Study— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Make the answer direct, grammatically correct and natural. Start with a clear topic sentence (I am currently working / I am not studying), correct tense and remove repetition. Add one brief reason using a linking word (because/so) to enrich content.

Ejemplo: I am currently working. I decided to stop studying because I wanted to find a stable job to support myself, so I left college last year.

Sugerencia: Answer the location clearly and concisely, use correct tense and avoid repetition. Give a specific, coherent detail about distance or travel time using linking words (and / which). Fix unclear time expressions.

Ejemplo: I studied at Pateros Technological College, which is about a 30-minute commute from here.

Sugerencia: Give a direct opinion then support it with specific reasons. Use linking words (because / for example) and avoid vague praise. Provide one concrete benefit or example rather than repeating 'free'.

Ejemplo: Yes, I think it's a good place to study because tuition is free, so students from low-income families can access higher education; for example, many of my classmates could afford books and classes without worrying about fees.

Sugerencia: Give a direct answer and a brief reason. If saying no, explain why briefly using linking words (because / so) to add depth. Avoid unclear phrasing like 'where I started right now'.

Ejemplo: No, I wouldn't want major changes because the teaching quality and support are good, and the free tuition helps many students succeed.

Sugerencia: Provide a concise, grammatically correct plan with clear steps and correct vocabulary. Use linking words (then/after that) and correct plurals and verb forms. Clarify unclear terms (e.g., 'UH booking based Irish' and 'PPO industry') or replace them with accurate descriptions.

Ejemplo: I plan to complete a two-year college program in business administration, and after I graduate I would like to work in the production planning and operations (PPO) industry.

× I decided to stop studying to to find a stable job.

✓ I decided to stop studying to find a stable job.

Type IDs matched: 6 (Present tense issue) and 26 (Sentence structure errors). The sentence contains a repeated word 'to' which is a typographical/structure error. Use a single infinitive marker 'to' before 'find'. Suggestion: remove the duplicate 'to' and keep the past tense 'decided' because the decision occurred in the past.

× I studied, I studied at Pateros Technological College and it took 2020 to 30 minutes from here to there.

✓ I studied at Pateros Technological College and it took 20 to 30 minutes to get there from here.

Type ID: 5 (Past tense issue) and 26 (Sentence structure errors). The original repeats 'I studied' and misstates the travel time '2020' which looks like a typo. Use past tense 'studied' once. Express duration as '20 to 30 minutes' and use 'to get there from here' or 'to travel there from here' for clear structure. Suggestion: remove repetition, correct the number, and reorder the phrase for natural English.

× Yes, definitely, because there is no tuition fee and it is completely free. It is the best example of university.

✓ Yes, definitely, because there is no tuition fee and it is completely free. It is the best example of a university.

Type ID: 22 (Article errors) and 17 (Incorrect use of the definite article). The phrase 'example of university' needs an article before 'university'—use 'a university' to indicate one institution. Suggestion: insert the indefinite article 'a' to make the noun countable and natural.

× No, I don't want to make any changes where I started right now.

✓ No, I don't want to make any changes to the place where I started right now.

Type ID: 26 (Sentence structure errors) and 11 (Incorrect use of prepositions). The original omits a necessary preposition after 'changes'. Use 'changes to the place' and keep 'where I started' to indicate location. Alternatively, if the meaning is current, consider 'where I am working/studying now.' Suggestion: add 'to the place' or rephrase 'to the place where I started.'

× My future study plans is a two years of college and UH booking based Irish and after that I would like to find a job like PPO industry.

✓ My future study plans are two years of college in UH, focusing on Irish, and after that I would like to find a job in the PPO industry.

Type IDs: 27 (Subject-verb agreement errors), 26 (Sentence structure errors), 11 (Incorrect use of prepositions). 'Plans' is plural so use 'are' not 'is'. 'Two years of college' should not have the article 'a' and should be written 'two years of college' or 'a two-year college program.' 'UH booking based Irish' is unclear; likely intended 'at UH, focusing on Irish' or 'a program at UH based on Irish.' Also use 'a job in the PPO industry' to use correct preposition. Suggestion: make verb agree with plural subject, remove incorrect article, clarify the program description, and use 'in' before industry.