Study— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Start with a clear, direct topic sentence and avoid unnecessary words. Clarify your current status and immediate plan in one or two sentences. Use linking words like 'so' appropriately and correct small grammatical errors (e.g., 'I'm not either' → 'neither').

Ejemplo: I'm neither working nor studying at the moment; I plan to start university soon, so I'm currently preparing for admission.

Sugerencia: Give a clear present-tense plan and be specific. Correct grammar (use 'want' vs 'wanted', 'study abroad in Malaysia at a university', and 'need the highest score to enter the university'). Use a linking phrase to explain why. Keep it concise and accurate.

Ejemplo: I want to study abroad at a university in Malaysia, because the programs there suit my field; therefore, I need a high exam score to gain admission.

Sugerencia: Answer directly first (Yes/No/Not sure), then give 1–2 specific reasons using linking words like 'because' or 'however'. Avoid fillers and unclear phrases like 'picture like'. Use specific features (libraries, campus atmosphere).

Ejemplo: I'm not sure personally, but I imagine it would be a good place to study because it has well-equipped libraries and a calm campus environment suitable for learning.

Sugerencia: Be specific about what changes you would want and why. Start with a clear topic sentence (e.g., 'Yes, I would like some changes'), then give one or two concrete examples and a reason using linking words like 'because' or 'so'. Avoid repetition.

Ejemplo: Yes, I would like some changes. For example, I would add more quiet study zones and better lighting because these would help students concentrate and study for longer periods.

Sugerencia: Give a clear statement of your plan, correct grammar (e.g., 'I plan to study business because I'm interested in how companies work'), and provide a brief reason or expected outcome. Use linking words like 'because' and 'so' and avoid vague phrases like 'take the measure'.

Ejemplo: I plan to study business because I'm interested in how companies operate, and I hope to use that knowledge in my future career to manage or start a company.

× Actually, I'm not either of them, but I'm going to be a student soon, so I'm preparing for the university.

✓ Actually, I'm neither of those, but I'm going to be a student soon, so I'm preparing for university.

The phrase 'not either of them' is nonstandard; 'neither of those' is correct for negating two options. 'Preparing for the university' is unnatural here; English usually says 'preparing for university' when referring to attending university in general. ID:26

× Where do you study?

✓ Where will you study?

The student says they will be a student soon, so present tense 'do you study' mismatches. Asking about future study should use 'will' or 'are you going to' to match the student's situation. Change to 'Where will you study?' to fit context. ID:11

× I wanted to go study abroad in Malaysia at the university so I need to the highest score to entire university.

✓ I want to study abroad in Malaysia at a university, so I need the highest score to enter the university.

Several issues: tense 'wanted' should be present 'want' to match current intention. 'Go study abroad' is better as 'study abroad'. 'At the university' is vague; 'at a university' fits. 'Need to the highest score' is ungrammatical; correct is 'need the highest score'. 'To entire university' misuses 'entire' for 'enter'. The correct verb is 'enter'. This fixes word choice, article, and tense. ID:26

× I don't know the University Place is good place, but I have the picture like library, university, uh, also universities environment. I think it's good about.

✓ I don't know if the university is a good place, but I have an image of the library, the campus, and the university environment. I think it's good.

Use 'if' after 'know' to introduce a clause. 'University' should be lowercase and preceded by 'the' if specific; 'a good place' requires article 'a'. 'The picture like' is incorrect; use 'an image of' or 'a picture of'. 'University, uh, also universities environment' is redundant and ungrammatical: 'the campus and the university environment' is clear. 'I think it's good about' is incorrect—simply 'I think it's good.' Fixes include article use, clause connector, word order, and redundancy. ID:22

× Yes, I like to changes our study place. I often change. I usually change the place to study.

✓ Yes, I like to change our study place. I often change it. I usually change the place where I study.

'Like to changes' mixes infinitive with plural verb; after 'like to' use base form 'change'. 'Change' as a verb needs an object; add 'it' to avoid fragment. 'The place to study' is awkward; 'the place where I study' is clearer. This corrects verb form and sentence structure. ID:8

× Actually, I don't have study plans in the future, but I would like to take the measure is business because I'm interested in how companies are work and I hope to this knowledge in my future career.

✓ Actually, I don't have study plans for the future, but I would like to study business because I'm interested in how companies work and I hope to use this knowledge in my future career.

'Don't have study plans in the future' should be 'for the future'. 'Take the measure is business' is unclear; likely intended 'study business' or 'take a degree in business' — corrected to 'study business'. 'How companies are work' wrongly orders verb; correct is 'how companies work'. 'I hope to this knowledge' misses verb; needs 'use this knowledge'. These changes fix prepositions, verb forms, and word order. ID:6