clarifies the subject by using 'people in my country' and replaces 'energetic' with the correct adjective 'electric'. Suggestion: refer to the subject explicitly when 'they' is ambiguous and use the appropriate adjective for the noun (electric bike).