Opportunities— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Make your answer a clear complete sentence that directly addresses the question, organize ideas with a topic sentence and 1–2 supporting details, use correct grammar and simple linking words, and avoid redundancy. Be specific: name one or two activities, explain how they helped you (skills developed or social benefits), and use correct tense and articles. For example, correct subject-verb agreement and plural/singular forms, and replace vague phrases (e.g., “many say friends same age”) with precise ones (e.g., “many friends of the same age”).

Ejemplo: Yes, I had many opportunities to take part in new activities as a child. For example, I joined a local soccer team and an art club, which helped me develop teamwork and creativity. As a result, I became more confident speaking with classmates and improved my coordination. Moreover, these group activities gave me chances to make friends of the same age and practise communication skills.

Sugerencia: Give a full, grammatical response that states your opinion clearly, then add one or two specific reasons or examples using linking words (e.g., “because”, “for example”, “as a result”). Complete your sentence instead of leaving it unfinished, and avoid vague phrases like “find out their ability on” — instead say “discover their abilities” or “find their strengths”.

Ejemplo: Yes, I think people should try as many different things as possible because it helps them discover their abilities and interests. For example, experimenting with different hobbies like cooking or public speaking can reveal hidden talents and help people choose a suitable career path. In addition, trying new activities builds confidence and broadens one’s perspective.

× Unlike child today they are so addicted to electronic device when I was a child there are many activities to help me develop my skill and communicate with many say friends same age.

✓ Unlike children today, who are so addicted to electronic devices, when I was a child there were many activities that helped me develop my skills and communicate with many peers of the same age.

This sentence has several linked errors but they stem from incorrect article and noun forms: 'child' and 'device' should be plural ('children', 'devices') because you refer generally to more than one; 'the' is not used correctly—'Unlike children today' is the correct comparative phrase. Also change 'there are' to past tense 'there were' to match 'when I was a child'. 'Help me develop my skill' should be 'helped me develop my skills' for agreement and natural usage. 'communicate with many say friends same age' should be 'communicate with many peers of the same age' for correct word choice and order. Suggestion: break long sentence into clauses with commas and use plural nouns and past tense consistently.

× I think they should because that may help them find out their ability on

✓ I think they should because that may help them find out their abilities.

The phrase ends incorrectly and uses singular 'ability' with 'find out' awkwardly. Use 'abilities' plural when referring generally to different strengths, and remove the preposition 'on'. The modal 'may' is fine to express possibility. Suggestion: use 'find out their abilities' or 'discover their abilities' to sound natural and complete the sentence.