Tiredness— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Answer directly and avoid repetition. “Yes, I do feel tired every day” and “I tend to sleep a lot” express the same general idea, so the response could be more concise. Also, “at weekends” or “on weekends” is more natural than “during the weekends.” Add a specific reason for feeling tired to make the answer more developed.

Ejemplo: Yes, I often feel tired, especially after a busy week at work. I usually catch up on sleep at weekends and spend some quiet time in my room. This helps me recharge before the new week begins.

Sugerencia: Use the plural form “client calls” or say “calls with my clients.” The phrase “my energy drop” should be “my energy drops,” and “after every comes” is unclear; use “after every call.” Explain why the calls are tiring, such as concentrating for a long time or dealing with demanding clients. Use a linking word such as “because” to connect the reason clearly.

Ejemplo: I usually feel tired after long calls with my clients. They can be quite draining because I have to concentrate carefully and solve problems during each conversation. As a result, my energy drops after every call.

Sugerencia: Correct “usefully” to “usually,” and use the natural expressions “go to bed,” “lie down,” and “scroll on my phone.” The phrase “the release of the document” is incorrect and unclear; you may mean “a sense of relaxation” or “a way to relieve stress.” Avoid repeating “scrolling” and “social media,” and give one clear explanation of how this activity helps you.

Ejemplo: When I feel tired, I usually lie down and scroll through social media for a while. It helps me relax and take my mind off work. However, if I am extremely exhausted, I put my phone away and take a short nap.

Sugerencia: The answer is relevant, well developed, and uses “so” and “because” logically. For more natural English, say “I’m quite an introvert” or “I’m an introverted person,” rather than “an introvert type of person.” Also, “lie in bed” is more natural than “lie in my bed.” Break the long sentence into two sentences to improve clarity.

Ejemplo: Not usually. I’m quite an introverted person, so when I feel tired, I prefer to stay at home. I might read a book or listen to music because these activities help me feel rested and ready to socialise later.

× Every call is draining to me and I feel like my energy drop after every comes.

✓ Every call is draining to me, and I feel like my energy drops after every call.

The subject energy is singular, so the present-tense verb must be drops, not drop. The phrase after every also needs a singular countable noun, so every call is correct.

× Every call is draining to me and I feel like my energy drop after every comes.

✓ Every call is draining to me, and I feel like my energy drops after every call.

Every must be followed by a singular countable noun. Comes is a verb, but the sentence requires the noun call after every.

× I usefully go to my bed and lie and do some scrolling in my phone, especially on social media because scrolling in my phone or checking my social media gives me the release of the document that actually makes me feel happy.

✓ I usually go to my bed and lie and do some scrolling in my phone, especially on social media because scrolling in my phone or checking my social media gives me the release of the document that actually makes me feel happy.

Usefully means in a useful manner, so it does not fit the intended meaning. Usually is the correct adverb because the student is describing a habitual action.

× I usefully go to my bed and lie and do some scrolling in my phone, especially on social media because scrolling in my phone or checking my social media gives me the release of the document that actually makes me feel happy.

✓ I usually go to my bed and lie and do some scrolling on my phone, especially on social media because scrolling on my phone or checking my social media gives me the release of the document that actually makes me feel happy.

We normally use the preposition on when referring to activities performed using a phone, such as scrolling on my phone or checking something on my phone. In my phone is not the appropriate prepositional expression here.