Study— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: 回答直接说明了身份和专业，也提供了主持校园活动的具体细节，结构基本清晰。但最后一句没有完成，影响表达的准确性和自然度；“a third year student”应改为“a third-year student”，“students performances”应为“student performances”，“can helped”应为“can help”。建议用连接词“for example”引出具体活动，并完整说明提升了哪些能力，避免重复使用“build confidence and improve”。

Ejemplo: Well, I’m a third-year student at Shenzhen University, majoring in broadcasting. I often host university events, such as student performances and club activities. These experiences have helped me become more confident and improve my public-speaking skills.

Sugerencia: 回答了学校名称，并补充了校园环境和学习机会，内容相关。但“study in Shenzhen University”应改为“study at Shenzhen University”，“our school ... offer”应改为“offers”；“improve my subjects”搭配不自然，建议改为“improve my academic skills”或“learn more effectively”。可以增加一个具体例子，使答案更有信息量。

Ejemplo: I study at Shenzhen University in Shenzhen. It has a beautiful campus and offers students many opportunities to develop themselves. For example, I can join academic workshops and extracurricular activities, which help me improve my communication and academic skills.

Sugerencia: 回答立场明确，并通过学校声誉、课外活动和实习机会充分支持观点，细节较具体，连接也比较自然。注意“extracurricular”应写成一个词，“student clubs”应使用单数修饰名词；“in Guangdong province”可改为更自然的“in Guangdong Province”。此外，可以减少“our school”的重复，并说明这些机会对学习或未来职业的具体帮助。

Ejemplo: Yes, definitely. Shenzhen University is well known in Guangdong Province, and it provides a supportive environment for students. In addition to academic programs, we can join student clubs and apply for internships, which help us build confidence and gain practical experience.

Sugerencia: 回答直接提出了三个具体改进：清洁服务、储物空间和安静的学习区域，内容切题且使用了“so”表达因果关系。主要问题是“rooms aren't kept very clean”略显笼统，可以说明卫生问题的具体表现；最后的“leave more comfortable”是明显错误，应改为“live more comfortably”或“study more comfortably”。建议使用“Firstly/Also”让多个建议更有条理。

Ejemplo: Yes, I’d like the university to make a few changes. Firstly, the dormitory rooms could be cleaned more regularly because they are sometimes untidy. I’d also like more storage space for personal belongings and quieter study areas, so students could live and study more comfortably.

Sugerencia: 回答结构完整：先说明目前计划不明确，再提出学习课程和寻找实习的具体计划，并解释了目的。内容具体、连贯，词汇如“specialized courses”“practical experience”和“professional network”使用较好。建议将“long term”写为“long-term”，并把“deepen my knowledge in broadcasting”改为更自然的“deepen my knowledge of broadcasting”；还可以补充一个时间安排，使计划更具体。

Ejemplo: To be honest, I don’t have a completely fixed long-term study plan yet, but I want to deepen my knowledge of broadcasting. Over the next year, I plan to take specialized courses in broadcast production and apply for internships at radio or television stations. This will help me gain practical experience and build a professional network.

× Well, I'm a third year student at Shenzhen University. I major in broadcasting and I often have opportunities to host the school events, some such as students performances and some activities which can helped me build confidence and improve my.

✓ Well, I'm a third-year student at Shenzhen University. I major in broadcasting, and I often have opportunities to host school events, such as student performances and other activities that can help me build confidence and improve my academic skills.

情态动词“can”后面必须接动词原形，不能接过去式。因此，“can helped”应改为“can help”。建议记住：can、could、may、might、must、should等情态动词后都使用动词原形。

× Well, I'm a third year student at Shenzhen University. I major in broadcasting and I often have opportunities to host the school events, some such as students performances and some activities which can helped me build confidence and improve my.

✓ Well, I'm a third-year student at Shenzhen University. I major in broadcasting, and I often have opportunities to host school events, such as student performances and other activities that can help me build confidence and improve my academic skills.

“student performances”在这里是复合名词，表示“学生表演”，所以“student”通常使用单数形式，而不是“students”。建议区分复合名词和所有格：例如“student activities”表示学生活动，“students' activities”表示学生们的活动。

× Well, I'm a third year student at Shenzhen University. I major in broadcasting and I often have opportunities to host the school events, some such as students performances and some activities which can helped me build confidence and improve my.

✓ Well, I'm a third-year student at Shenzhen University. I major in broadcasting, and I often have opportunities to host school events, such as student performances and other activities that can help me build confidence and improve my academic skills.

“some such as students performances and some activities”结构不完整且表达重复，最后的“improve my”也没有完整宾语，导致句子意思没有结束。可以使用“such as A and B”或“including A and B”来列举例子，并补充完整的宾语，如“improve my academic skills”。

× Well, I study in Shenzhen University and I think our school is very beautiful and offer many different kinds of opportunities to build my confidence and improve my subjects.

✓ Well, I study at Shenzhen University, and I think our school is very beautiful and offers many different kinds of opportunities to build my confidence and improve my subjects.

表示在大学、学校等机构学习时，通常使用介词“at”，所以“study in Shenzhen University”应改为“study at Shenzhen University”。“in”通常强调在某个空间或区域内部。

× Well, I study in Shenzhen University and I think our school is very beautiful and offer many different kinds of opportunities to build my confidence and improve my subjects.

✓ Well, I study at Shenzhen University, and I think our school is very beautiful and offers many different kinds of opportunities to build my confidence and improve my subjects.

主语“our school”是第三人称单数，因此并列谓语也要使用第三人称单数形式。“offer”应改为“offers”。建议先确定主语是单数还是复数，再选择正确的动词形式。

× Of course, you know Shenzhen University is very famous in our Guangdong province, and our school offers many extra curricular activities and academic programs such as students clubs and internship opportunities, which help me boost my confidence and improve my academic skills.

✓ Of course, you know Shenzhen University is very famous in Guangdong Province, and our school offers many extracurricular activities and academic programs, such as student clubs and internship opportunities, which help me boost my confidence and improve my academic skills.

“student clubs”表示“学生社团”，是复合名词，因此“student”使用单数形式更自然，不应写成“students clubs”。另外，“extracurricular”通常写成一个词，但这属于拼写形式，不是本次语法类型的重点。

× Well you know the dormitory is quite small and rooms aren't kept very clean, so I'd like better cleaning services and more storage space for personal items. I would also appreciate quieter study areas so students can leave more comfortable.

✓ Well, you know the dormitory is quite small and the rooms aren't kept very clean, so I'd like better cleaning services and more storage space for personal items. I would also appreciate quieter study areas so students can study more comfortably.

“comfortable”是形容词，不能直接修饰动词“study”。修饰动词需要使用副词“comfortably”，所以应说“study more comfortably”。建议判断词语的功能：形容词修饰名词或作表语，副词通常修饰动词、形容词或其他副词。