Tiredness— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Answer directly with “Yes, I often feel tired.” Use “exhausted” or “tired,” not “exotic,” because “exotic” means unusual or foreign. Improve the sentence structure by separating the ideas and using linking words such as “because” and “especially.” Also, replace “there are lots of time” with “the journeys take a long time.”

Ejemplo: Yes, I often feel tired, especially because I work as a project engineer. I have to visit construction sites every week, and it often takes a long time to travel there. As a result, I feel exhausted by the end of the day.

Sugerencia: Use the correct structure “When I go to work on-site” and clearly explain when and why you feel tired. The phrase “East part of Thailand is spent over ten tin dry birth ham” is unclear; express the distance or travel time accurately, such as “the site is more than ten hours away” or “it takes over ten hours to get there.” Use “makes me exhausted,” rather than “make me exotic.”

Ejemplo: I usually feel tired when I have to work at a construction site in eastern Thailand. Some of the sites are very far away, and it can take more than ten hours to reach them. The long journey and the demanding work make me exhausted.

Sugerencia: Begin with a clear answer and organize the actions with “First” and “Then.” Use “listening to music helps me” instead of “listen to the music help me,” and say “I enjoy eating chocolate or ice cream,” not “enjoy either chocolate and ice cream.” Avoid the unclear phrase “a dish” and explain how these activities help you relax or regain energy.

Ejemplo: When I feel tired, I usually listen to music and have something sweet. First, listening to music helps me relax and reduce my stress. Then, I might eat some chocolate or ice cream because it gives me a quick boost of energy.

Sugerencia: Answer naturally with “I usually prefer to stay in my room alone.” Use “alone,” rather than “lonely,” because “lonely” describes an unhappy feeling, while “alone” simply means without other people. Replace “exoted” with “exhausted,” “boot my energy” with “recharge my energy,” and connect the reason more smoothly.

Ejemplo: When I feel tired, I usually prefer to stay in my room alone rather than go out with my friends. I am quite introverted, so having some quiet time helps me recharge. After I have rested, I usually feel more energetic and sociable.

× Yes, I often feel exotic this is because I am a project engineer I need to go on site every week and and it's very long time to travel to each area so there are lots of time

✓ Yes, I often feel exotic. This is because I am a project engineer, and I need to go on site every week. It takes a long time to travel to each area, so there is a lot of travel time.

The original answer contains several independent clauses joined without appropriate punctuation or conjunctions, creating a run-on sentence. Separate the main ideas with periods and use and or so to connect related clauses clearly.

× Yes, I often feel exotic this is because I am a project engineer I need to go on site every week and and it's very long time to travel to each area so there are lots of time

✓ Yes, I often feel exotic. This is because I am a project engineer, and I need to go on site every week. It takes a long time to travel to each area, so there is a lot of travel time.

Long time is a countable singular phrase and needs an article in this context. Use a long time, or use long travel time when referring to travel duration in general.

× Yes, I often feel exotic this is because I am a project engineer I need to go on site every week and and it's very long time to travel to each area so there are lots of time

✓ Yes, I often feel exotic. This is because I am a project engineer, and I need to go on site every week. It takes a long time to travel to each area, so there is a lot of travel time.

Time is uncountable in this meaning, so it cannot be used with there are lots of. Use there is a lot of travel time. The verb be must agree with the singular or uncountable noun that follows it.

× Yes, I often feel exotic this is because I am a project engineer I need to go on site every week and and it's very long time to travel to each area so there are lots of time

✓ Yes, I often feel exotic. This is because I am a project engineer, and I need to go on site every week. It takes a long time to travel to each area, so there is a lot of travel time.

Lots of is generally used with plural countable nouns or uncountable nouns in a suitable structure. Since time is uncountable here, a lot of time is more appropriate, and it should be used with there is, not there are.

× When I go work on site, this is because I need to monitor my projects in East part of Thailand is spent over ten tin dry birth ham, so I think it is very hard for me and make me exotic

✓ When I go to work on site, it is because I need to monitor my projects in the eastern part of Thailand. I spend over ten hours traveling there, so I think it is very hard for me and makes me feel exotic.

The verb go normally takes to before a destination or activity in this expression: go to work. Do not omit the preposition. Also, use traveling there to express the activity and destination more clearly.

× When I go work on site, this is because I need to monitor my projects in East part of Thailand is spent over ten tin dry birth ham, so I think it is very hard for me and make me exotic

✓ When I go to work on site, it is because I need to monitor my projects in the eastern part of Thailand. I spend over ten hours traveling there, so I think it is very hard for me and makes me feel exotic.

