Study— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be more concise and structured. Start with a clear topic sentence (e.g., "I’m not currently working; I recently finished my bachelor’s degree."). Avoid hesitation words (uh, um) and unclear phrasing. Use one or two supporting details (what course you’re taking and job plans) with linking words for coherence. Keep responses within 3–4 sentences.

Ejemplo: I’m not working at the moment; I recently completed a bachelor’s degree in medical science. Currently I’m taking an English speaking course to improve my fluency, and I’m planning to look for a job related to my interests after I finish the course.

Sugerencia: Answer directly with clear location and institution names. Avoid repetition and filler words. Use linking words to connect past and present study locations. Give one specific detail about the current class or why you enjoy it.

Ejemplo: I studied at a well-known government college in my hometown, Tarantal. Now I attend an English-speaking center in the same town, and I enjoy the interactive lessons because they help me practice conversation and pronunciation.

Sugerencia: Provide a concise opinion with specific reasons. Use linking words (for example, because, therefore) and avoid repeating words like "deeply." Include one or two clear supporting details (facilities, teachers, resources).

Ejemplo: Yes, it’s an excellent place to study because the library has many up-to-date textbooks and the teachers are supportive. For example, tutors offer one-on-one help which makes it easier to understand difficult topics.

Sugerencia: Be specific about the change you want and give a clear reason. Start with a direct statement (e.g., "Yes, I would change the parking area") then explain how the change would help students. Avoid vague phrases and filler words.

Ejemplo: Yes, I would improve the college parking area because it becomes overcrowded and unsafe. Adding more parking spaces and clearer traffic signs would reduce congestion and make it easier for students to arrive on time.

Sugerencia: State your plan clearly with a logical sequence and specific reasons. Use linking words (first, then, because) and avoid hesitation. Mention the country or field you are interested in and what you aim to study during MSc and PhD to make the answer more concrete.

Ejemplo: My plan is to do a master’s degree abroad, preferably in the UK or Canada, to gain exposure to different approaches in medical science. After completing the master’s, I intend to pursue a PhD focusing on a specific topic in clinical research to develop expertise and improve my career prospects.

× So I recently completed my bachelors in medical science and, uh, right now I'm pursuing I was speaking course to enhance my English speaking fluency, but I'm not working.

✓ So I recently completed my bachelor's in medical science and right now I'm pursuing a speaking course to enhance my English speaking fluency, but I'm not working.

The sentence mixes past and present references awkwardly and has incorrect noun forms. Use 'bachelor's' with an apostrophe for degree and singular form; 'pursuing a speaking course' is the correct present continuous phrase. Remove 'I was' which incorrectly shifts tense and disrupts meaning. Suggestion: Use consistent tense and correct noun forms: 'I recently completed my bachelor's ... and right now I'm pursuing a speaking course.'

× I am looking forward to work in the place where I am interested.

✓ I am looking forward to working in a place that interests me.

After 'looking forward to' the verb must be in -ing form. Also use 'a place that interests me' for natural phrasing and correct adjective use. Suggestion: Use gerund after 'looking forward to' and simplify phrasing.

× So yeah, I am not a student either. I'm.

✓ So yeah, I am not a student either.

The sentence ends with an incomplete fragment 'I'm.' Remove the fragment to complete the thought. Suggestion: Avoid sentence fragments; finish or delete incomplete clauses.

× So I used to study in very famous government college, uh, that is located in my hometown that is Tarantal.

✓ I used to study at a very famous government college located in my hometown, Tarantal.

Use 'used to' with base verb 'study' is fine but use preposition 'at' for institutions. Include articles ('a very famous') and place name offset by commas. Remove redundant 'that is' and streamline. Suggestion: Use 'at' for places of study and avoid redundant clauses.

× And right now, if you're going to ask me about where I am going, where I am pursuing my English speaking classes.

