Tiredness— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: 先直接回答是否经常感到疲倦，再解释原因并给出一个具体例子。注意过去时应说“studied”，次数表达可说“twice”；“I study because I usually walk late”意思不清，建议明确说明是学习到很晚还是走路回家。最后的“and to avoid it”没有完成句意，应删除或补充完整。

Ejemplo: I sometimes feel tired, especially after a long day of studying. I often stay up late, so I don’t get enough sleep. For example, I studied until midnight twice last week, and I felt sleepy the following day.

Sugerencia: 回答开头可以保留，但要用句号或连接词把原因和例子分开。结合上下文，你可能想表达长时间“工作”或“学习”，而不是“walk”；“my eyes my black”表达不清，可以改成“my eyes and brain”。过去发生的事要用过去时“worked/studied”，并补完最后一句，避免句子中断。

Ejemplo: I usually feel tired after working for a long time without a break. I have to concentrate on my computer, which can make my eyes and brain feel exhausted. For example, last Friday I worked on a project until midnight, so I was tired the next day.

Sugerencia: 直接说明你疲倦时会做什么，然后补充一项具体活动即可。避免重复“I honestly”和“checking some”；“screaming my phone”可能是想说“scrolling on my phone”。描述一般习惯时用一般现在时，并把“whether it's come”改成更自然的“if I get a message”。

Ejemplo: When I feel tired, I usually take it easy and scroll through my phone. If I get a message from a friend or family member, I’ll reply when I have the energy. Sometimes I just put my phone down and rest.

Sugerencia: 这一回答结构较完整，有直接回答、原因和例子。注意“when I tired”应改为“when I’m tired”，“a long time long day”应简化为“a long day”；“sleep and watch TV”可改成“sleep or watch TV”。最后的“enjoy them”指代不清，建议明确说即使累了也会参加特别场合的聚会。

Ejemplo: Honestly, I usually don’t go out with my friends when I’m tired because I need time to rest and recover. After a long day at work, I prefer to stay home and either sleep or watch TV. However, I’ll still join them for a special occasion, such as a birthday.

× For example, last week I study until midnight 2 times so I feel really sleepy the next day.

✓ For example, last week I studied until midnight twice, so I felt really sleepy the next day.

“Last week”指过去的时间，因此应使用过去时：study 改为 studied，feel 改为 felt。次数可表达为 twice。

× For example, last week I study until midnight 2 times so I feel really sleepy the next day and to avoid it.

✓ For example, last week I studied until midnight twice, so I felt really sleepy the next day.

句末的“and to avoid it”没有完整的主句来承接，导致句子结构不完整。应删除这部分，或另起一句补充完整意思。

× I usually feel tired when I walk for a long time without a break it's because I have to concentrate and sit on a computer.

✓ I usually feel tired when I walk for a long time without a break. It's because I have to concentrate and sit at a computer.

表示人在电脑前工作时，通常用“sit at a computer”，而不是“sit on a computer”。此外，原句中的两个完整分句不能直接连在一起，应使用句号分开。

× For example, last Friday I walk until midnight on a project, so I really.

✓ For example, last Friday I worked until midnight on a project, so I was really tired.

“Last Friday”表示过去，应使用过去时。“walk”在这里根据上下文应表达“工作”，改为“worked”；描述当时的状态，应说“was really tired”。

× For example, last Friday I walk until midnight on a project, so I really.

✓ For example, last Friday I worked until midnight on a project, so I was really tired.

句子以“so I really”结束，但后面缺少完整的谓语和意思，属于不完整句。可以补充“was really tired”来表达结果。

× I honestly I just do nothing when I was when I was tired.

✓ I honestly just do nothing when I'm tired.

这里描述的是通常感到疲倦时会做什么，应使用一般现在时。“I was tired”应改为“I am tired”（缩写为“I’m tired”）。同时删去重复的“I”。

× I honestly I just do nothing when I was when I was tired or just screaming my phone.

✓ I honestly just do nothing when I'm tired, or I just scroll through my phone.

“do nothing”和后面的动作需要保持结构平行，因此应使用动词原形“scroll”，而不是“screaming”。描述浏览手机时可以说“scroll through my phone”。

× checking some text whether it's come from friends or family

✓ checking some messages to see whether they have come from friends or family

“messages”是复数，后面应使用复数代词“they”，不能用单数“it”。这里用“they have come”与复数主语保持一致。

× I will reply them.

✓ I will reply to them.

动词“reply”表示回复某人时，后面需要加介词“to”，所以应说“reply to them”。

× Honestly, I usually don't go out with my friends when I tired because I really need to rest and recover.

✓ Honestly, I usually don't go out with my friends when I'm tired because I really need to rest and recover.

“I tired”缺少系动词。描述“我很累”时，需要在主语和形容词之间加上“am”，即“I am tired”或“I’m tired”。

× But I might enjoy them if it is a special occasion.

✓ But I might go out with my friends if it's a special occasion.

“them”指代不清，且前文谈论的是“和朋友外出”，不是“享受朋友”。直接重复“go out with my friends”能让句意更清楚。