Study— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Câu trả lời nên ngắn gọn, trực tiếp vào câu hỏi, tránh lặp từ và ngữ pháp chưa chính xác. Nên dùng một câu chủ đề rõ ràng (I am a student...), sau đó thêm 1–2 câu hỗ trợ với thông tin cụ thể về ngành học hoặc mục tiêu, dùng liên từ hợp lý và sửa lỗi ngữ pháp (ví dụ: 'majoring in English' thay vì 'English Language' nếu muốn).

Ejemplo: I am a student. I study at the University of Foreign Languages, majoring in English. I am also developing my soft skills, such as communication and teamwork, to prepare for my future career.

Sugerencia: Câu trả lời hiện tại lộn xộn, có nhiều lỗi phát âm/ghi chép và cấu trúc. Nên trả lời trực tiếp nêu tên hoặc loại trường, rồi thêm chi tiết cụ thể về khoảng cách và phương tiện đi lại, sử dụng liên từ để mạch lạc. Tránh lặp từ và sửa cấu trúc 'it takes me about 5 hours to get there by...'.

Ejemplo: I study at the University of Foreign Languages, which is quite far from my home. It takes me about five hours to get there by sleeper bus, so I usually travel overnight to save time.

Sugerencia: Cần trả lời rõ ràng với câu chủ đề (Yes/No + lý do). Tránh nói lẫn lộn, lặp từ và sự ngập ngừng. Nên liệt kê 2–3 lý do cụ thể với liên từ như 'because' hoặc 'also', và dùng từ vựng chính xác (e.g. 'good facilities' thay vì 'free facilities' nếu không chắc).

Ejemplo: Yes, it is a good place to study because the teachers are friendly and supportive. The learning environment is comfortable, the university provides high-quality education, and the library has useful facilities for students.

Sugerencia: Cần đưa ra đề xuất rõ ràng với cấu trúc câu mạch lạc: nêu thay đổi bạn muốn, rồi giải thích lý do. Tránh dùng từ sai (ví dụ 'commuters' không đúng ở đây) và ngôi xưng không phù hợp ('you were'). Dùng cụm từ chính xác như 'better transport', 'a larger library' và 'more extracurricular activities'.

Ejemplo: I would like the university to improve some facilities, for example better transport options for students and a larger library. I would also appreciate more extracurricular activities, such as clubs and workshops, to help students develop practical skills.

Sugerencia: Trả lời nên bắt đầu bằng mục tiêu rõ ràng (I hope to become an English teacher) rồi mô tả các bước cụ thể bạn đang làm để đạt mục tiêu. Tránh lặp từ và phi ngữ pháp (a English → an English) và liệt kê các hoạt động rõ ràng, có liên kết bằng từ nối như 'so' hoặc 'therefore'.

Ejemplo: I hope to become an English teacher in the future, so I practise all four skills regularly: listening, speaking, reading and writing. For example, I listen to podcasts, attend speaking clubs, read academic texts and write short essays to improve my teaching ability.

× I'm a student at the moment, I'm thoroughly studying at the University of Foreign Languages, majoring in English Language.

✓ I'm a student at the moment. I'm studying at the University of Foreign Languages, majoring in English.

The original contains comma splicing and redundant adverb 'thoroughly' which is unnatural here. Separate into two sentences to fix structure and flow. Use 'studying' for present continuous and 'English' without 'Language' after 'majoring in' is sufficient. Suggestion: break long clauses, remove unnecessary words.

× So I am preparing for the soft skills.

✓ I am preparing by developing my soft skills.

'Preparing for the soft skills' is awkward and ungrammatical. Use 'preparing by developing' or 'preparing for a career by improving my soft skills'. Ensure 'soft skills' is plural and phrase expresses the intended action.

× I study at a a university in is our far from my house so it all takes takes me about 5 hours to get there by a sleeper business.

✓ I study at a university that is far from my house, so it takes me about five hours to get there by sleeper bus.

Many problems: repeated words ('a a', 'takes takes'), wrong word choice ('is our'), wrong noun ('business' should be 'bus'), and run-on structure. Correct by removing duplicates, using a relative clause 'that is far from my house', spelling out 'five' or keeping numeral consistent, and using 'sleeper bus'.

× That I tassel the teachers are friendly, as positive as the learning environment is a quite comfortable display, have a high quality education and and uh, free facilities at the library library.

✓ I feel that the teachers are friendly, the learning environment is quite comfortable, the education is high quality, and there are free facilities at the library.

Original has many word-choice and repetition issues ('tassel', 'as positive as', duplicated 'and', 'library library'). Use 'I feel that' or 'I think that' for opinion, keep parallel structure for list items, use 'there are' for facilities and remove duplicates. Ensure adjectives and nouns are correctly ordered ('high quality education').

× Uh, Thus I would attend the school supervisor modern facilities such as better commuters and larger library.

✓ I would ask the school supervisors to provide modern facilities such as better computers and a larger library.

Original misuses 'Thus', wrong verbs ('attend' incorrect), wrong noun 'commuters' instead of 'computers', and missing articles. Use 'ask' or 'request' and plural/singular forms correctly. Ensure subject and verb agree.

× It would also be great if you were more extra extracurricular activities for students uh.

✓ It would also be great if there were more extracurricular activities for students.

'More extra' is redundant; use 'more' or 'extra' but not both. Also 'you were' is inappropriate – use 'there were' to refer to availability. Keep 'extracurricular activities' plural.

× I hope to become a English teacher in the future, so I I always try to run practical such as listening, listening, listening, reading, speaking and writing skills.

✓ I hope to become an English teacher in the future, so I always try to do practical exercises for listening, reading, speaking, and writing skills.

Use 'an' before a vowel sound: 'an English teacher'. Remove duplicate 'I' and use appropriate verb 'do' or 'practice' instead of 'run'. 'Practical' needs a noun like 'exercises' or 'practice activities'. List skills in parallel form and remove repeated 'listening'.

× Umm in addition, I I.

✓ In addition, I also study by attending extra classes and practicing regularly.

Original is incomplete and contains duplicated 'I I'. Provide a complete sentence that fits context: state additional actions. Avoid filler 'Umm' in formal answers and remove duplicates.