Opportunities— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Make your answer more natural and structured: start with a clear topic sentence, then give specific details and use linking words. Correct grammar (tense and articles), avoid redundancy, and limit length to 2–4 sentences. For example, say who encouraged you, name the activities clearly, and explain briefly how they helped you.

Ejemplo: Yes. My father encouraged me to try new activities, such as piano lessons and mental arithmetic classes. As a result, I developed discipline and confidence in learning new skills, which I still benefit from today.

Sugerencia: Give a direct opinion sentence, then support it with a reason and a brief example. Fix grammar and word choice (e.g., 'gain confidence' not 'establish their confidence to it', 'become good at many things' rather than 'learn good at everything'). Use a linking word like 'because' or 'for example.'

Ejemplo: Yes, I think people should try many different things because it helps them gain confidence and discover their strengths. For example, trying sports, music and public speaking helped me find activities I enjoy and improved my self-esteem.

× My father gave me the opportunity to go to learn piano and calculations and so on.

✓ My father gave me the opportunity to learn piano, arithmetic, and so on.

The original sentence contains an unnecessary infinitive sequence 'to go to learn' which is ungrammatical. Use the past participle context correctly by saying 'gave me the opportunity to' followed directly by the base verb 'learn'. Also replace 'calculations' with the more natural noun 'arithmetic'. Suggestion: remove redundant words and use correct collocation: 'gave me the opportunity to learn ...'.

× So I am I was proud that I can have this opportunity.

✓ So I was proud that I had that opportunity.

This sentence mixes present and past tense ('I am I was' and 'can have') which creates tense inconsistency. The question asks about childhood, so past tense should be used. Change 'am/was' to 'was' and 'can have' to past 'had' to maintain consistent past narrative. Suggestion: keep the same past timeframe throughout the sentence.

× Yes, this can help people establish their confidence to it and help learn good at everything.

✓ Yes, this can help people build their confidence and learn to do many things well.

The original has incorrect preposition 'to it', incorrect verb phrase 'help learn good at everything', and awkward collocation. Use 'build confidence' rather than 'establish their confidence to it', and 'learn to do many things well' to express ability. Also keep modal 'can' with appropriate verb forms. Suggestion: use natural collocations: 'build confidence' and 'learn to do X well'.