Study— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Improve grammar, accuracy and clarity; make the answer more natural and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence, correct verb forms and plural/singular nouns, and avoid redundancy. Use one linking phrase to add a brief specific example. Pronunciation not assessed here but ensure clear words like 'non-conformance' and 'components'.

Ejemplo: I work as a supplier quality engineer in PCB manufacturing. I focus on supplier quality control, inspecting incoming components and ensuring they meet specifications. For example, I conduct incoming inspections and raise non-conformance reports when parts fail to meet standards.

Sugerencia: Correct tense and phrasing: use past tense for graduation and a clearer subject-verb structure. Keep it concise and add one linking phrase to connect study to work. Use proper institution name format and fix minor errors.

Ejemplo: I graduated from King Mongkut’s University of Technology North Bangkok with a degree in Industrial Engineering in 2019. Since then I have worked in manufacturing, where I apply what I learned about process improvement.

Sugerencia: Improve grammar (quiet not quite), remove unclear phrasing, and make reasons more specific. Use linking words (however, although) for contrast, and give one concrete detail about the campus environment. Keep within 3–4 sentences.

Ejemplo: Yes, it is a good place to study because the university is outside central Bangkok, so the campus is generally quiet and peaceful. However, there can be heavy traffic during rush hour when commuting. Overall, the calm environment makes it easier to concentrate on studies.

Sugerencia: Clarify the response: the student contradicted with 'Yes, I would like to stay the same.' Use consistent meaning (I wouldn't like changes). Fix grammar (facilities, classrooms), remove unclear and incorrect words ('cruel'), and give one specific improvement if any. Use linking words to connect ideas.

Ejemplo: I wouldn't like major changes because I really like the university and campus. It is easy to get around and has good facilities for studying, such as quiet libraries and modern classrooms. If anything, I would improve access to shops and public transportation on campus.

Sugerencia: Good content and clear reasons. Improve grammar (master's degree, choose → chose or I have chosen), and mention a specific outcome or timeline to be more precise. Use a linking phrase to explain the benefit.

Ejemplo: I plan to apply for a master's degree in Engineering Management at Jurong University. I chose this course because I want to develop my leadership and project-management skills so I can take on managerial roles in engineering within the next few years.

× I perform incoming inspections of supplier component, raise non conformance report when part don't miss standard.

✓ I perform incoming inspections of supplier components and raise non-conformance reports when parts don't meet standards.

The noun forms need to be plural to match 'inspections' and generic references: 'supplier component' -> 'supplier components'; 'non conformance report' -> 'non-conformance reports'; 'part' -> 'parts'; 'standard' -> 'standards'. Also 'don't' agrees with plural 'parts' but verb phrase 'meet standards' is the correct collocation; use 'and' to join coordinated actions. Suggestion: Make nouns plural when referring to them generally and ensure coordinated verbs and nouns agree in number.

× For example, I perform incoming inspections of supplier component, raise non conformance report when part don't miss standard.

✓ For example, I perform incoming inspections of supplier components and raise non-conformance reports when parts don't meet standards.

The original uses 'don't' (do not) with singular context incorrectly in phrasing; after correcting nouns to plural 'don't' is acceptable. If a singular noun were intended, 'doesn't' would be required. Also 'miss' is wrong verb choice; 'meet' is correct. Suggestion: Match verb form to subject number: use doesn't with singular, don't with plural; choose appropriate verb collocations like 'meet standards'.

× I'm graduate from King Monk's University of Technology N Bangkok with a degree in Industrial Engineering.

✓ I graduated from King Mongkut's University of Technology North Bangkok with a degree in Industrial Engineering.

The correct verb is 'graduated' (past tense) rather than 'I'm graduate' and the preposition 'from' is fine but the institution name was incorrect; 'King Mongkut's University of Technology North Bangkok' is the proper name. Use past tense 'graduated' to indicate completion in 2019. Suggestion: Use the past tense 'graduated' for completed education and check proper noun spelling and word order for institution names.

× I finished in 2019 and since then I have been working in manufacturing where I apply what I learned about process improvement.

✓ I finished in 2019, and since then I have been working in manufacturing where I apply what I learned about process improvement.

Comma added after '2019' for clarity; verb tenses are acceptable: 'finished' (simple past) for completion and 'have been working' (present perfect continuous) to describe ongoing action since then. No major tense error, only punctuation. Suggestion: Use punctuation to separate clauses for readability; keep past for completed events and present perfect for ongoing situations.

× Yes, it is a good place to study because my university is not in the center of Bangkok, so it is generally quite.

✓ Yes, it is a good place to study because my university is not in the center of Bangkok, so it is generally quiet.

The word 'quite' is an adverb meaning 'to a degree' and is incorrect here; the intended adjective is 'quiet' to describe the place. Use 'quiet' to modify the noun 'place' (or implied 'area'). Suggestion: Choose 'quiet' when describing a calm place; use 'quite' only to modify adjectives or adverbs (e.g., 'quite busy').

× Occasionally there is heavy traffic during rush hour, but it is not always busy which may commuting.

✓ Occasionally there is heavy traffic during rush hour, but it is not always busy, which makes commuting easier.

The clause 'which may commuting' is ungrammatical. Use a relative clause with a verb: 'which makes commuting easier' explains the effect. Also add a comma before 'which'. Suggestion: Use complete clauses after 'which' (which + verb) and ensure the verb expresses the intended meaning.

× Yes, I would like to stay the same.

✓ Yes, I would like it to stay the same.

The original omits the object 'it' after 'like' and needs the infinitive 'to stay' with a subject. 'I would like it to stay the same' correctly expresses desire about the place. Suggestion: Use 'would like' + object + infinitive to express a desire about something (would like it to ...).

× I really like my university and the campus area because it's easy to get around and there are good facility for studying such as quiet libraries and modern classroom.

✓ I really like my university and the campus area because it's easy to get around and there are good facilities for studying such as quiet libraries and modern classrooms.

'Facility' and 'classroom' are singular but refer to multiple items, so plural 'facilities' and 'classrooms' are required. 'Good' properly modifies the plural noun. Ensure noun number matches the intended meaning. Suggestion: Use plural nouns when referring to multiple items or general resources.

× For example. The campus is cruel to shop and public transportation.

✓ For example, the campus is close to shops and public transportation.

The original has several issues: a period after 'For example' should be a comma, 'cruel' is a wrong word (likely intended 'close'), 'shop' should be plural 'shops', and the phrase should read 'close to shops and public transportation'. Suggestion: Use 'close to' to indicate proximity and ensure correct word choice and punctuation after introductory phrases.

× I plan to apply for a master degree in Engineering Management at Jurong University.

✓ I plan to apply for a master's degree in Engineering Management at Jurong University.

Use the noun phrase 'a master's degree' (with apostrophe-s) rather than 'a master degree'. The future intention 'plan to apply' is correct. Also ensure university name is correct if needed. Suggestion: Use 'master's degree' for the qualification and keep 'plan to' for future intentions.

× I choose this course because I want to develop my leadership and project management skills so I can take on managerial roles in engineering.

✓ I chose this course because I want to develop my leadership and project management skills so I can take on managerial roles in engineering.

The student is describing a past decision to select the course; therefore the past tense 'chose' should be used instead of the present 'choose'. Suggestion: Use past tense for actions completed in the past (I chose) and present/future tenses for current intentions or future plans.