Study— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be more concise and correct grammar. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific details. Correct article use (“an English class”), verb forms and avoid run-on sentences by using linking words or punctuation.

Ejemplo: I'm a student at a language school. I'm taking English classes to prepare for traveling next year, and most of my lessons are taught in English, so I'm improving my speaking and listening skills.

Sugerencia: Give a clear, direct answer then add one or two specific supporting details. Use correct phrases (e.g., “in the central area,” “commute takes about an hour and a half”) and avoid unclear or contradictory comments. Use linking words like “and” or “so” correctly.

Ejemplo: I study at a language school in central Tokyo. The commute takes about an hour and a half, but I usually listen to music on the train, so the journey feels shorter.

Sugerencia: Answer directly and then provide concrete reasons. Fix grammar errors (avoid contractions like 'cause in formal exam, use because), remove repetition and use accurate expressions (e.g., “many foreign students”).

Ejemplo: Yes, it is a good place to study because many students there want to study abroad. The school is designed for exchange preparation and there are many foreign students, which helps me practice English.

Sugerencia: Be precise about the change and give a clear reason. Use correct collocations (e.g., “the study environment is too hot/cold/noisy” or “the air conditioning”) and link cause and effect with words like “so” or “because.”

Ejemplo: If I could change something, I would improve the air conditioning in all the classrooms because better temperature control would make it easier to concentrate during long classes.

Sugerencia: Provide a clear topic sentence about your plans, then give specific details and reasons. Use correct prepositions and verb forms (e.g., “go to Germany on an exchange program,” “study environmental science”). Avoid informal language like 'wanna' in the exam.

Ejemplo: I haven't decided exactly yet, but I hope to go to Germany on a study-exchange program. Next year I plan to study environmental science there because I want to learn about sustainable practices and research opportunities.

× I'm a student at the language school at the moment I'm taking a English classes to prepare for traveling next year and most of my lesson are taught in English.

✓ I'm a student at a language school. At the moment I'm taking English classes to prepare for traveling next year, and most of my lessons are taught in English.

Use articles correctly: 'a language school' (not 'the' because not specific), 'taking English classes' (no article before plural 'English classes'), and noun agreement 'lessons' (plural) to match 'most of my'. Split into two sentences for clarity and add comma before coordinating conjunction.

× I'm a student at the language school at the moment I'm taking a English classes to prepare for traveling next year and most of my lesson are taught in English.

✓ I'm a student at a language school. At the moment I'm taking English classes to prepare for traveling next year, and most of my lessons are taught in English.

Subject-verb agreement: 'most of my lessons are' requires plural 'lessons' to agree with 'are'. Also 'a English' is incorrect article use (see Article errors).

× I study at a language school in Tokyo in the major area and the commute takes about an hour and a half, which is a little bit wrong, but I usually listen music on my way so a few with shorter.

✓ I study at a language school in Tokyo in the metropolitan area, and the commute takes about an hour and a half, which is a bit long. I usually listen to music on my way, so it feels a bit shorter.

Preposition and word choice errors: 'metropolitan area' fits better than 'major area'. Use 'listen to music' (need preposition 'to'). Use 'a bit long' not 'wrong'. 'So a few with shorter' is ungrammatical; replace with 'so it feels a bit shorter'.

× I study at a language school in Tokyo in the major area and the commute takes about an hour and a half, which is a little bit wrong, but I usually listen music on my way so a few with shorter.

✓ I study at a language school in Tokyo in the metropolitan area, and the commute takes about an hour and a half, which is a bit long. I usually listen to music on my way, so it feels a bit shorter.

Use appropriate adjectives/adverbs: 'a bit long' expresses length of commute. 'A little bit wrong' is wrong collocation. 'A few with shorter' is meaningless; use 'feels a bit shorter'.

× Yes, of course it is a good place to study 'cause it has many people who want to study abroad. It is my school is designed for those who want to study abroad and also it has a many foreigners it.

✓ Yes, of course it is a good place to study because many people there want to study abroad. My school is designed for those who want to study abroad, and it also has many foreign teachers/students.

Article and word order errors: remove informal ''cause' and use 'because'. 'Many people who want' is fine but place 'there' for clarity. 'It is my school is designed' is duplicated; use 'My school is designed'. 'A many foreigners' is ungrammatical; use 'many foreigners' and clarify whether 'foreign teachers' or 'foreign students'.

× Yes, of course it is a good place to study 'cause it has many people who want to study abroad. It is my school is designed for those who want to study abroad and also it has a many foreigners it.

✓ Yes, of course it is a good place to study because many people there want to study abroad. My school is designed for those who want to study abroad, and it also has many foreign students.

Fix sentence structure: remove redundant words, correct word order, and make parallel structure 'My school is designed... and it also has...'. Ensure noun phrase 'many foreign students' is grammatical.

× If I had to choose, I would say the place where study is too hard. So I wish there was better conditioning in all the classrooms. It would make it easier to concentrate during long classes.

✓ If I had to choose, I would say the place where I study is too hot/noisy/strict. So I wish there were better air conditioning in all the classrooms. It would make it easier to concentrate during long classes.

Present tense and verb omission: 'place where study' needs subject 'I study'. Use subjunctive 'were' for wishes about present situations ('I wish there were ...'). 'Conditioning' should be 'air conditioning' for clarity. Choose appropriate adjective (hot/noisy) to replace 'too hard' which is unclear.

× I have not decided yet technically, but I want to go Germany through study exchange programs because next year I plan to go to study abroad to run environment, so I wanna go Germany.

✓ I have not decided yet, but I want to go to Germany through a study exchange program because next year I plan to study abroad to learn about the environment, so I want to go to Germany.

Future/infinitive and article errors: Use 'go to Germany' (add 'to'). Use 'a study exchange program' (article). 'Study abroad to run environment' is wrong; likely 'learn about the environment'. Use 'want to' instead of informal 'wanna'. Ensure parallel structure and correct verb forms.