✓ And right now, if you ask me where I am taking my English speaking classes,

Use simple present 'ask' for a general present condition; 'going to ask' is unnecessary. 'Taking classes' or 'attending classes' is idiomatic rather than 'pursuing my classes.' Also combine clauses to avoid fragment. Suggestion: Use concise present-tense phrasing: 'If you ask me where I am taking my classes.'

× So it's basically a center, a sub center in my hometown and I am having a great time explain exploring.

✓ It's basically a sub-center in my hometown and I am having a great time exploring.

Remove redundant 'center, a sub center' and correct verb form 'exploring' instead of 'explain exploring.' 'Having a great time exploring' is the correct collocation. Suggestion: Use correct verb forms and avoid redundant nouns.

× Absolutely. From my perspective, it is a very good place to study things that you want to, that's thing that you really have interested in and it's a very good place to explore and, uh, deeply, uh, you know, search about the topics deeply, get to know about the subjects that you have chosen and it is very good place to interview.

✓ Absolutely. From my perspective, it is a very good place to study the things you want to, the things you are really interested in. It's a great place to explore and to research topics in depth, get to know the subjects you have chosen, and it is also a very good place to prepare for interviews.

Pronoun and noun reference errors: use 'the things you are really interested in' not 'that's thing that you really have interested in.' Avoid repeating 'deeply' and use 'in depth' or 'to research' correctly. 'Search about' is incorrect; use 'research' or 'learn about.' Also add 'prepare for interviews' for clarity. Suggestion: Use correct pronoun references and idiomatic verbs like 'research' and 'prepare for'.

× Although I love the place where I used to study but there are certain of things or places that I need to get instructed and umm to get transformed.

✓ Although I love the place where I used to study, there are certain things and areas that need to be improved.

Do not use both 'Although' and 'but' together; choose one. 'Certain of things' is incorrect—use 'certain things.' 'Need to get instructed and to get transformed' is unidiomatic; use 'need to be improved.' Suggestion: Avoid redundant conjunctions and use passive 'need to be improved' or active 'they need improvement.'

× Basically it's the parking side of my college where in which I want some changes like there are numerous of students that come to come visit and study about the the topics.

✓ Basically it's the parking area of my college where I want some changes, because numerous students come to visit and study various topics.

Use 'parking area' or 'parking lot' not 'parking side.' 'Where in which' is redundant; use 'where.' 'Numerous of students' is incorrect—use 'numerous students.' 'Study about the topics' is incorrect—use 'study various topics' or 'study the topics.' Also remove duplicate 'the the.' Suggestion: Use correct prepositions and collocations: 'parking area,' 'numerous students,' 'study various topics.'

× So my future study plan includes the masters.

✓ So my future study plans include a master's degree.

Use plural 'plans' to match 'future' and 'include' (present simple). 'Masters' should be 'master's degree' with apostrophe. Also 'include' agrees with plural 'plans.' Suggestion: Use correct noun forms and subject-verb agreement: 'plans include a master's degree.'

× I want to do my master's in, in abroad so that I can get a new opportunity to, uh, you know, explore the things and, uh, get to know about the subjects that I have chosen from another perspective, from another country's perspective.

✓ I want to do my master's abroad so that I can get new opportunities to explore and learn about the subjects I have chosen from another country's perspective.

Do not use 'in abroad'; use 'abroad.' 'Get a new opportunity' better as 'get new opportunities.' 'Get to know about' is unidiomatic; use 'learn about.' Remove filler phrases and streamline. Suggestion: Use 'abroad' without preposition and prefer plural 'opportunities' if general.

× So, and then I will, uh, do the PhD into the specific topic.

✓ Then I will do a PhD in a specific topic.

'Do the PhD into the specific topic' is awkward. Use 'do a PhD in a specific topic' or 'pursue a PhD in a specific field.' Use 'pursue' for formality. Suggestion: Use 'pursue a PhD in [field]' for natural academic phrasing.