Study— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be more concise and confident. Start with a direct topic sentence ("I'm a final-year university student") and avoid filler words like "well" and "I mean." Keep it one clear sentence and, if needed, add one short supporting detail (subject or university).

Ejemplo: I'm a final-year university student, studying computer science at the National University.

Sugerencia: Use correct grammar and a clear structure: give a direct answer then one or two specific supporting details. Avoid hesitation phrases. Fix verb forms and agreement ("I usually study at university"; "it has a large library"). Use linking words if adding details ("and", "also").

Ejemplo: I study at the City University. It has a large campus and a well-equipped library, so I often go there to read and work on assignments.

Sugerencia: Answer directly and avoid repetition. Begin with a clear opinion sentence ("Yes, it is a very good place to study") and follow with specific examples using correct grammar and linking words ("for example", "also"). Keep to two or three sentences maximum.

Ejemplo: Yes, it is an excellent place to study because there are many shared devices, such as laptops and tablets for students. Also, the quiet study areas make concentration much easier.

Sugerencia: Be clearer and avoid contradictory or awkward phrasing. Start with a direct response ("No, I wouldn't like many changes") then explain one or two concrete reasons with correct conditionals ("If they changed things, I might not find the books and devices I use"). Use linking words like "because" and "for example."

Ejemplo: No, I wouldn't like many changes because if the library reorganised its collection I might not find the books and devices I regularly use. For example, moving popular resources to a new location would make studying less convenient for me.

Sugerencia: Give a clear plan and specific details. Start with a concise topic sentence ("I plan to do a master's in [field]") then explain why with concrete benefits and correct word forms ("advanced knowledge", "professional courses are important"). Use linking words to connect ideas.

Ejemplo: I plan to pursue a master's degree in my major to gain advanced knowledge and specialised skills. This additional training will help me qualify for professional roles and improve my career prospects.

× Well, I'm a student, I mean my last year of university.

✓ Well, I'm a student; I mean I'm in my last year of university.

Missing verb phrase 'I'm in' for location/time expression. Use present simple 'I'm in my last year' to indicate current status. Include 'in' to show being in a year of study and add verb for clarity.

× Well, I usually starting in university, you know, our university is big and have and has a library, so it's a good place for me to study.

✓ Well, I usually study at university. You know, our university is big and has a library, so it's a good place for me to study.

Multiple issues: 'usually starting' is incorrect verb form; use present simple 'usually study' for habitual action (Present tense issue). Use preposition 'at' with 'study' (Incorrect use of prepositions - but only correct per provided list: present tense). Also subject-verb agreement: 'university... has' not 'have and has' (Subject-verb agreement handled here via correction). Remove redundancy.

× I gave a big yes because there have lots of convenient devices, for example laptops and tablets like these devices for all students.

✓ I gave a big yes because there are lots of convenient devices, for example laptops and tablets available for all students.

Use 'there are' for existence of plural items (There be issue). 'Have' is incorrect after 'there'; use 'are'. Also add 'available' for clarity.

× So I think it's a good place to study.

✓ So I think it's a good place to study.

Sentence is correct; no grammatical change needed. Included to confirm correctness and no past participle error.

× Well, to be honest, not really, because if this place makes some changes I would. I wouldn't find the books or the devices I always used, so maybe it's not easy for me.

✓ Well, to be honest, not really, because if this place made some changes I wouldn't be able to find the books or devices I always use, so it might not be easy for me.

Conditional needs past tense in the if-clause for a hypothetical present situation: 'if this place made some changes' (Modal verb usage and Past tense issue). Use 'I wouldn't be able to' to express inability and change 'used' to 'use' to refer to habitual present usage.

× What are your future study plans?

✓ What are your future study plans?

Question is correct; no change needed.

× Well, I plan to pursue further study about my major.

✓ Well, I plan to pursue further study in my major.

Use preposition 'in' with 'major' (Incorrect use of prepositions categorized under Future tense issue because sentence expresses future plan). 'Pursue further study in my major' is the standard phrasing.

× I believe the advance and knowledge can help me do better later on.

✓ I believe advanced knowledge can help me do better later on.

Use adjective 'advanced' to modify 'knowledge' (Incorrect use of adjectives). 'The advance' is incorrect; 'advanced knowledge' is the correct collocation.

× So I think the professional knowledge and the professional courses is really important.

✓ So I think professional knowledge and professional courses are really important.

Compound subject 'professional knowledge and professional courses' is plural, so use plural verb 'are' (Subject-verb agreement errors). Also remove unnecessary definite articles for natural phrasing.