Study— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Give a clear, grammatically correct direct answer with a brief job title and one short detail. Avoid hesitations and incorrect words. Use a topic sentence: state whether you work or study, then add one supporting detail about your role. Keep it under 2–3 sentences.

Ejemplo: I’m not a student; I work as a data analysis officer at a government agency. I mainly handle datasets and produce reports to support decision-making.

Sugerencia: Answer directly and correct grammar: if you are not currently studying say so, then state your future study intention with clear program and field. Avoid filler words and incorrect pronouns. Use one sentence to say current status and one to describe the planned degree and field.

Ejemplo: I’m not studying at the moment, but I plan to pursue a PhD in Literature. I hope to start a graduate program within the next two years.

Sugerencia: Understand the question as asking about the place (e.g., university or city). If you are not studying now, say so and then give an opinion about the place you would study or recommend, with specific reasons. Use linking words like because and for example to make your answer coherent.

Ejemplo: I’m not currently studying, but I think the university I hope to attend is excellent because it has strong faculty and well-equipped research facilities. For example, their library and labs support advanced literature research.

Sugerencia: Clarify the question and give a focused response: say whether you would like any changes, then specify one or two concrete changes (teaching style, facilities, accommodation). Avoid vague phrases and repetition. Use linking phrases such as however or instead to structure your ideas.

Ejemplo: I would like better international student support and more affordable housing. For example, I hope the university would offer dedicated accommodation options and language support for international researchers.

Sugerencia: Give a clear plan in chronological order: state your goal (PhD), then list concrete next steps (prepare tests, apply for scholarships, research supervisors). Use linking words (first, then, finally) and correct verb forms. Be specific about which tests and the timeline if possible.

Ejemplo: My goal is to obtain a PhD, so first I will prepare for the required English and entrance exams, such as IELTS and a subject test. Then I will research scholarship opportunities and contact potential supervisors before submitting my application next year.

× Corindi's I'm not a student, I am working as a officer.

✓ Currently I'm not a student; I am working as an officer.

Incorrect contraction 'Corindi's' is unclear and likely meant 'Currently' (word choice rather than listed but treated as sentence structure). 'a officer' uses incorrect article; 'an officer' is correct because 'officer' begins with a vowel sound. Also 'I'm not a student, I am working' is correct tense but better joined with a semicolon or conjunction for clarity. Suggestion: use 'Currently' and 'an officer' and join clauses properly. Grammar problem type ID:27

× Actually, I'm not study as I mentioned about, but I have a plan to continue to graduate her PhD, uh, of uh, letters and.

✓ Actually, I'm not studying as I mentioned, but I plan to continue to a PhD in Letters.

'I'm not study' is incorrect; the present continuous requires the -ing form: 'I'm not studying' (Grammar problem type 8). 'I have a plan to continue to graduate her PhD' is incorrect pronoun 'her' and awkward structure. Use 'I plan to continue to a PhD' or 'I plan to pursue a PhD.' Remove filler words. Suggestion: use 'studying' and 'plan to pursue a PhD in Letters.' Grammar problem type ID:8

× Absolutely. I'm currently not studying. I AM. As a officer, data analysis. My work.

✓ Absolutely. I'm currently not studying. I am an officer working in data analysis; that's my job.

Fragments like 'I AM.' and 'As a officer, data analysis.' are sentence fragments (Grammar problem type 26 and 23). 'a officer' should be 'an officer' (article error, type 22/17). Combine into a full sentence: subject + verb + object. Suggestion: use 'I am an officer working in data analysis.' Grammar problem type ID:26

× Excuse me, I'm, I'm, I'm not change any less, but I would rather like, uh, in Europe in one house, any, uh, country that best in Europeans and I would would like to continue to my age.

✓ Excuse me, I don't want to change much, but I would prefer to live in Europe, in a house in any country that is best for Europeans, and I would like to continue at my age.

'I'm not change any less' is ungrammatical; use 'I don't want to change much' (verb tense and structure issue, types 6 and 26). Repetition 'I would would' is incorrect. 'in Europe in one house' is awkward; use 'live in Europe, in a house'. 'country that best in Europeans' is unclear; perhaps 'a country that is best for Europeans' (preposition and adjective order issues, types 11 and 18). Suggestion: simplify and use correct negation and infinitive 'to live'. Grammar problem type ID:26

× First UH I has to prepare my UH test to get the high score to apply the scholarship. I I try to apply the PhD scholarship that offers from UH university.

✓ First, I have to prepare for my test to get a high score to apply for the scholarship. I will try to apply for the PhD scholarship offered by UH University.

'I has' is incorrect subject-verb agreement; use 'I have' (Grammar problem type 27). 'prepare my test' should be 'prepare for my test' (preposition error, type 11). 'apply the scholarship' should be 'apply for the scholarship' (preposition). 'I I try' has repetition and wrong tense; use future 'I will try' to indicate intention (future tense issue, type 7). 'that offers from UH university' is incorrect passive/active structure; use 'offered by UH University' (passive phrasing, type 21). Suggestion: fix agreement, use correct prepositions, and choose appropriate future auxiliary 'will.' Grammar problem type ID:27