Opportunities— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: 回答直接，并列举了具体活动，内容比较充实。但有几处语法和搭配问题：应说“encouraged me to participate in a variety of activities”，而不是“take part in more diverse activities”；“girls should also took part”应改为“girls should also take part”；“get a bunch of satisfaction, motivation as well as others”不自然，且“others”指代不清。建议用“because/which helped me...”连接原因或结果，并说明一个活动带来的具体收获。

Ejemplo: Yes, definitely. My mom encouraged me to participate in a variety of activities, such as skating, swimming, and playing the piano. I especially enjoyed swimming because it helped me become more confident and stay fit. It was also a great way to spend time with other children.

Sugerencia: 观点明确，也提到了自信、动力和团队能力等好处。不过“get in part in them”错误，应改为“take part in”；“the more...the more...”结构后应使用完整、自然的表达；“teams walks”不符合语境，可能想表达“team sports”；“at same time make”应为“at the same time, make”。建议减少重复使用“suppose”，先给出观点，再用because和for example补充一个具体例子，使逻辑更清晰。

Ejemplo: Yes, I think people should try different activities, although they do not have to do too many at once. Trying new things can build confidence and help people discover their interests. For example, joining a team sport can improve communication skills and help people make new friends.

× She supposed girls should also took part in more outdoor activities.

✓ She supposed girls should also take part in more outdoor activities.

情态动词“should”后面必须接动词原形，不能接过去式“took”。因此应将“took”改为“take”。

× I suppose the more activities people get in part in them, the more confidence, motivation and team skills they can get.

✓ I suppose the more activities people take part in, the more confidence, motivation and team skills they can gain.

固定短语是“take part in”，不能说“get in part in”。此外，“take part in”后面直接接活动，不需要再加代词“them”。建议记忆固定搭配“take part in + 活动”。

× That is a great way to improve ourselves at same time make more friends.

✓ That is a great way to improve ourselves and make more friends at the same time.

固定短语是“at the same time”，其中必须使用定冠词“the”。另外，将“improve”和“make”用并列连词“and”连接，可以使句子结构更加完整、平行。

× That is a great way to improve ourselves at same time make more friends.

✓ That is a great way to improve ourselves and make more friends at the same time.

原句中“improve ourselves”和“make more friends”之间缺少连接词，导致两个动词短语连接不完整。使用“and”连接两个并列动词短语，结构更清晰。