Opportunities— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Answer the question directly and use a clear structure: state the activity, explain who encouraged you, and describe what you learned from it. Improve grammar by using “sports activities,” “was karate,” and “taught me to defend myself.” Also, “defend ourselves with different people” is unnatural; say “defend myself” or “interact confidently with different people.” Avoid repeating “karate” and connect your ideas with linking words such as “because” and “as a result.”

Ejemplo: Yes, I had the opportunity to try karate when I was a child. My parents encouraged me to join because it was a good way to stay fit and learn self-defence. In addition, it helped me become more confident when meeting and interacting with different people.

Sugerencia: Give a clear opinion first, then support it with one or two specific reasons and an example. Use “get involved in,” not “involve in,” and say “trying new activities improves our mental health and makes us physically stronger.” Avoid the double negative in “I don’t think no one” and the unclear, unfinished sentence “Everyone can do everything in the.” A more accurate idea would be that people should try different activities within their abilities, rather than claiming that everyone can do everything.

Ejemplo: Yes, I think people should try a variety of activities because this can improve both their mental and physical health. For example, trying a new sport can help someone become fitter while also building confidence and social skills. However, they should choose activities that suit their interests and abilities.

× Yes when I was a child my parents told me to join sport activities which is karate because Karate is the fitness activity which take us depend ourselves with different people

✓ Yes, when I was a child, my parents told me to join sports activities, one of which was karate, because karate is a fitness activity that helps us defend ourselves against other people.

The plural noun sports activities is more appropriate than sport activities in this context. Also, one of which refers to one activity, so the sentence needs a clearer plural-to-singular structure.

× Yes when I was a child my parents told me to join sport activities which is karate because Karate is the fitness activity which take us depend ourselves with different people

✓ Yes, when I was a child, my parents told me to join sports activities, one of which was karate, because karate is a fitness activity that helps us defend ourselves against other people.

The experience of joining karate happened in the past, so was is needed instead of is when describing the activity the student joined. The present tense is acceptable in karate is a fitness activity because this describes a general fact.

× Yes when I was a child my parents told me to join sport activities which is karate because Karate is the fitness activity which take us depend ourselves with different people

✓ Yes, when I was a child, my parents told me to join sports activities, one of which was karate, because karate is a fitness activity that helps us defend ourselves against other people.

The relative clause refers to a singular noun, a fitness activity, so the verb must agree with it. Using that helps us gives the clause correct subject-verb agreement.

× Yes when I was a child my parents told me to join sport activities which is karate because Karate is the fitness activity which take us depend ourselves with different people

✓ Yes, when I was a child, my parents told me to join sports activities, one of which was karate, because karate is a fitness activity that helps us defend ourselves against other people.

The expression depend ourselves with different people is not grammatically correct. The intended meaning is probably defend ourselves against other people, which uses the correct preposition against.

× Yes, I think every person can try new things and involve in new activities it grows our mental health and physically make us strong.

✓ Yes, I think everyone can try new things and get involved in new activities. These activities improve our mental health and make us physically stronger.

The original sentence joins several independent ideas without appropriate punctuation or a conjunction. Separating the ideas into two sentences makes the structure clearer. The phrase get involved in is also the correct expression.

× Yes, I think every person can try new things and involve in new activities it grows our mental health and physically make us strong.

✓ Yes, I think everyone can try new things and get involved in new activities. These activities improve our mental health and make us physically stronger.

The plural subject these activities requires the plural verb improve. The verbs improve and make are also parallel because they describe two benefits of the activities.

× I don't think no one can do anything.

✓ I don't think anyone is unable to do anything.

The original sentence contains a double negative: don't and no one. In standard English, use one negative form, such as I don't think anyone is unable to do anything, or express the intended meaning more naturally as I think everyone can do something.

× Everyone can do everything in the

✓ Everyone can do everything in the activity.

The sentence is incomplete because the preposition in is followed by the article the but no noun. Adding a noun completes the sentence. However, the intended noun should be chosen according to the student's meaning, such as activity, world, or future.