Part 1
Examinador
Did you have any opportunities to take part in new activities as a child?
Candidato
Did you have any opportunities to take part in your activities as a channel
Examinador
Should people try as many different things as they can?
Candidato
Should the people try as many different things as they can
Did you have any opportunities to take part in new activities as a child?
Puntuación: 5.0Sugerencia: 你基本上重复了考官的问题,没有直接回答“小时候参加过哪些新活动”。应先明确回答“Yes, I did”或“No, I didn’t”,然后补充具体活动、参加原因和感受。注意使用正确表达,如“take part in new activities”,不要说“take part in your activities as a channel”。建议回答2—3句话,并使用“because”“for example”等连接词展开。
Ejemplo: Yes, I did. When I was a child, I tried swimming and joined a school art club because I wanted to learn new skills. I especially enjoyed swimming because it made me feel confident and energetic.
Should people try as many different things as they can?
Puntuación: 5.0Sugerencia: 你只是重复了问题,没有表达自己的观点。应先明确说明“我认为应该/不应该”,然后给出一个理由和具体例子。可以使用“because”“for instance”连接观点和细节;同时注意自然表达,通常说“Should people...”而不是“Should the people...”。
Ejemplo: Yes, I think people should try different things, especially when they are young. It helps them discover their interests and develop useful skills. For instance, trying photography or volunteering may lead to a new hobby or even a future career.
× Should the people try as many different things as they can
✓ Should people try as many different things as they can?
当 people 表示“人们”这一泛指群体时,通常不使用定冠词 the。只有在指特定的一群人时,才使用 the people,例如 the people in this town。改进建议:表达一般观点时,复数可数名词前通常直接使用,不要随意添加 the。