Study— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: 先直接回答正在学习的科目，再用一两句说明哪门课比较难以及具体原因。注意说“difficult for me”，而不是“hard to me”；“talent”前可加“a natural”。

Ejemplo: I'm studying English, mathematics and physics. English is the most challenging subject for me because I sometimes struggle to remember new vocabulary. However, I try to practise a little every day.

Sugerencia: 明确回答喜欢或不喜欢，并用具体原因支持。注意过去经历用“I became interested...”，描述自己的感受用“interested”，不能用“interesting”；“when I was a kid”前要加“a”。

Ejemplo: Yes, I enjoy mathematics and physics. I became interested in them when I was a child because I liked solving puzzles. I also find them useful for understanding how things work.

Sugerencia: 你的回答包含兴趣和未来专业两个理由，内容方向很好。删掉重复的“major”，并把“choose a major of engineering”改为“major in engineering”；用连接词清楚地串联理由。

Ejemplo: I chose these subjects for two reasons. First, I find them interesting, especially physics. Also, I hope to major in engineering, so I need a strong background in maths and physics.

Sugerencia: 先明确回答“popular”或“不太流行”，再解释原因或举例。避免重复“I think”，并把“it's the time popular”换成准确表达，例如“it is becoming more popular”或“there is a strong demand for engineers”。

Ejemplo: Yes, I think engineering is quite popular in my country. Many students choose it because there are good career opportunities in fields such as construction and technology.

Sugerencia: 按时间顺序说明计划，并用“either...or...”表达继续学习与工作的选择。注意“a good job opportunities”应为“good job opportunities”，而“get work”可改为“start working”。

Ejemplo: Yes. First, I plan to graduate from university. After that, I may continue my studies, but if I get a good job opportunity, I will probably start working instead.

Sugerencia: 把“my age is young”改为“I’m young”，并具体说明年轻带来的好处，例如有时间尝试不同方向、承担风险或学习新技能。结尾避免含义不清的“to or just come back again”。

Ejemplo: One benefit of being young is that I have plenty of time to explore different interests. If I make a mistake or change my mind, I can learn from the experience and try a different path.

Sugerencia: 先清楚表明不想换专业，再给出一到两个连贯理由。用“my major suits me well”或“I’m very interested in it”，不要说“a very interest”；最后可说明这个专业如何帮助就业。

Ejemplo: To be honest, I don’t want to change my major. I’m genuinely interested in engineering, and I’ve already gained useful knowledge in this field. I also think it will give me good career opportunities after graduation.

Sugerencia: 直接比较早上和下午，并说明早上对你有什么帮助。注意说“in the morning”，以及“my mind is clearer”或“my memory works better”；避免重复“morning”。

Ejemplo: I prefer studying in the morning because my mind feels clearer after a good night's sleep. I can concentrate better and remember information more easily at that time.

Sugerencia: 清楚说明每天学习几小时、每周学习几天，并核对总时数。若每天六小时、每周五天，总计是每周三十小时；避免用“thirteen, six hours”这种不清楚的数字表达。

Ejemplo: I study for about six hours a day, five days a week. So, in total, I spend around thirty hours studying each week.

Sugerencia: 回答中断且理由表达不清。先说明期待或不期待，再给出两个完整理由，例如获得经验、经济独立；“improve myself to my parents”可改为“make my parents proud”，并删除重复的“because partly”。

Ejemplo: Yes, I’m looking forward to working. I’d like to gain practical experience and become more independent. It would also be nice to earn my own money and make my parents proud.

Sugerencia: 描述平时习惯时统一使用一般现在时，例如“I use”。具体说明电脑如何帮助你查资料或查生词；“when I first I don't know”可简化为“when I come across unfamiliar words”。

Ejemplo: I mainly use my computer when I study. I use it to look up information for assignments and to check unfamiliar words. It helps me find answers quickly.

Sugerencia: 如果你觉得学校暂时不需要改变，可以直接说明原因并举例。注意学校“建成”可说“was built”，设施用“facilities”，而不是“faction”；避免重复“just built”以及“better, it's the best”。

Ejemplo: Honestly, I wouldn’t change much about my school because it was built recently. Most of the facilities are new and in good condition. I’m happy with it as it is.

× I'm studying English, mathematics and physics, but I think English is very hard to me. Maybe I don't have a talent for learning a new language.

