Opportunities— Part 1 Informe

PrácticaPart12026-10-01 19:36:42

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Part 1

Examinador

Did you have any opportunities to take part in new activities as a child?

Candidato

Yes I had to have. child My mom didn't everything. Little everything. She didn't person me for instruments then she got some vibe to I didn't know I don't see.

Examinador

Should people try as many different things as they can?

Candidato

Yeah, issue I have a chance to start again

Evaluación

Total

Total: 5.0Fluidez y coherencia: 5.0Pronunciación: 5.0Gramática: 5.0Recurso léxico: 5.0

Part 1

Did you have any opportunities to take part in new activities as a child?

Puntuación: 20.0

Sugerencia: Cevabınızın ana fikri ve anlamı büyük ölçüde anlaşılmıyor. Öncelikle soruya doğrudan ve net bir cümleyle cevap verin. Geçmiş deneyimlerden bahsederken “had the opportunity to”, “my mother didn’t allow me to” ve “I took part in” gibi doğru kalıpları kullanın. Fikirlerinizi geçmiş zamanla ve mantıklı bağlaçlarla birleştirin; örneğin “However” veya “As a result”. En fazla 3–4 cümleyle, katıldığınız belirli bir etkinliği ve bunun nedenini açıklayın.

Ejemplo: Yes, I had a few opportunities to try new activities as a child. For example, my mother enrolled me in music lessons when I was about eight years old. I enjoyed learning the piano, although I eventually stopped because I became interested in sports.

Should people try as many different things as they can?

Puntuación: 25.0

Sugerencia: Cevabınız çok kısa ve soruya neden sunmadan cevap veriyor. “Yes, I think people should...” şeklinde net bir görüş cümlesi kurun ve ardından en az bir neden ile somut bir örnek ekleyin. “Trying different things helps people discover their interests” gibi doğal ve konuyla ilgili ifadeler kullanabilirsiniz. “Start again” ifadesinin ne anlama geldiğini açıklayın; aksi hâlde cevap belirsiz kalıyor. Cevabı 2–3 bağlantılı cümleye genişletin.

Ejemplo: Yes, I think people should try a variety of activities whenever possible. This helps them discover their interests and develop useful skills. For instance, someone who tries cooking, volunteering, and sports may eventually find a hobby or career that suits them well.

Gramática

26: Sentence structure errors

× Yes, I had to have.

✓ Yes, I did.

The question uses the verb phrase “have opportunities,” so the natural short answer is “Yes, I did.” The phrase “had to have” changes the meaning and is not grammatically suitable here.

23: Sentence without a verb

× child My mom didn't everything.

✓ When I was a child, my mom didn't let me do everything.

The original sentence is missing a complete verb structure. After “didn't,” use the base verb “let,” followed by an object and another base verb: “let me do.” Also, “When I was a child” is the natural expression for describing childhood.

23: Sentence without a verb

× Little everything.

✓ She let me do very little.

“Little everything” is not a complete sentence and does not form a natural English expression. Use “very little” to mean “not many things” or “not much.”

26: Sentence structure errors

× She didn't person me for instruments.

✓ She didn't let me play musical instruments.

“Person” cannot be used as a verb in this sentence. To express permission, use “let + object + base verb”: “let me play.” The phrase “musical instruments” is also the natural expression here.

26: Sentence structure errors

× Then she got some vibe to I didn't know I don't see.

✓ Then she bought me some instruments, but I didn't know how to play them.

The original sentence has an unclear and incomplete structure. Use “bought me” to show that someone purchased something for you, and use “how to play them” to explain the activity. Because the story is about the past, use “didn't know,” not “don't see.”

26: Sentence structure errors

× Yeah, issue I have a chance to start again.

✓ Yeah, I think people should have a chance to try different things again.

The sentence is missing the subject and verb structure needed after “Yeah.” Use “I think” to introduce your opinion, and use “should have a chance to” to express an appropriate recommendation. The phrase “try different things” answers the examiner's question more clearly.

Vocabulario

Little— Short; Young; Brief; Minor
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