Opportunities— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Answer the question directly, then add one specific detail about the activity and its effect on you. Use the natural expression “take part in” or “do,” rather than “have opportunities to.” Also, say “at first I felt embarrassed” because you are describing a past experience. The phrase “speak in public at school events” is more natural than “speak in public, in school events.”

Ejemplo: Yes, I did. When I was a child, I took part in school events and sometimes had to speak in public. I felt embarrassed at first, but these experiences gradually made me more confident.

Sugerencia: Begin with a clear topic sentence, such as “Yes, I think people should try different activities.” Then give one or two logical reasons and a specific example. Several words and phrases in the answer are unclear, including “repair” and “lost its sights,” so make sure your ideas are expressed accurately. Use plural forms and natural collocations: “different activities,” “different experiences,” and “find out what they are good at.”

Ejemplo: Yes, I think people should try as many different activities as possible. This allows them to gain new experiences and discover their strengths. For example, someone who tries several sports may realize that they are particularly good at swimming.

× Yes, I did. When I was a child, I used to have opportunities to speak in public, in school events, even though at first I feel embarrassed.

✓ Yes, I did. When I was a child, I used to have opportunities to speak in public at school events, even though at first I felt embarrassed.

The sentence refers to a past period, indicated by When I was a child and used to. Therefore, feel should be changed to the past-tense form felt.

× Yes, I did. When I was a child, I used to have opportunities to speak in public, in school events, even though at first I feel embarrassed.

✓ Yes, I did. When I was a child, I used to have opportunities to speak in public at school events, even though at first I felt embarrassed.

We normally use at with events to indicate participation or presence at an event. Therefore, in school events should be changed to at school events.

× Absolutely people should try as many repair. Lost its sights, things as they can't because different activity would give them different experience so that they can discover what they're really good at, such as sport.

✓ Absolutely. People should try as many different things as they can because different activities would give them different experiences, so they can discover what they are really good at, such as sports.

The expression is as many things as they can, which means the greatest possible number of things. Can't means cannot and changes the intended meaning, so it should be replaced with can.

× Absolutely people should try as many repair. Lost its sights, things as they can't because different activity would give them different experience so that they can discover what they're really good at, such as sport.

✓ Absolutely. People should try as many different things as they can because different activities would give them different experiences, so they can discover what they are really good at, such as sports.

The sentence discusses multiple activities and the experiences they provide. Therefore, activity should be activities and experience should be experiences. The plural form sports is also more natural when referring to sports in general.

× Absolutely people should try as many repair. Lost its sights, things as they can't because different activity would give them different experience so that they can discover what they're really good at, such as sport.

✓ Absolutely. People should try as many different things as they can because different activities would give them different experiences, so they can discover what they are really good at, such as sports.

The original sentence contains interrupted and unclear fragments, such as repair and Lost its sights, which prevent the ideas from forming a grammatical sentence. A complete structure is needed: a main clause followed by a because clause explaining the reason.