Opportunities— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Cevabınız soruya doğrudan yanıt vermeye çalışıyor; ancak “as a child” sorusuna geçmiş zamanla cevap vermeniz gerekir. “At my current high school” ifadesi çocukluk dönemini tam olarak karşılamıyor ve “activities that I took part” yerine “activities I took part in” denmelidir. “I mented in music” ve “I attend to something” doğal kullanımlar değildir; muhtemelen “I became interested in music” ve “I attend music classes” demek istediniz. Cevabı tamamlanmış bir cümleyle bitirin ve bir etkinlik, nedeni ve sonucu hakkında spesifik bir ayrıntı ekleyin. Örneğin, “For example” ve “As a result” gibi bağlaçlar kullanabilirsiniz.

Ejemplo: Yes, I did. When I was a child, I had the opportunity to join a school music club. I became interested in playing the guitar, and I still attend music-related activities today. As a result, I developed a lasting passion for music.

Sugerencia: Ana fikriniz açık ve soruya doğrudan cevap veriyorsunuz; ayrıca zaman yetersizliği konusunda karşıt bir fikir sunmanız olumlu. Ancak “sometimes it is look like impossible” yerine “sometimes it seems impossible”, “with our work and study” yerine “because of work and study” ve “our another skills” yerine “other skills” kullanılmalıdır. “Even though” ile başlayan bölüm tamamlanmış bir karşıtlık yapısı içermiyor; “Although people are often busy, they should...” şeklinde daha doğal bir yapı kurun. Fikrinizi güçlendirmek için farklı şeyler denemenin özgüven, beceri veya yeni fırsatlar üzerindeki etkisine spesifik bir örnek verin.

Ejemplo: Yes, I think people should try different things whenever possible. Although work and study can leave us with little free time, new activities help us develop skills outside our usual routine. For example, someone who joins a sports club may become healthier and more confident. They might also discover a new hobby or even meet useful contacts.

× At my current high school, I have a lot of activities that I took part.

✓ At my current high school, I have taken part in many activities.

The expression is take part in something, so the preposition in is required. The present perfect form have taken part is also more suitable because the activities happened at different times up to the present.

× For example, I mented in music and I attend to something related to music nowadays and right now I'm continuing to take parts on

✓ For example, I mented in music, I attend something related to music nowadays, and right now I am continuing to take part in it.

The verb attend is normally used without to when it means participate in or go to an activity. The correct expression is take part in, not take parts on. Take part is a fixed expression, so part must be singular and in must follow it.

× Even though sometimes it is look like impossible, like we are spending time with our work and study and sometimes we don't have time to do different activities but we should do them to improve our another skills.

✓ Even though sometimes it looks impossible because we spend time working and studying, and sometimes we do not have time to do different activities, we should do them to improve our other skills.

After the subject it, use the present simple form looks, not is look. The phrase spend time is followed naturally by a gerund, so working and studying are used. Another is used with a singular countable noun, while skills is plural; therefore, other skills is correct.