Study— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be direct and grammatically accurate: begin with a clear topic sentence, correct verb tenses, avoid repetition, and keep answers within 3–4 sentences. Add one specific detail (e.g., your role) and use linking words to connect ideas.

Ejemplo: I am a medical doctor; I completed my degree three years ago. I currently work at a private hospital where I see about 50 patients a day, treating mainly common illnesses. Because many patients recover and return for follow-up, I find the work very rewarding.

Sugerencia: Answer the question directly (here examiner asked where you study — you should correct to the actual place or say you don't study). Use one clear topic sentence stating the place, then give 1–2 specific supporting details with linking words and correct grammar (e.g., 'it admits about 12 patients a day').

Ejemplo: I don't study now; I work at a private hospital called Green Valley Medical Centre. It treats many outpatients each day and also admits around 12 inpatients, which makes the work both busy and rewarding.

Sugerencia: First, clarify the misunderstanding: say you are not a student but a doctor, then answer the implied question about the workplace. Keep sentences concise, avoid contradictions, and use linking words (however, although) to balance positive and negative points. Provide one specific reason for stress and one positive aspect.

Ejemplo: I'm not a student; I'm a doctor working at the hospital. Although the job is stressful because we often handle many patients each day, the staff are skilled and we provide good care, so overall it is a manageable workplace.

Sugerencia: Respond directly about changes, use precise language and link reasons to effects. Correct grammar (e.g., 'make work easier', 'hire more doctors', 'avoid working on weekends') and limit to 2–3 sentences with a cause-effect link.

Ejemplo: Yes. I would ask management to hire more doctors and reduce weekend shifts for current staff because this would lower individual workload and improve patient care by reducing fatigue.

Sugerencia: Clarify the question: if you have no study plans, say so and then state career plans. Use a clear topic sentence and specific details with linking words (so that, because). Avoid vague phrases like 'adventures plan' and keep it under 4 sentences.

Ejemplo: I don't have study plans at the moment; my future plan is to work in a larger, better-equipped hospital. That way I hope to have a more balanced caseload and finish on time so I can spend more time caring for my family.

× I am. I am a medical doctor and I finish my medical degree three years ago.

✓ I am a medical doctor and I finished my medical degree three years ago.

Past tense issue (ID 5): The action of finishing the degree occurred three years ago, so the past simple tense 'finished' is required rather than the present 'finish'. Use past simple for completed actions at a specific time in the past. Suggestion: use 'finished' or 'completed'.

× I work in a private hospital and it has been good so far.

✓ I work in a private hospital and it has been good so far.

No grammatical change required for tense here; sentence is correct. 'Work' in present simple describes current employment, and 'has been' correctly uses present perfect to describe the experience up to now. (Included to show sentence is acceptable.)

× I get to see about 50 patients in a day, treat them, and I'm happy whenever they come back that they are better.

✓ I see about 50 patients a day, treat them, and I'm happy whenever they return and are better.

Quantifier and wording issue (ID 14 and 26): Use 'a day' instead of 'in a day' for frequency and 'return' is more natural than 'come back' in this context. Also simplify clause 'they return and are better' for clarity. Suggestion: use natural frequency expressions and concise clause structure.

× Where do you study? Student: I work in a private hospital which is known to see plenty patients and also admit about 12 patients in a day, yet rewarding when you see patients get better.

✓ I work in a private hospital which is known to see plenty of patients and also admit about 12 patients a day; it is rewarding when you see patients get better.

Preposition and article errors (IDs 11 and 22): Add the article 'of' after 'plenty' ('plenty of patients') or use 'many patients'. Also 'in a day' is better as 'a day'. The connector 'yet' was misused; use a clearer link such as a semicolon or 'and' and add the subject 'it is' to form a full sentence. Suggestion: use 'plenty of patients' or 'many patients' and correct sentence structure.

× I'm not working, I'm not studying, but I'm working in a parent hospital.

✓ I'm not studying; I'm working in a partner hospital.

Pronoun/word choice issue (ID 12): 'Parent hospital' is likely incorrect choice of word; 'partner hospital' or 'a main hospital' fits better. Also the original repeats 'I'm not working' then 'I'm working', causing contradiction and confusion. Suggestion: clarify intended meaning and remove contradiction; if student meant 'I'm not studying' and is working, write: 'I'm not studying; I'm working in a partner hospital.'

× I would say it's really stressful but still manageable to work because patients can be very much, but they are.

✓ I would say it's really stressful but still manageable, because there can be a lot of patients, and we are able to treat them well.

Subject-verb and sentence structure errors (IDs 27 and 26): 'patients can be very much' is ungrammatical — correct expression is 'there can be a lot of patients' or 'there are many patients'. Also 'but they are' is incomplete. Restructure sentence to clarify meaning: stress is caused by many patients, but staff can treat them. Suggestion: use 'there are many patients' or 'there can be a lot of patients' and complete the clause.

× They should employ more doctors and they should not work in weekends.

✓ They should employ more doctors and they should not have to work on weekends.

Modal verb and preposition issue (IDs 4 and 11): 'should not work in weekends' is incorrect English. Use 'have to work on weekends' or 'work on weekends' with proper preposition 'on'. Suggestion: use 'not have to work on weekends' to express that doctors should be relieved of weekend work.

× That will make the work more easy.

✓ That will make the work easier.

Adjective/adverb error (ID 13): 'more easy' is incorrect comparative form. Use the comparative adjective 'easier'. Suggestion: use standard comparative forms (easy → easier).

× Adventures plan is to work in a bigger place to get a better, bigger hospital and to see patients that are not too much so that I can go home and take care of my family.

✓ My future plan is to work in a larger hospital that is better equipped and to see fewer patients so that I can go home and take care of my family.

Sentence structure and vocabulary issues (IDs 26 and 13): 'Adventures plan' is incorrect; likely meant 'My plan' or 'My future plan'. 'Bigger place to get a better, bigger hospital' is redundant. 'Patients that are not too much' is ungrammatical — use 'fewer patients'. Rewrite to be concise and grammatically correct. Suggestion: use 'fewer' for countable nouns and avoid redundancy; 'larger hospital' and 'better equipped' clarify meaning.