Study— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Make the answer slightly longer with a clear topic sentence and one brief supporting detail. Use correct word forms and avoid redundancy. For example, say your grade and one detail about your studies or schedule.

Ejemplo: I'm a student in Grade 9 at a local high school. I study a broad range of subjects, and I usually spend about two hours each day on homework to keep up with my classes.

Sugerencia: Provide a clear, natural reason why you enjoy studying there, and correct the grammar and word choice (e.g., "mentally" is incorrect here). Keep it concise: topic sentence + one specific supporting detail using a linking word.

Ejemplo: I study at Iban National High School. I enjoy it because the atmosphere is friendly and supportive, so I feel motivated to learn and take part in extracurricular activities.

Sugerencia: Combine the short sentences into one coherent response, fix subject-verb agreement, and give a specific example to support your opinion. Use a linking word to contrast positives and negatives.

Ejemplo: Yes, it's a very good place to study because most teachers and students are kind; however, some students can be unfriendly, which occasionally makes group work difficult.

Sugerencia: Be specific and use correct phrasing. State one clear change and explain why with a brief reason. Avoid unclear words like "favorite design" and capitalize only proper nouns.

Ejemplo: Yes, I would like the school to improve classroom ventilation and paint rooms in lighter colors because the current decor feels dark and a bit suffocating, which affects concentration.

Sugerencia: Give a concise topic sentence about your plans and then add one specific detail or reason. Correct grammar (singular/plural, remove repetitions) and try to sound positive about future steps.

Ejemplo: My main plan is to finish high school and then go on to college to study a subject I enjoy. After college, I hope to find a job related to my studies and keep learning new skills.

× I'm a student currently in grade 9.

✓ I'm currently a grade 9 student.

Word order is awkward. Placing 'currently' before 'a grade 9 student' sounds more natural in English. Suggestion: Use natural word order: 'I'm currently a grade 9 student.'

× I study at Iban National High School and I've been enjoying my life there since I am mentally.

✓ I study at Iban National High School and I've been enjoying my life there a lot.

The clause 'since I am mentally' is ungrammatical and unclear. 'Since' requires a time point or period; 'a lot' expresses enjoyment. Suggestion: Remove the incorrect 'since I am mentally' and use 'a lot' or specify a time, e.g. 'since I joined.'

× The teachers is kind, the students are kind, but some are not.

✓ The teachers are kind, the students are kind, but some are not.

Subject-verb agreement: 'teachers' is plural, so the verb must be 'are' not 'is'. Suggestion: Match plural subjects with plural verbs: 'teachers are.'

× Yes, they should Polish all the room more and don't have favorite design because it's suffocating.

✓ Yes, they should polish all the rooms more and not have a favourite design because it's suffocating.

Multiple issues: 'should' + base verb is correct but 'Polish' should be lowercase; 'all the room' is singular while meaning plural (rooms) — this is a singular/plural issue handled here by correcting phrasing; 'don't have' should be 'not have' to follow 'should' structure; 'favorite design' needs an article 'a'; 'favourite' spelling adjusted to British English (optional). Suggestion: Use 'should' + base verb, ensure noun number matches ('rooms'), and use 'not' instead of 'don't' after modal constructions: 'they should polish all the rooms more and not have a favourite design.'

× I don't have a study plans, I don't have goal I I actually do I my goal is is to finish high school and college too.

✓ I don't have study plans or a goal. Actually, I do: my goal is to finish high school and also go to college.

Several issues: 'a study plans' mixes singular article with plural noun (singular/plural error) and incorrect article use; run-on sentence and repetition ('I I', 'is is'). Suggestion: Use consistent number and articles ('study plans' without 'a' or 'a study plan'), separate ideas with punctuation, and remove repeated words. Use 'also' for 'too' in this context if preferred.