Opportunities— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Answer the question directly and explain what happened. Use the correct phrase “take part in” rather than “be a part in,” and avoid repeated words and unfinished phrases such as “it it,” “and but,” and “I never I tried.” You should clearly state whether you personally participated; if not, explain why and give one specific example of a school activity. Use linking words such as “however” or “although” to connect your ideas.

Ejemplo: Yes, I had several opportunities to try new activities at school. Every year, my school held a cultural function, and many of my friends took part in it. However, I was quite shy, so I never performed on stage. I usually supported my classmates and watched their performances.

Sugerencia: Begin with a clear opinion, then support it with a reason and a specific example. Avoid repeating “travelling” and do not use incomplete phrases such as “I wanted to every go.” Use natural expressions like “travel around India and abroad” or “take a trip around the world.” Also explain why trying different things is beneficial, for example, because it helps people gain experience, become more open-minded, or discover new interests.

Ejemplo: Yes, I think people should try a variety of activities because it helps them discover their interests and become more confident. For example, travelling allows people to experience different cultures and meet people from various backgrounds. I would love to visit different parts of India first and then travel abroad. Trying new things can also make life more exciting and memorable.

× Yes, I had many opportunities to be a part in activities like in school when I was a child.

✓ Yes, I had many opportunities to take part in activities at school when I was a child.

The fixed expression is take part in, not be a part in. The preposition at is more natural for a location such as school. Use take part in + activity and at + school or another institution.

× Every year my school had a function and my friends always participated in it it and but I never I tried this opportunity.

✓ Every year, my school held a function, and my friends always participated in it, but I never took the opportunity to participate.

The pronoun it is repeated accidentally. Use it only once to refer to the function. Avoid repeating the subject pronoun I in the phrase I never I tried.

× Every year my school had a function and my friends always participated in it it and but I never I tried this opportunity.

✓ Every year, my school held a function, and my friends always participated in it, but I never took the opportunity to participate.

And and but cannot be joined together in this way. Use and to add information and but to show contrast. Here, but correctly introduces the contrast between your friends participating and you not participating.

× Every year my school had a function and my friends always participated in it it and but I never I tried this opportunity.

✓ Every year, my school held a function, and my friends always participated in it, but I never took the opportunity to participate.

The sentence contains repeated words, repeated subjects, and an incomplete coordination. Organize it into two independent clauses joined by and and a contrasting clause introduced by but. The natural expression is take the opportunity to participate, not try this opportunity.

× People should try many different things like travelling, travelling I would suggest travelling.

✓ People should try many different things, such as traveling. I would especially suggest traveling.

The original sentence is a run-on sentence and repeats traveling several times without a clear sentence boundary. Use a full stop to separate the ideas and use such as to introduce an example.

× I would like to travel in many places like in India and out of India whole world tour.

✓ I would like to travel to many places, including places in India and abroad, and take a tour around the world.

Use travel to when describing destinations. Use in India for a location within a country, and abroad instead of out of India when referring generally to foreign countries. The expression take a tour around the world is also the natural structure.

× I would like to travel in many places like in India and out of India whole world tour.

✓ I would like to travel to many places, including places in India and abroad, and take a tour around the world.

A singular countable noun such as tour needs an article, and world needs the definite article in the expression the world. Use a tour around the world rather than whole world tour in this sentence.

× As a child I wanted to every go everywhere in India and.

✓ As a child, I wanted to go everywhere in India.

The phrase wanted to must be followed by the base form of a verb, so go is required after to. The word every cannot be placed before go, and the final and leaves the sentence incomplete. Remove the unnecessary word and.