Opportunities— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Answer directly with “Yes, I did,” because the question asks about your personal experience. Use “speak in public” instead of “talk in public” in this context. You could also add a specific result or example to make the answer more developed, such as explaining how these experiences improved your confidence. Avoid using “they” when referring to yourself.

Ejemplo: Yes, I did. When I was a child, I often had opportunities to speak in public at school events. Although I felt embarrassed at first, these experiences gradually helped me become more confident.

Sugerencia: State your opinion clearly and use the correct form “I personally think,” not “I personally thinks.” Avoid the confusing phrase “should have tried” and say “should try.” Organize your reason with a linking word such as “because,” and avoid repetition such as “like or not like, don’t like.” Use “different types of activities” and give one specific example to make your answer more natural and effective.

Ejemplo: Absolutely. I think people should try a wide range of activities because this helps them discover their interests and strengths. For example, someone who joins a sports club or takes a music class may find a talent they did not know they had.

× Yes, they did. When I was a child, I often got opportunities to talk in public at school events, even though I felt embarrassed most of the time.

✓ Yes, I did. When I was a child, I often got opportunities to talk in public at school events, even though I felt embarrassed most of the time.

The question uses the subject pronoun you, so the answer should use the corresponding first-person pronoun I. They refers to other people and does not agree with the subject of the question.

× Absolutely, I personally thinks that people should have tried as many at activities that they can't because this will help them to know themselves better by doing different type of activities you know that you like or not like, don't like.

✓ Absolutely, I personally think that people should try as many different activities as they can because this will help them know themselves better by doing different types of activities and finding out what they like or dislike.

The subject is I, so the verb must be think, not thinks. The third-person singular form thinks is used with he, she, or it, but not with I.

× Absolutely, I personally thinks that people should have tried as many at activities that they can't because this will help them to know themselves better by doing different type of activities you know that you like or not like, don't like.

✓ Absolutely, I personally think that people should try as many different activities as they can because this will help them know themselves better by doing different types of activities and finding out what they like or dislike.

The question asks about a general recommendation, so should try is appropriate. Should have tried usually refers to an action that was expected or advisable in the past, which does not fit this general meaning.

× Absolutely, I personally thinks that people should have tried as many at activities that they can't because this will help them to know themselves better by doing different type of activities you know that you like or not like, don't like.

✓ Absolutely, I personally think that people should try as many different activities as they can because this will help them know themselves better by doing different types of activities and finding out what they like or dislike.

The phrase different types of activities refers to more than one kind, so type should be pluralized as types. The plural noun types correctly agrees with the meaning of different.

× Absolutely, I personally thinks that people should have tried as many at activities that they can't because this will help them to know themselves better by doing different type of activities you know that you like or not like, don't like.

✓ Absolutely, I personally think that people should try as many different activities as they can because this will help them know themselves better by doing different types of activities and finding out what they like or dislike.

The structure as many at activities that they can't is not grammatically complete. Use the pattern as many + plural noun + as + subject + can, as in as many different activities as they can. The final part also needs a complete, parallel structure: what they like or dislike.

× Absolutely, I personally thinks that people should have tried as many at activities that they can't because this will help them to know themselves better by doing different type of activities you know that you like or not like, don't like.

✓ Absolutely, I personally think that people should try as many different activities as they can because this will help them know themselves better by doing different types of activities and finding out what they like or dislike.

The sentence changes from the pronoun they, referring to people, to you. Keep the pronoun consistent by using they and them throughout the sentence.