Study— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Begin with a clear topic sentence and avoid unrelated information. Correct grammar (use present simple), remove irrelevant phrases like 'I am thirsty usual', and keep it concise (max 2–3 sentences). Use linking words if adding a reason. For example, say you are a high school student and briefly state why you like it.

Ejemplo: I am a high school student. I really like my school because the teachers are supportive and the atmosphere is friendly.

Sugerencia: Start with a clear direct answer naming the place, then give one or two specific details. Correct phrasing: 'in the countryside' and avoid redundancy like 'so very'. Use a linking word to connect the detail (e.g., 'because' or 'and').

Ejemplo: I study at a small high school in the countryside. Although it is small, I love it because the campus is very pretty and peaceful.

Sugerencia: Respond directly and organize supporting points with correct grammar and plural forms. Use linking words to list reasons (e.g., 'because' and 'also'). Be specific about how teachers are supportive or how students are friendly.

Ejemplo: Yes, it is a good place to study because the teachers are very supportive and explain topics clearly, and my classmates are friendly and help each other.

Sugerencia: Give a clear yes/no and then one specific change. Fix vocabulary (e.g., 'trained' incorrect) and grammar. Say what you want changed (bigger buildings, more facilities) and briefly explain why, using a linking word like 'because' or 'so that'.

Ejemplo: Yes. I would like the school to have larger classrooms and better facilities because more space would make learning more comfortable and allow for more activities.

Sugerencia: This answer is clear and relevant. Improve grammar and fluency by using smoother phrasing and avoiding awkward structures like 'have me gain'. Use linking words ('because' and 'so') and keep it to two sentences max with a topic sentence and one supporting reason.

Ejemplo: I plan to take an entrance exam next year to apply for university and study engineering because I believe further study will improve my job prospects and help me gain deeper knowledge.

× I am a student, I am thirsty usual and now I study in high school.

✓ I am a student; I am usually thirsty, and now I study at a high school.

The original sentence has multiple issues: incorrect word order and adverb placement ('thirsty usual' should be 'usually thirsty'), punctuation run-on between clauses (use a semicolon or separate sentences), and incorrect preposition with 'study' ('study at a high school' is natural). Suggestion: place adverbs before adjectives ('usually thirsty'), separate independent clauses correctly, and use 'study at' for institutions.

× I'm so happy because I'm so really like my school.

✓ I'm so happy because I really like my school.

Redundant and incorrect use of degree words 'so really' is ungrammatical. Use a single appropriate adverb ('really') to modify the verb 'like'. Also, contraction 'I'm' is fine but the clause should be 'I really like my school.'

× I study in a high school in my countryside.

✓ I study at a high school in the countryside where I live.

Use 'study at' for attending an institution. Also 'my countryside' is unnatural; use 'the countryside where I live' or simply 'the countryside.' This fixes preposition and noun phrasing.

× My school is so small but I still love my school because it is so very beautiful.

✓ My school is small, but I still love it because it is very beautiful.

Redundant 'so' and repetition of 'my school' makes the sentence wordy. Replace the second mention with 'it' and use a single intensifier ('very') rather than 'so very.' Also add a comma before 'but.'

× I think my school is a good place to study because my teachers are very supportive, every students are very friendly and good.

✓ I think my school is a good place to study because my teachers are very supportive and every student is very friendly and kind.

Subject-verb agreement: 'every students are' is incorrect because 'every' requires a singular noun and singular verb: 'every student is.' Also replace 'good' with 'kind' or another adjective appropriate for people. Use 'and' to join the two qualities.

× Yeah, I think train is a good because my school is more and I want my school is. Trained to bigs and beautiful more.

✓ Yes, I think the transportation is poor because my school is far, and I want my school to be bigger and more beautiful.

Original is largely ungrammatical and unclear. Likely meaning: problems with transport (train) and desire for school improvement. Provide a coherent corrected sentence: use 'the transportation is poor' or 'the train service is not good,' 'my school is far' or 'there are not many trains,' and 'I want my school to be bigger and more beautiful.' Fix verb forms ('to be bigger') and adjective order ('bigger and more beautiful').

× I plan to take an entrance exam next year because I want to apply to universities and study engineering.

✓ I plan to take an entrance exam next year because I want to apply to universities and study engineering.

This sentence is already grammatically correct and uses future intention appropriately with 'plan to.' No change needed.

× I think further study will give me better job opportunities and have me gain more knowledge.

✓ I think further study will give me better job opportunities and help me gain more knowledge.

The phrase 'have me gain' is incorrect in this context; use 'help me gain' or 'allow me to gain.' This fixes verb usage and makes the sentence natural.