Study— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: 回答要更直接并避免重复。可以用一两句清楚说明身份和未来计划，减少冗余（如“high school”重复出现）。同时在补充细节时加入连接词使逻辑更流畅，例如说明为什么想考证或哪些证书。

Ejemplo: I'm a third-year high school student. Next year I plan to go to university and study for professional certificates, such as TOEFL or programming certifications, to improve my career prospects.

Sugerencia: 注意时态一致性并简化句子。开头用现在时表明仍在就读（if applicable），并用连接词说明学校特色如何影响学习经历。具体说明竞赛类型或频率会更有说服力。

Ejemplo: I study at Washington High School in Taichung. Because the school focuses on English and social studies, we frequently take part in debates and essay competitions, which helps improve my language and critical thinking skills.

Sugerencia: 避免口语化的词汇（如“super”）和冗长从句。先给出直接评价，然后用一两个具体例子支撑，例如老师的辅导或竞赛成果。使用连接词使句子更紧凑。

Ejemplo: Yes, it's a great place to study. The teachers provide regular guidance and organize competitions in English and social studies, which motivate students to improve and gain practical experience.

Sugerencia: 注意语法（如主谓一致和重复词汇），并将原因条理化。提出具体的改进建议（例如清洁、菜单多样化或更换供应商），用连接词列出原因和期望结果。

Ejemplo: I would like the school to renovate the cafeteria because it's old and has hygiene issues, such as poor cooking oil quality. If the cafeteria were upgraded and menus diversified, students could eat healthier and pay more affordable prices.

Sugerencia: 句子应更简洁并修正语法错误（如“competitive in”应接具体对象）。使用连接词说明手段和目的，具体列举希望参加的竞赛或证书会更有说服力。

Ejemplo: I plan to enter more English competitions and obtain professional certificates like IELTS or subject-specific diplomas, so I can strengthen my university applications and increase my chances of admission.

× I am currently a high school student in my third year of high school. Next year, I wish to pursue higher education in the university and gain more professional certificates.

✓ I am currently a high school student in my third year. Next year, I wish to pursue higher education at a university and gain more professional certificates.

错误类型：现在时/词语搭配问题（近似于“Present tense issue”及介词用法）。说明：句子“in my third year of high school”虽可，但重复“high school”显得冗余，简化为“in my third year”更自然；此外短语“in the university”在这里应使用介词短语“at a university”表示进入某所大学学习。建议：避免重复信息，使用习惯搭配“at a university”。

× I studied in the high school named Washington High School, which is located in Taichung.

✓ I study at Washington High School, which is located in Taichung.

错误类型：时态错误（Past tense issue）。说明：面试问的是现在是否在学校读书，应使用一般现在时而不是过去时，所以“studied”不合适；此外常用表达为“study at [school name]”。建议：对现在仍在进行的动作使用一般现在时，且使用介词“at”搭配学校名称。

× Our school specialized in English and social studies, so there's a lot of competitions about these two subjects.

✓ Our school specializes in English and social studies, so there are a lot of competitions in these two subjects.

错误类型：量词/主谓一致及介词用法（属于Incorrect use of quantifiers 和 Present tense issue 的组合）。说明：如果指现在的情况，动词应为“specializes”；“there's”是“there is”的缩写，用在可数复数名词前应为“there are”；“competitions about”搭配不自然，应为“competitions in”。建议：把动词改为现在时，使用“there are”，并用习惯搭配“competitions in”。

× Yes, it is because the teachers are super friendly and supportive and our school also helped a lot of competitions in English and social studies which allows us to study more and keep ourselves more competitive.

✓ Yes, it is, because the teachers are very friendly and supportive, and our school also hosts a lot of competitions in English and social studies, which allow us to study more and keep ourselves competitive.

错误类型：现在时/动词形式及主谓一致（Present tense issue 与主谓一致）。说明：若描述现在情况，应使用现在时“hosts”而非“helped”；“super”在正式口语或书写中建议改为“very”；从句“which allows us”所指复数主语“competitions”需用复数动词“allow”；“keep ourselves more competitive”中“more competitive”冗余，可改为“keep ourselves competitive”。建议：使用现在时态，注意主谓一致，用更自然的表达如“hosts”和“allow”。

× I would like my school to renovate its cafeteria because it have too many problems, it's too old and it have problems with their cooking oils.

✓ I would like my school to renovate its cafeteria because it has too many problems: it's too old and it has problems with its cooking oil.

错误类型：主谓一致和代词一致（Subject-verb agreement errors 与代词使用）。说明：主语“it”（指代学校或食堂）后动词应为单数形式“has”而不是“have”；“their cooking oils”中代词“their”与单数“cafeteria/ school”不一致，应改为“its cooking oil”；“cooking oils”复数不自然，改为“cooking oil”或“the cooking oil”。建议：确保单数主语用动词单数形式，代词保持一致，精简并使用自然的名词形式。

× So I really wish my school can can provide us more affordable and healthier meals.

✓ So I really wish my school could provide us with more affordable and healthier meals.

错误类型：情态动词使用（Modal verb usage）。说明：重复“can can”是错误；在表达愿望或希望时，常用“wish + would/could”更礼貌和合适，所以改为“wish ... could”；另外要在“provide us with”中加“with”。建议：删除重复词，使用固定结构“wish ... could”，并使用正确搭配“provide ... with”。

× For my upcoming study plan, I would like to participate in more competitions in English or even gain some more professional certificates in order to make myself competitive in and it can lead me to get into an ideal university.

✓ For my upcoming study plan, I would like to participate in more competitions in English and even gain some more professional certificates in order to make myself more competitive and help me get into an ideal university.

错误类型：现在时/句子结构和搭配问题（Present tense issue 与 Sentence structure errors）。说明：原句中“in and it can lead me to get into”结构混乱，多余的“in”和“it”使句子不通顺；应使用并列结构“make myself more competitive and help me get into...”。此外“some more professional certificates”可接受，但表达“more competitive”需要“more”。建议：重构句子以保持连贯，删除多余词，使用“help me get into”或“lead me to get into”但避免同时使用两者。