✓ I'm studying English, mathematics, and physics, but I think English is very hard for me. Maybe I don't have a talent for learning a new language.

表示“对我来说很难”时，应该用 hard for me，而不是 hard to me。建议记住结构“be + 形容词 + for + 人”。

× Yes, I like mathematics and physics I have interest when I was kid so I am very interesting I think this subject is very fine for me.

✓ Yes, I like mathematics and physics. I became interested in them when I was a kid, so I find them very interesting. I think these subjects are suitable for me.

原句把多个完整意思直接连在一起，缺少必要的句号或连接结构，导致句子结构混乱。建议把不同意思拆成短句，并用清楚的连接词表达它们之间的关系。

× Yes, I like mathematics and physics I have interest when I was kid so I am very interesting I think this subject is very fine for me.

✓ Yes, I like mathematics and physics. I became interested in them when I was a kid, so I find them very interesting. I think these subjects are suitable for me.

interesting 通常形容“令人感兴趣的事物”，interested 形容“感到有兴趣的人”。这里说的是自己的感受，应使用 interested。也可以用 find something interesting 来表达“觉得某事有趣”。

× Yes, I like mathematics and physics I have interest when I was kid so I am very interesting I think this subject is very fine for me.

✓ Yes, I like mathematics and physics. I became interested in them when I was a kid, so I find them very interesting. I think these subjects are suitable for me.

kid 是可数名词单数，前面需要冠词。表示“小时候”时，通常说 when I was a kid。建议检查可数名词单数前是否需要 a 或 an。

× Partly because I think this is very interesting and partly because I want to choose a major major of engineering. So I need to study physics and mathematics.

✓ I chose it partly because I find it very interesting and partly because I want to major in engineering. Therefore, I need to study physics and mathematics.

原句以 Partly because 开头，但没有独立主句，形成句子片段；后面的 So I need... 也没有与前面的原因结构顺畅衔接。建议用完整主句引出 partly because，并避免重复 major。

× I think more people study engineering a lot in my country because I think it's the time popular.

✓ I think many people study engineering in my country because I think it is popular there.

more people 和 a lot 在这里重复表达数量，搭配不自然。表示“很多人”可用 many people，或 people ... a lot，但不要把两种表达叠加使用。

× I think more people study engineering a lot in my country because I think it's the time popular.

✓ I think many people study engineering in my country because I think it is the most popular subject there.

如果要表达“最受欢迎”，需要使用最高级 the most popular。popular 前不能直接加 the time。建议先确定要表达比较级还是最高级，再使用相应结构。

× Yes first I need to graduate from the university and maybe I want to study more in the university but if I have a good job opportunities, I will choose to get work.

✓ Yes, first I need to graduate from university. Maybe I want to continue studying, but if I have good job opportunities, I will choose to work.

opportunities 是复数名词，不能与表示单数的 a 连用。应去掉 a，或改成 a good job opportunity。建议检查冠词和名词的单复数是否一致。

× I think my age is young so I have more time to do what I want to do and I have a chance to change my mind and to or just come back again.

✓ I am young, so I have more time to do what I want. I also have a chance to change my mind or just come back again.

young 描述人的年龄或状态，不直接描述 age。应说 I am young，而不是 my age is young。建议选择能准确修饰主语的形容词结构。

× I think my age is young so I have more time to do what I want to do and I have a chance to change my mind and to or just come back again.

✓ I am young, so I have more time to do what I want. I also have a chance to change my mind or just come back again.

to or 把不定式标记 to 和表示选择的连词 or 错误地连在一起。这里应直接用 or 连接两个选择。建议检查并列成分是否使用了相同、完整的结构。

× To be honest, I don't want to change my major because I think my major is very well and I have a very interest in it and I think it's I learned it. We'll have a great job when I graduate.

✓ To be honest, I don't want to change my major because I think my major is very good and I have a strong interest in it. I think I have learned a lot. I'll have a great job when I graduate.

well 通常是副词，用来修饰动词；描述专业“很好”应使用形容词 good。表示“有浓厚的兴趣”可说 have a strong interest。建议区分修饰名词或主语的形容词与修饰动作的副词。

× I prefer to study morning because I think morning is my brain is more clear and I have and my memory was very well in the morning.

✓ I prefer to study in the morning because I think my brain is clearer and my memory is very good in the morning.

