Study— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: 自然さと明確さを高めるために、簡潔なトピック文を最初に置き、余分な繰り返しを避けましょう。職歴の期間や満足度は良い情報ですが、言い換えや不要な語句（"which is not that long"など）を減らし、文をつなぐ簡単な接続語（例えば"and"や"so"）を適切に使って流れを良くしてください。発音の明確さと文法（時制や前置詞）にも注意を払うとさらに良くなります。

Ejemplo: I work at a manufacturing company and have been there for two years. I changed jobs two years ago, so I’m still relatively new, but I’m very satisfied with my current position.

Sugerencia: 回答が混乱しており、文法と語順の誤りが多いため、まず短く明確なトピック文（"I don't study at university; I study English by myself."）を言い、その後で勉強する場所や目的を具体的に述べましょう。不要なフレーズ（"in listening years"など）を削除し、理由や頻度を一つか二つの補助文で示すと効果的です。接続語（because, so, usually）を使い論理的につなげてください。

Ejemplo: I’m not a student anymore; I study English by myself to improve my skills. I usually study after work at cafes or restaurants because I find the atmosphere helps me concentrate.

Sugerencia: 場所の名前や特徴を明確にし、理由を具体的に述べましょう。現在の回答は口語的すぎて繰り返しが多い（"yeah"など）ので控え、一文で評価、もう一文で理由（例：静か、営業時間が長い）を述べると良いです。接続詞（for example, because, and）を用いて論理的に結びつけてください。

Ejemplo: Yes. I usually study at a place called Free Space, which is quiet and helps me concentrate. It’s open until eleven o’clock, so it’s convenient for studying after work.

Sugerencia: 意見は述べているが、語彙の誤用（"snowing"など）と途中で切れた文が問題です。否定から始める場合は理由を続け、具体的な問題点と希望する対策を一〜二文で述べましょう。誤用語は正しい単語（"snoring"）に直し、結論を短くまとめてください。

Ejemplo: Not really. Mostly it’s fine, but sometimes people fall asleep and snore loudly, which can be annoying when I’m trying to concentrate. I wish they would keep the noise down or set aside a quieter area.

Sugerencia: 目的と計画を明確に述べる必要があります。まず目的（IELTSで7.0を目指す）を簡潔に言い、そのための具体的な計画（例えばどの技能を強化するか、どれくらい勉強するか、受験の時期）を一〜二文で示してください。語彙の正確さ（"IELTS"など）と時制を整え、曖昧な表現（"like to"）は避けましょう。

Ejemplo: I plan to take the IELTS and aim for an overall score of 7.0. To achieve this, I’m studying English every evening after work, focusing on speaking and writing practice, and I hope to take the test within the next year.

× I work actually.

✓ I actually work.

The adverb 'actually' is misplaced. In English, adverbs like 'actually' usually come before the main verb in simple present: 'I actually work.' This improves natural word order and clarity.

× I'm working at a manufacturing company and I've been working there for two years because I changed my job two years ago.

✓ I work at a manufacturing company and have been working there for two years because I changed jobs two years ago.

Use simple present 'I work' for a current job and present perfect continuous 'have been working' to indicate an action that started in the past and continues to the present. Use plural 'jobs' after 'changed' in this idiomatic phrase: 'changed jobs.'

× So which is not that long since I started this job and I'm really satisfied my current position.

✓ So that is not very long since I started this job, and I'm really satisfied with my current position.

The clause 'which is not that long' is incorrect; use 'that is not very long.' Also 'satisfied my current position' needs the preposition 'with': 'satisfied with my current position.' Commas help separate the ideas.

× I already graduated from university so I actually do not study in listening years but for myself study I do a listening I would like to improve my English skills so I am studying after the work at coffee or restaurants.

✓ I already graduated from university, so I am not studying at university now, but to study for myself I do listening practice because I would like to improve my English skills, so I study after work at cafés or restaurants.

Multiple problems: use present progressive 'am not studying' to show current status; 'listening years' is incorrect—likely 'listening practice'; 'for myself study' should be 'to study for myself' or 'for self-study'; 'after the work' should be 'after work'; use 'cafés' or 'coffee shops' and plural 'restaurants'. The correction organizes sentences and fixes prepositions and noun choices.

× Yeah I always study at Free Prace which is very good to focus on my study then yeah it opened up to eleven o'clock at night so it's yeah it's convenient when I study.

✓ Yeah, I always study at Free Space, which is great for focusing on my studies. It is open until eleven o'clock at night, so it's convenient for me to study there.

Proper noun likely 'Free Space' (capitalization) and use 'studies' plural. 'Opened up to eleven' is wrong; use 'open until eleven.' Use commas and smoother phrasing: 'convenient for me to study there.'

× Not really, but sometimes I notice someone sleeping and in the worst case scenario they're snowing while sleeping which is a little annoying when I work under study so I think that it is what

✓ Not really, but sometimes I notice someone sleeping, and in the worst-case scenario they're snoring while sleeping, which is a little annoying when I am trying to study, so I think that is a problem.

Several errors: 'snowing' is incorrect—should be 'snoring.' 'Work under study' is wrong—use 'trying to study.' 'It is what' is incomplete—replace with 'that is a problem.' Add commas and hyphen in 'worst-case.' Use present continuous 'I am trying to study.'

× I am not studying ILT to improve my English skills, then I like to gain the score seven point zero in my future.

✓ I am studying IELTS to improve my English skills, and I would like to achieve a score of 7.0 in the future.

'ILT' is likely 'IELTS.' Use present continuous 'am studying' if currently preparing. 'Then' is wrong connector; use 'and.' 'I like to gain' is unidiomatic—use 'I would like to achieve.' Express the score as 'a score of 7.0.'

× I understand it is challenging to get that score but yeah, I'm like to do my best.

✓ I understand it is challenging to get that score, but I will do my best.

'I'm like to do my best' is incorrect; use 'I will do my best' or 'I want to do my best.' 'Will' expresses intention to try in the future. Add a comma before 'but.'