When referring to a specific geographical region, use the definite article the: the eastern part of Thailand. The adjective eastern is also more natural than East when describing a part of a country.

× When I go work on site, this is because I need to monitor my projects in East part of Thailand is spent over ten tin dry birth ham, so I think it is very hard for me and make me exotic

✓ When I go to work on site, it is because I need to monitor my projects in the eastern part of Thailand. I spend over ten hours traveling there, so I think it is very hard for me and makes me feel exotic.

The subject of make is it, which is third-person singular. In the present tense, make must become makes. Remember to add -s or -es to the verb when the subject is he, she, it, or a singular noun.

× I do many things when I feel tired first of all, I turn on the music, listen to the music help me to release my stress and secondly, I enjoy either chocolate and ice cream a dish it helped me to boost my energy.

✓ I do many things when I feel tired. First of all, I turn on the music and listen to it; listening to music helps me relieve my stress. Secondly, I enjoy either chocolate or ice cream, and these help boost my energy.

The original answer contains several ideas joined together without clear punctuation or structure. Divide the response into complete sentences and use parallel structures to make the list easier to understand.

× I do many things when I feel tired first of all, I turn on the music, listen to the music help me to release my stress and secondly, I enjoy either chocolate and ice cream a dish it helped me to boost my energy.

✓ I do many things when I feel tired. First of all, I turn on the music and listen to it; listening to music helps me relieve my stress. Secondly, I enjoy either chocolate or ice cream, and these help boost my energy.

When an action functions as the subject of a sentence, use the -ing form: listening to music. The gerund phrase listening to music is singular, so it takes helps.

× I do many things when I feel tired first of all, I turn on the music, listen to the music help me to release my stress and secondly, I enjoy either chocolate and ice cream a dish it helped me to boost my energy.

✓ I do many things when I feel tired. First of all, I turn on the music and listen to it; listening to music helps me relieve my stress. Secondly, I enjoy either chocolate or ice cream, and these help boost my energy.

The pair either ... or must be used together. Therefore, say either chocolate or ice cream, not either chocolate and ice cream. Use matching conjunctions in paired alternatives.

× I do many things when I feel tired first of all, I turn on the music, listen to the music help me to release my stress and secondly, I enjoy either chocolate and ice cream a dish it helped me to boost my energy.

✓ I do many things when I feel tired. First of all, I turn on the music and listen to it; listening to music helps me relieve my stress. Secondly, I enjoy either chocolate or ice cream, and these help boost my energy.

The question asks about what you usually do, so use the present tense. The past-tense verb helped should be changed to help because these actions are regular habits.

× When I feel tired, I prefer to stay in my room lonely. This is because I am an introverted person when I feel exoted, stay alone, can boot my energy better than hang out with my friends.

✓ When I feel tired, I prefer to stay alone in my room. This is because I am an introverted person. When I feel exoted, staying alone can boot my energy better than hanging out with my friends.

Lonely describes an emotional condition, while alone describes being without other people. Because the speaker means that they prefer not to be with others, alone is the appropriate word.

× When I feel tired, I prefer to stay in my room lonely. This is because I am an introverted person when I feel exoted, stay alone, can boot my energy better than hang out with my friends.

✓ When I feel tired, I prefer to stay alone in my room. This is because I am an introverted person. When I feel exoted, staying alone can boot my energy better than hanging out with my friends.

The clause when I feel exoted, stay alone does not have a properly stated subject and finite verb. Use staying alone as the subject of the next clause, or write I stay alone as a complete independent clause.

× When I feel tired, I prefer to stay in my room lonely. This is because I am an introverted person when I feel exoted, stay alone, can boot my energy better than hang out with my friends.

✓ When I feel tired, I prefer to stay alone in my room. This is because I am an introverted person. When I feel exoted, staying alone can boot my energy better than hanging out with my friends.

After the comparison phrase better than, use a parallel -ing form when comparing activities. Therefore, hanging out should be used to match staying alone.

× When I feel tired, I prefer to stay in my room lonely. This is because I am an introverted person when I feel exoted, stay alone, can boot my energy better than hang out with my friends.

✓ When I feel tired, I prefer to stay alone in my room. This is because I am an introverted person. When I feel exoted, staying alone can boot my energy better than hanging out with my friends.

The comparison should compare two similar activities: staying alone and hanging out with friends. Using the -ing form in both parts makes the comparison grammatically parallel and clear.