Part 1
Examinador
Do you often feel tired?
Candidato
Yeah, I do feel tired sometimes if I do hard work for more than ten hours standing or moving around.
Examinador
When would you feel tired?
Candidato
After a long working day, I feel tired at work or at home or once I'm sick a bit.
Examinador
What do you do when you feel tired?
Candidato
I lay down on my couch and drink some hot drinks.
Examinador
When you feel tired, do you still go out with your friends?
Candidato
I usually prefer not. I apologize to them if I can change the date or do it in another day.
Do you often feel tired?
Puntuación: 78.0Sugerencia: Answer the question directly and use a more natural time expression. The phrase “do hard work” is understandable, but “work for more than ten hours” or “do physically demanding work” sounds more natural. You could also add a brief reason or result to make the answer more complete.
Ejemplo: Yes, I sometimes feel tired, especially when I work for more than ten hours. It is even more exhausting when I have to stand or move around all day. By the end of the day, I usually just want to go home and rest.
When would you feel tired?
Puntuación: 65.0Sugerencia: Give a clear answer about when you feel tired and avoid listing ideas with repeated “or.” The phrase “once I'm sick a bit” is unnatural; say “when I am feeling a little sick” instead. Use a linking word such as “especially” to connect the main situation with an additional detail.
Ejemplo: I usually feel tired after a long day at work, especially if I have been busy or stressed. I can also feel exhausted when I am feeling a little sick. In those situations, I normally need to rest as soon as I get home.
What do you do when you feel tired?
Puntuación: 82.0Sugerencia: The answer is direct and relevant, but use “lie down” rather than “lay down” in this context. “A hot drink” or “some tea” sounds more natural than “hot drinks.” Add one specific detail about how this helps you to make the response more developed.
Ejemplo: When I feel tired, I usually lie down on the couch and have a hot drink, such as tea. I also put my phone away for a while because I want to relax properly. After about half an hour, I normally feel much better.
When you feel tired, do you still go out with your friends?
Puntuación: 73.0Sugerencia: State your preference in a complete sentence and explain how you rearrange the plan. “I usually prefer not” should be “I usually prefer not to go out,” and “do it in another day” should be “do it on another day.” Use a linking word such as “so” to show the relationship between feeling tired and changing the plan.
Ejemplo: I usually prefer not to go out when I feel tired. I apologize to my friends and ask whether we can postpone the plan until another day. However, if it is a special occasion, I might still go out for a short time.
× I lay down on my couch and drink some hot drinks.
✓ I lie down on my couch and drink some hot drinks.
Lie is the present-tense verb used for resting in a horizontal position. Lay is its past-tense form, so it does not fit this present-tense answer. Remember: lie means to rest, while lay means to put something down.
× I apologize to them if I can change the date or do it in another day.
✓ I apologize to them if I can change the date or do it on another day.
Use the preposition on with days and specific dates. The correct phrase is on another day, not in another day.