Opportunities— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: 回答方向正确，也提到了具体活动，但存在明显的语法和搭配问题。将“take in activities”改为“take part in activities”或“try different activities”；“cycling skating”之间要加并列连接词；“I have”应改为过去时“I had”。避免重复表达“a lot of opportunities”，并用一个具体例子说明你参加过的活动及其影响。

Ejemplo: Yes, I did. I had plenty of opportunities to try new activities, such as cycling and skating. For example, I joined a skating club when I was eight, and it helped me become more active and confident.

Sugerencia: 观点明确，但“different things”重复较多且表达不够具体。“different things means”应改为“trying different things gives people”；“opportunity and chance”语义重复，可保留一个；“breathe the people's horizons”是不正确的搭配，应改为“broaden people’s horizons”。建议使用“because”连接理由，并补充一个具体例子或结果。

Ejemplo: Yes, definitely. Trying different activities allows people to discover their interests and broaden their horizons. For instance, learning a new language can help someone understand another culture and may even create better career opportunities.

× I have a lot of opportunities to take in different activities such as cycling skating and other things.

✓ I had a lot of opportunities to take part in different activities such as cycling, skating, and other things.

问题发生在过去的童年时期，因此应该使用一般过去时。将 “have” 改为 “had”。另外，“take part in” 表示“参加”，比 “take in” 更符合句意。回答过去经历时，要特别注意把现在时动词改为过去时。

× I have a lot of opportunities to take in different activities such as cycling skating and other things.

✓ I had a lot of opportunities to take part in different activities such as cycling, skating, and other things.

“参加活动”应该使用固定搭配 “take part in an activity”，而不是 “take in an activity”。建议记住常见搭配：take part in、participate in、join an activity。

× I think there was there were a lot of opportunities for you when you are a child.

✓ I think there were a lot of opportunities for you when you were a child.

“opportunities”是复数名词，所以 There be 句型中应该使用 “there were”，不能使用 “there was”。使用 There be 句型时，要根据后面的名词决定 be 动词的单复数：there is/was + 单数，there are/were + 复数。

× I think there was there were a lot of opportunities for you when you are a child.

✓ I think there were a lot of opportunities for you when you were a child.

“when you were a child”描述的是过去的童年时期，因此 “are” 应改为过去式 “were”。回答关于童年经历的问题时，相关动作和状态通常使用一般过去时。

× Yes, I think so. Everyone should try different things because different things means different opportunity and chance to earn more, to know more about the world and to breathe the people's horizons.

✓ Yes, I think so. Everyone should try different things because different things mean different opportunities and chances to earn more, to know more about the world, and to breathe the people's horizons.

“different things”表示复数，所以后面的名词也应使用复数形式：“opportunity”改为 “opportunities”，“chance”改为 “chances”。当数量不止一个或前面有 “different” 时，通常要使用名词复数形式。

× Yes, I think so. Everyone should try different things because different things means different opportunity and chance to earn more, to know more about the world and to breathe the people's horizons.

✓ Yes, I think so. Everyone should try different things because different things mean different opportunities and chances to earn more, to know more about the world, and to breathe the people's horizons.

主语 “different things” 是复数，因此谓语动词不能使用单数形式 “means”，应该使用复数形式 “mean”。一般现在时中，第三人称单数主语使用 “means”，复数主语使用 “mean”。