Opportunities— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Cevabınız soruya doğrudan yanıt veriyor ve bir örnek içeriyor; ancak dilbilgisi ve kelime kullanımında önemli hatalar var. “I joined at” yerine “I took part in” veya “I joined” kullanılmalı. “the National Party” ifadesi muhtemelen “a national festival” ya da “a school festival” olmalı; etkinliğin adını daha net belirtin. “I did a dance” yerine “I performed a dance” veya “I took part in a dance performance” daha doğal olur. Cevabı neden, kimlerle ve nasıl hissettiğiniz gibi ayrıntılarla 3–4 cümleye genişletin.

Ejemplo: Yes, I did. When I was in middle school, I took part in a school festival with some of my friends. We performed a traditional dance, and I really enjoyed learning the steps and performing in front of an audience.

Sugerencia: Ana fikriniz anlaşılabilir, ancak cevapta tekrar ve doğal olmayan ifadeler bulunuyor. “Yes, I think yes” yerine “Yes, definitely” veya “Yes, I think people should” kullanın. “try to new experiments” doğru değildir; “try new activities” veya “experiment with new things” denmelidir. “in whole life” yerine “throughout their lives” kullanın. Görüşünüzü bir neden ve somut bir sonuçla destekleyerek cevabı 2–3 cümleye tamamlayın.

Ejemplo: Yes, definitely. I think people should try different activities throughout their lives because this helps them discover their interests and develop new skills. For example, someone might find a talent for cooking or painting by trying something new.

× Yes, I did when I went to middle school, I joined at the National Party and I did a dance with my friends.

✓ Yes, I did. When I went to middle school, I joined at the National Party and I did a dance with my friends.

The original sentence contains a comma splice: two independent clauses are joined only by a comma. Use a period to separate them. This makes the sentence structure clearer.

× Yes, I did when I went to middle school, I joined at the National Party and I did a dance with my friends.

✓ Yes, I did. When I went to middle school, I joined the National Party and I did a dance with my friends.

The verb join is followed directly by the organization or group being joined. Do not use the preposition at after join. For example: I joined the club.

× Yes, I think yes because people have to try to new experiments in whole life.

✓ Yes, I think so, because people have to try new experiments throughout their lives.

The verb try is followed directly by a noun when it means to experience or do something, so try to new experiments is incorrect. Also, throughout their lives is the correct expression for describing the whole period of a person's life. Use a plural possessive form because people refers to more than one person.