Opportunities— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Câu trả lời chưa tự nhiên và còn nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, cấu trúc câu và dùng từ không chính xác. Hãy chú ý thì động từ (were → was), số lượng từ, và trật tự từ. Rút gọn để súc tích (không quá 5 câu), bắt đầu bằng một câu chủ đề rõ ràng, sau đó thêm 1-2 chi tiết hỗ trợ cụ thể. Dùng liên từ phù hợp (for example, such as, and) để mạch lạc hơn và sửa phát âm/vựng không cần thiết như “play too much activity”.

Ejemplo: Yes, I had many opportunities. My parents encouraged me to try different activities because they thought it was good for my health. For example, I often played badminton and football and went swimming almost every day when I was a child.

Sugerencia: Câu trả lời lặp từ, ngữ pháp và từ vựng không chính xác (each people → everyone; help try → should try). Cần một câu chủ đề rõ ràng, tiếp theo là lý do cụ thể và một ví dụ nếu cần. Tránh dùng quá nhiều “maybe” và “maybe” lặp lại. Rút gọn để súc tích, dùng liên từ như because, so, for example để mạch lạc hơn.

Ejemplo: Yes, I think everyone should try many different things because it helps them discover their talents and develop new skills. For example, joining a music class or a sports team can reveal hidden strengths and boost confidence, which may even lead to competing or pursuing a hobby seriously.

× My parents always encourage me to do more and try a new activity or do exercise because it's really good for my health.

✓ My parents always encourage me to do more and try new activities or exercise because it's really good for my health.

Subject 'parents' is plural so verbs 'encourage' is correct but noun phrase 'a new activity' with 'try' sounds unnatural; use plural 'activities' or uncountable 'exercise'. Also 'do exercise' is acceptable but parallel structure prefers 'try new activities or exercise'. Suggestion: use parallel and natural collocations: 'try new activities or exercise.'

× So when I were a kid, I played too much activity like playing badminton, uh, playing football or just go swimming every day.

✓ So when I was a kid, I did a lot of activities like playing badminton, playing football, or just going swimming every day.

Use past tense 'was' (singular past of 'to be') not 'were'. 'Played too much activity' is ungrammatical; use 'did a lot of activities' or 'played many sports'. Verb forms must be parallel: 'playing ... or going ...' Use gerund 'going swimming' rather than base 'go swimming' after 'just'. Suggestions: replace 'were' with 'was', rephrase 'played too much activity' to 'did a lot of activities', and maintain parallel gerunds.

× Yes, uh, each people should help try some a new thing.

✓ Yes, each person should try some new things.

The phrase 'each people' is incorrect; 'each' should be followed by a singular noun 'person'. 'Help try' is unnecessary and awkward. Article 'a' should not appear before 'new thing' when pluralizing. Suggestion: use 'each person' and 'try some new things' to convey the idea.

× Maybe it's really helpful for themselves to explore some of their talent or some of their skill so they can maybe have a competition, competitions or contest to try their best.

✓ Maybe it's really helpful for them to explore some of their talents or skills so they can enter competitions or contests and try their best.

Pronoun 'themselves' is awkward when referencing 'each person'; use 'them' for plural reference. 'Some of their talent or some of their skill' should be plural 'talents or skills' or uncountable forms. Repetition 'competition, competitions or contest' is redundant; choose 'competitions or contests' or simply 'competitions'. Use 'enter competitions' rather than 'have a competition'. Also keep parallel structure 'talents or skills' and 'competitions or contests'.