Study— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be clear, grammatically correct and direct. Start with a clear topic sentence (I work as...) and correct verb forms and articles. Use one or two short supporting details (company or main duties). Avoid uncertain words like 'probably' unless necessary.

Ejemplo: I work as a team leader in the sales industry. I manage a small team of five salespeople and coordinate daily sales targets, which gives me strong communication and leadership experience.

Sugerencia: Give a clear present-tense statement about where you study. Use correct institution name and course phrasing, and add one specific supporting detail (location or a feature). Keep it concise and avoid awkward structures.

Ejemplo: I study at Colegio de la Pureza Concepcion, where I am taking a Bachelor of Science in Education with a major in English. The school is a Catholic institution located in my hometown and focuses on teacher training.

Sugerencia: Answer directly with a topic sentence (Yes/No). Then give two clear, specific reasons using linking words (because, for example). Avoid repetition and incomplete sentences.

Ejemplo: Yes, it's a good place to study because it is one of the best schools in our town and has useful resources. For example, the library is well-stocked and there is free Wi‑Fi, which makes research and studying easier.

Sugerencia: State your preference clearly and give specific reasons and a brief consequence. Use correct modal and noun phrases (more fresh air, quiet study rooms) and linking words (because, so) to connect ideas. Avoid repetition.

Ejemplo: Yes, I would like the school to provide better ventilation and more quiet study rooms because the library is small and often noisy. This would make it easier for students to concentrate and finish their homework.

Sugerencia: Begin with a clear topic sentence about your plans, then give specific reasons and one detail about timing or intended course. Use consistent person (I) and correct plural/singular forms. Link reasons with words like because or so.

Ejemplo: I plan to study abroad in Australia to attend more prestigious universities and gain international experience. I also hope to work part-time while studying to gain professional experience and support myself financially.

× I probably working as a sales industry as a team leader.

✓ I am probably working in the sales industry as a team leader.

The original sentence lacks the auxiliary verb 'am' for the present continuous form and uses incorrect preposition 'as' before the industry. Use 'am working' for present continuous and 'in the sales industry' to indicate the field. Also keep 'as a team leader' to indicate role. Suggestion: Use subject + be + -ing for current actions and 'in' for industries.

× I started at Colejo de la Poresima Concepcion taking a Bachelor of Science of Education majoring in English.

✓ I started at Colegio de la Purisima Concepcion studying for a Bachelor of Science in Education, majoring in English.

Use 'studying for' or 'studied for' with 'Bachelor of Science in Education' and correct spelling of institution. 'Taking' is informal and 'of' after 'Science' is incorrect; use 'in'. Suggestion: Use past simple 'started' with 'studying for' for clarity and correct prepositions.

× This school is offered only our Catholic school.

✓ This was the only Catholic school available to us.

The original sentence misuses 'is offered' and repeats 'school'. Use 'was' or 'is' depending on context; 'available to us' expresses meaning. Article usage 'the only' is needed. Suggestion: Use clear subject-verb structure and proper articles.

× Well, I think it's a good place to study because it's it's usually. The best school in our town, in our hometown, and there are good resources like library and free Wi-Fi for example. I can.

✓ Well, I think it's a good place to study because it is usually the best school in our hometown, and there are good resources like a library and free Wi-Fi, for example.

Original has repetition 'it's it's', sentence fragments ('usually.' and 'I can.') and missing articles. Combine into one coherent sentence, remove fragments, add 'a' before 'library', and place 'for example' correctly. Suggestion: Avoid sentence fragments and ensure articles before singular nouns.

× Will yes, I would like the place where I study to have on fresh air and some quiet rooms.

✓ Yes, I would like the place where I study to have fresh air and some quiet rooms.

'Will yes' is incorrect; use 'Yes' to answer. 'Have on fresh air' uses wrong preposition 'on' — omit it. Also maintain infinitive structure 'to have'. Suggestion: Use simple 'Yes' and correct prepositions or omit when unnecessary.

× It will be easier to finish our to finish homework because there are often many noisy students in the library is small.

✓ It would be easier to finish our homework because the library is small and there are often many noisy students.

The original repeats 'to finish', mixes clauses, and has incorrect word order 'in the library is small'. Use conditional 'would' to match polite request and reorder to 'the library is small and there are...'. Suggestion: Remove repetition and ensure proper clause order.

× I want to study abroad in Australia because of their prestigious schools and opportunity.

✓ I want to study abroad in Australia because of its prestigious universities and the opportunities there.

Use 'its' to refer to Australia (singular country), and 'universities' is more natural than 'schools' for higher education. Add plural 'opportunities' and article 'the' for clarity. Suggestion: Match possessive pronoun to country and use appropriate plural nouns.

× While you're studying, you can work.

✓ While studying there, you can work.

Original is understandable but 'you're studying' refers to listener; better to say 'while studying there' to keep general advice. Modal 'can' is fine. Suggestion: Use concise phrasing to match context.