Opportunities— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: 回答基本切题，也提供了时间、人物和活动等细节，但有几处明显的用词和语法问题：①“went to Paul”应改为“went to the pool”，因为这里需要表达“去游泳池”；②“in some holidays”不自然，可以说“during some school holidays”；③“had a chance to try diving”可以改为“had the chance to try diving”或“got the opportunity to try scuba diving”。建议先直接回答“有”，然后用连接词“During that time”补充活动经历和感受，使答案更连贯、更自然。

Ejemplo: Yes, I did. When I was in primary school, I went to the pool with my parents during some school holidays. During that time, I had the chance to try diving, which was both exciting and a little scary.

Sugerencia: 观点明确，并给出了“发现真正兴趣”的原因，内容方向正确。但存在语法和表达问题：①“try new activities is”应改为“trying new activities is”；②“a good experience of people's lives”不自然，可以说“a valuable part of life”或“a valuable life experience”；③连续两次使用“I think”，表达略重复。建议使用“because”和“For example”等连接词，并加入一个具体结果，例如尝试新活动能帮助人们发现擅长的事情或建立自信。

Ejemplo: Yes, I think people should try a variety of activities because this can help them discover their interests and talents. For example, someone who tries painting or playing an instrument may find a hobby they really enjoy. It can also make life more interesting and help people become more confident.

× Yeah, while I was in primary school I went to Paul with my parents in some holidays and I had a chance to try diving.

✓ Yeah, while I was in primary school, I went to Paul with my parents during some holidays and had a chance to try diving.

表示“在某些假期期间”时，通常使用介词 during，而不是 in。during some holidays 表示“在一些假期期间”。另外，while 引导的时间状语位于句首时，后面应加逗号。

× I think so because if people never try new things, they may never find their real interests and I think try new activities is a good experience of people's lives.

✓ I think so because if people never try new things, they may never find their real interests, and I think trying new activities is a good experience in people's lives.

当动词短语作主语时，通常使用动名词形式。try new activities 在句中作主语，因此应改为 trying new activities。可以记住：动词作主语时，常用“动词-ing形式”。

× I think so because if people never try new things, they may never find their real interests and I think try new activities is a good experience of people's lives.

✓ I think so because if people never try new things, they may never find their real interests, and I think trying new activities is a good experience in people's lives.

表示某件事发生在人的生活中时，使用 in people's lives 更自然。experience of people's lives 的介词搭配不正确。建议积累常见搭配，例如 an experience in life（人生中的经历）和 a good experience for people（对人们来说是一次好的经历）。