Opportunities— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Make the response grammatical, concise and clearer. Start with a direct topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details. Use correct verb forms and simpler vocabulary if unsure (e.g., “I participated” not “I was participated”). Avoid repetition and unclear phrases like “Running Plot” unless you explain them. Link ideas with a short connector such as “and” or “which”.

Ejemplo: Yes. When I was in primary school I took part in a running club, and that experience helped me develop self-discipline. For example, training regularly taught me to manage my time and keep commitments, which still helps me today.

Sugerencia: Give a clear opinion sentence, then support it with specific reasons and examples. Use accurate vocabulary (avoid “adaptation soil” and incorrect forms like “being multitasking”). Use linking words such as “because” or “for example” to make your reasoning coherent. Keep to two or three sentences total.

Ejemplo: Yes, I believe people should try different activities because it builds new skills and confidence. For example, joining clubs helps you meet people and learn to adapt to new situations, which can improve teamwork and communication skills.

× Yes, it did. When I was young in primary school, I was participated as a member of Running Plot and it's it encouraged me to keep my self discipline until now the day.

✓ Yes. When I was young and in primary school, I participated as a member of the Running Club, and it encouraged me to maintain my self-discipline up to the present day.

Errors: incorrect auxiliary 'did' used for affirmation, passive form 'was participated' is wrong, unclear noun 'Running Plot' likely 'Running Club', redundant 'it's it', incorrect phrase 'keep my self discipline until now the day'. Type: sentence structure errors and subject-verb issues. Suggestions: remove unnecessary 'did' and use simple past 'participated' for completed past action; use active voice not passive; correct noun to 'Running Club' if appropriate; use 'maintain my self-discipline' and 'up to the present day' for clarity and correct idiomatic expression.

× Yes, I think we should since being multitasking, it can help you to do lots of things at the same time or even joining the club help you with the adaptation soil because you can adapt more when you meet lots of people.

✓ Yes, I think we should. Being able to multitask can help you do many things at the same time, and joining a club can help you adapt because you meet lots of people.

Errors: incorrect phrase 'since being multitasking' and tense/structure issues 'it can help you to do' and 'even joining the club help you' (verb agreement), odd phrase 'adaptation soil'. Type: present tense issue and subject-verb agreement. Suggestions: use 'Being able to multitask' or 'trying many things' to express capability; remove unnecessary 'to' after 'help you'; use 'joining a club can help you adapt' (singular subject + can + base verb); replace unclear 'adaptation soil' with 'adapt' or 'adaptation'.