Tiredness— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: 你直接回答了问题，也说明了疲惫的原因，内容相关。不过，“I'm on my final year”应改为“I'm in my final year”；“IOS test”很可能应为“IELTS test”；“especially through the study”表达不自然。避免在一个长句中重复使用“because”，并补充具体的疲惫时段或影响。

Ejemplo: Yes, I’ve been feeling quite tired recently because I’m in my final year at university and preparing for the IELTS test. I study Portuguese and English every day, so I often feel mentally drained in the evening.

Sugerencia: 这段内容看起来是反馈文字，而不是对问题的回答，因此没有说明你通常在什么时候感到疲惫。请直接给出时间或情境，再用一个具体原因补充，例如上完课后或晚上复习时。

Ejemplo: I usually feel tired in the late afternoon, especially after a full day of classes. It gets worse when I have to study several languages in the evening.

Sugerencia: 你列出了听音乐、去公园和运动等应对方式，回答切题，但句子较长，多个想法用“and”连接，显得重复。“come me down”应为“calm me down”；“can also feel less stressful”应改为“can also make me feel less stressed”。建议选一两种方式，并说明它们为什么有帮助。

Ejemplo: When I feel tired, I usually listen to music because it helps me relax. If I have more time, I go for a walk in the park and get some fresh air, which helps me feel less stressed.

Sugerencia: 你清楚表达了疲惫时更愿意待在家里，也提到会和朋友改约；但后半部分意思不够清楚。“have a relax”应为“relax”或“have a rest”，“we can met”应为“we can meet”。“best station/situation”不符合这里的意思。建议简洁说明自己通常会取消或改约，并给出原因。

Ejemplo: Not usually. When I’m exhausted, I prefer to stay at home and rest rather than go out. I’ll message my friends and suggest meeting another day, when I have more energy to enjoy their company.

× Well recently yes because I'm on my final year at the university and now I need to study Portuguese and also English every day because I need to prepare the IOS test. So that's made me feel really tired, especially through the study.

✓ Well, recently, yes, because I'm in my final year at university, and now I need to study Portuguese and English every day because I need to prepare for the IOS test. So that's made me feel really tired, especially after studying.

表示“在大学的最后一年”应使用 in my final year，而不是 on my final year；prepare 后面表示“为……做准备”时要接 for；表示学习之后感到疲惫，使用 after studying 比 through the study 更自然。可以记住搭配 in one's final year 和 prepare for something。

× When I'm tired, I often listen to some music that can come me down and sometimes I like to go out and breathe in some fresh air and go to the park and do some exercise that can also feel less stressful.

✓ When I'm tired, I often listen to music, which can calm me down. Sometimes I also like to go out, breathe in some fresh air, and exercise in the park, which can make me feel less stressed.

原句后半部分的定语从句 that can also feel less stressful 容易让人理解为“锻炼本身感到压力较小”，句子关系不清楚。改为 which can make me feel less stressed，明确表达“锻炼能让我感觉压力小一些”。建议检查定语从句修饰的对象，并确保它符合想表达的逻辑。

× So I would like to talk to my friends that maybe we can met this time because if I went out with my friends I don't have a best station or a best situation to talk with.

✓ So I would like to tell my friends that maybe we can meet another time, because if I went out with them, I wouldn't be in a good situation to talk to them.

talk to my friends that 后面的结构不自然；这里想表达“告诉朋友”，用 tell my friends that 更合适。另外，if I went out 表示假设情况，后面的结果也应使用相应的假设结构，不能直接接 I don't have。可以练习“if + 过去式，would + 动词原形”的句型。

× So I would like to talk to my friends that maybe we can met this time because if I went out with my friends I don't have a best station or a best situation to talk with.

✓ So I would like to tell my friends that maybe we can meet another time, because if I went out with them, I wouldn't be in a good situation to talk to them.

情态动词 can 后面必须接动词原形，因此应说 can meet，不能说 can met。表示假设结果时，would 后也要接动词原形，例如 wouldn't be。建议看到 can、would 等情态动词时，检查其后是否使用动词原形。

× So I would like to say we can met at the next time.

✓ So I would like to say that we can meet next time.

can 后应接动词原形 meet，而不是过去式 met。此处 at the next time 的介词也不合适；表示“下次”通常直接说 next time。建议记住 can + 动词原形，以及 next time 前一般不加 at。

× So I would like to say we can met at the next time.

✓ So I would like to say that we can meet next time.

表示“下次”时通常说 next time，不需要在前面加 at。可以将 next time 作为固定表达来记忆。