Tiredness— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Answer directly with a complete sentence and avoid redundancy: “tired and exhausted” repeats the same idea. Use the correct expression “when I get back from work” rather than “when I back from work.” You could also add a brief reason to make the answer more developed.

Ejemplo: Yes, I often feel tired, especially when I get back from work at night. My job can be quite demanding, so I usually need some time to relax before doing anything else.

Sugerencia: Begin with a direct topic sentence, such as “I usually feel tired when I get home from work.” Correct the word order in “As I just said,” and use natural phrases such as “my job involves dealing with clients and meeting deadlines.” Avoid saying “as you know,” because the examiner may not know much about your job. Use parallel structures and plural forms, including “deadlines.”

Ejemplo: As I just mentioned, I usually feel tired when I get home from work at night. I’m an auditor, and my job involves dealing with clients, completing reports, and meeting tight deadlines.

Sugerencia: Use the present simple correctly: “I usually watch,” not “I usually watching.” Say “a highly rated movie” or “highly rated movies,” and use “The movie I would recommend is Fast & Furious” because “movie” is singular. Add a reason or result to make the response more specific and natural.

Ejemplo: When I feel tired, I usually watch a highly rated movie to help me relax. I would recommend Fast & Furious because it is exciting and entertaining, so it helps me take my mind off work.

Sugerencia: The answer is clear and gives a reason, but “made a deal” is not natural in this context; use “made plans” or “arranged to meet.” Say “friendships are very important to me” or “my friends are very important to me.” You could also explain that you may leave early if you are extremely tired, which would make the answer more nuanced.

Ejemplo: Yes, if I have already made plans with my friends, I’ll usually go even if I feel tired. Friendships are very important to me, although I might leave early if I’m completely exhausted.

× Yes, especially when I back from work at night I feel very tired and exhausted.

✓ Yes, especially when I come back from work at night, I feel very tired and exhausted.

The verb back cannot be used here as the main verb in this meaning. Use the present-tense verb phrase come back to describe a regular situation. A comma also helps separate the introductory time clause from the main clause.

× Just I said now I feel tired when I come back from work at night because I am an auditor and as you know, auditor is a tough job.

✓ As I just said, I feel tired when I come back from work at night because I am an auditor, and, as you know, being an auditor is a tough job.

The adverb just should be placed before the verb said, not at the beginning of the clause. The phrase As I just said is the natural word order.

× Just I said now I feel tired when I come back from work at night because I am an auditor and as you know, auditor is a tough job.

✓ As I just said, I feel tired when I come back from work at night because I am an auditor, and, as you know, being an auditor is a tough job.

A singular countable noun needs an article, and auditor refers to a profession or person. The revised sentence uses an auditor after the verb be and changes the subject of the second clause to being an auditor, which correctly expresses the idea.

× Just I said now I feel tired when I come back from work at night because I am an auditor and as you know, auditor is a tough job.

✓ As I just said, I feel tired when I come back from work at night because I am an auditor, and, as you know, being an auditor is a tough job.

The original sentence has an awkward structure in auditor is a tough job because a person cannot directly be equated with a job. Using being an auditor as the subject makes the sentence grammatically and logically complete.

× It needs to deal with clients and finishing jobs and to meet deadline.

✓ The job requires me to deal with clients, finish jobs, and meet deadlines.

Deadline is a countable noun, and the answer refers to deadlines in general, so the plural form deadlines is needed. The parallel verbs deal, finish, and meet also make the list clearer.

× It needs to deal with clients and finishing jobs and to meet deadline.

✓ The job requires me to deal with clients, finish jobs, and meet deadlines.

The pronoun It does not clearly or logically perform the actions in this context. The revised sentence uses The job as the subject and me as the person who performs the work, creating a clear sentence structure.

× When I feel tired I usually watching a high rating movies.

✓ When I feel tired, I usually watch highly rated movies.

The adverb usually describes a routine, so the simple present watch is required. The form watching cannot be used directly after usually without an auxiliary verb.

× When I feel tired I usually watching a high rating movies.

✓ When I feel tired, I usually watch highly rated movies.

Highly is an adverb that correctly modifies the adjective rated. The phrase high rating does not correctly describe the movies in this sentence.

× The movies that I recommend is Fast and Furious.

✓ The movie I recommend is Fast and Furious.

The original sentence uses the plural subject movies with the singular verb is. Since Fast and Furious is one film, the singular noun movie is appropriate and agrees with is.

× If I have made a deal with my friends, I will go even though I feel very tired because friendship is most important for me.

✓ If I have made plans with my friends, I will go even though I feel very tired because friendship is the most important thing to me.

A superlative adjective normally requires the definite article the. The phrase the most important thing to me is the standard way to express this meaning.