Opportunities— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: 回答切题且有具体例子，结构也比较清楚。可以改进以下几点：1）“made me grow quite healthy”表达不自然，可改为“helped me stay healthy”或“helped me develop a healthy lifestyle”；2）“when I was in my primary school”应改为“when I was in primary school”；3）“the second prize of a table tennis match in the school”不够自然，可说“won second prize in a school table-tennis competition”；4）不要用“And”连接新句，可以用“Besides”或直接开始新句。

Ejemplo: Yes, I did. I took classes in basketball, table tennis and badminton, which helped me stay healthy and develop a strong interest in sports. In fact, when I was in primary school, I won second prize in a school table-tennis competition.

Sugerencia: 观点明确，但语法、搭配和标点需要改进。首先应说“Yes, I think they should.”；其次，“fulfil their experience”搭配错误，应改为“gain valuable experience”或“broaden their experience”；“behave better”意思模糊，可以具体说明为“become more adaptable”或“make better decisions”。建议使用“because”或“as a result”连接原因和结果，并把答案扩展为2至3句。

Ejemplo: Yes, I think people should try different things whenever possible because it helps them broaden their horizons and gain valuable experience. For example, trying a new sport or learning a new skill can make people more adaptable and confident. As a result, they may be better prepared to deal with unfamiliar situations.

× Yes, I did. I was given the opportunity to participate in basketball, table tennis and badminton classes, which made me grow quite healthy. And when I was in my primary school I won the second prize of a table tennis match in the school.

✓ Yes, I did. I was given the opportunity to participate in basketball, table tennis and badminton classes, which made me grow quite healthy. When I was in primary school, I won the second prize in a table tennis match at school.

“in my primary school”通常应说“in primary school”，表示“在上小学时”；“the second prize of a match”中的介词使用不自然，应改为“the second prize in a match”；表示比赛举办地点时，“in the school”更自然地改为“at school”。

× Yes they should by trying many different things they can broaden their horizons and fulfil their experience which can help them behave better

✓ Yes, they should. By trying many different things, they can broaden their horizons and fulfil their experience, which can help them behave better.

原句缺少必要的标点，两个完整句子直接连接，造成句子结构错误。应在“Yes”后加逗号，在“should”后结束第一个句子；“By trying many different things”是介词短语，放在句首后应加逗号。