表示“在早上”时，通常使用 in the morning。建议记住表示一天中的时间段时常用 in，例如 in the morning 和 in the afternoon。

× I prefer to study morning because I think morning is my brain is more clear and I have and my memory was very well in the morning.

✓ I prefer to study in the morning because I think my brain is clearer and my memory is very good in the morning.

clear 的比较级通常是 clearer，而不是 more clear。建议优先使用常见的 -er 形式构成短形容词的比较级。

× I prefer to study morning because I think morning is my brain is more clear and I have and my memory was very well in the morning.

✓ I prefer to study in the morning because I think my brain is clearer and my memory is very good in the morning.

这里描述的是现在通常发生的情况，前面使用 prefer 和 think，因此后面也应使用一般现在时 is，而不是过去时 was。描述习惯或普遍情况时，通常使用一般现在时。

× I study six hours one day and I study five days a week so totally, I study thirteen, six hours one week.

✓ I study six hours a day and five days a week. In total, I study about thirty hours a week.

表示频率时，应说 six hours a day，而不是 six hours one day。a day 表示“每天”。建议使用“数量 + a day/week”表达每天或每周的频率。

× To be frank I'm looking forward to working because partly because I want to improve myself to my parents and partly because I want to spend money by myself because I can speak spell a

✓ To be frank, I'm looking forward to working, partly because I want to prove myself to my parents and partly because I want to spend money on myself. [The final phrase is incomplete.]

表示把钱花在自己身上，应使用 spend money on myself，而不是 by myself。by myself 通常表示“独自”。建议记住搭配 spend money on something/someone。

× Well, I usually use the computer when I was studying. I use it to research some information and when I first I don't know the words, I can use it to search it.

✓ Well, I usually use a computer when I study. I use it to research information, and when I don't know a word, I can use it to look it up.

usually 表示习惯，整句话描述的是现在的常见做法，因此应使用一般现在时 study，而不是过去进行时 was studying。谈论习惯时，建议保持一般现在时。

× Well, I usually use the computer when I was studying. I use it to research some information and when I first I don't know the words, I can use it to search it.

✓ Well, I usually use a computer when I study. I use it to research information, and when I don't know a word, I can use it to look it up.

when I first I don't know the words 中 first 和 I 重复，且句子内部结构混乱。应直接说 when I don't know a word。建议避免重复主语，并让 when 引导的时间从句包含清楚的主语和谓语。

× Well, I usually use the computer when I was studying. I use it to research some information and when I first I don't know the words, I can use it to search it.

✓ Well, I usually use a computer when I study. I use it to research information, and when I don't know a word, I can use it to search for the word.

表示“查找某个词”时，通常说 search for a word。search 后直接接宾语常表示“搜查某物或某地”。建议根据 search 的意思选择是否使用 for。

× Honestly, I think my school is very well it's just built just built in this year, so I think every faction is new, I think it's a better, it's the best.

✓ Honestly, I think my school is very good. It was just built this year, so I think all its facilities are new. I think it is better; in fact, it is the best.

well 通常作副词；描述学校的状况时应使用形容词 good。建议描述人或事物的状态时使用形容词，描述动作如何进行时才使用副词。

× Honestly, I think my school is very well it's just built just built in this year, so I think every faction is new, I think it's a better, it's the best.

✓ Honestly, I think my school is very good. It was just built this year, so I think all its facilities are new. I think it is better; in fact, it is the best.

学校是“被建造”的对象，因此应使用被动语态。表示过去完成的建造动作，可说 was built，而不是 is just built。被动语态的基本结构是 be + 过去分词。

× Honestly, I think my school is very well it's just built just built in this year, so I think every faction is new, I think it's a better, it's the best.

✓ Honestly, I think my school is very good. It was just built this year, so I think all its facilities are new. I think it is better; in fact, it is the best.

表示“在今年”时，通常直接说 this year，不在 this year 前加 in。建议记住 this、last、next 等词与时间名词连用时，一般不需要额外加介词。

× Honestly, I think my school is very well it's just built just built in this year, so I think every faction is new, I think it's a better, it's the best.

✓ Honestly, I think my school is very good. It was just built this year, so I think all its facilities are new. I think it is better; in fact, it is the best.

better 是比较级，不能在没有后续名词的情况下与 a 连用说 a better。这里可直接说 it is better；如果后面接名词，则可以说 a better school。建议检查比较级后是否需要补出被比较的名词。