Tiredness— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Make your response direct and clear. Start with a topic sentence answering the question, then give 1–2 specific reasons with simple linking words. Avoid unclear words and pronunciation mistakes; use correct grammar (e.g., subject-verb agreement, correct verb forms) and quantify details precisely.

Ejemplo: Not really. I usually feel energetic because I walk for about 30 to 60 minutes every day and get plenty of sunlight. Also, I do house chores at home, which keeps me active and prevents tiredness.

Sugerencia: Answer first, then give two clear, specific reasons using linking words like 'for example' or 'because'. Use correct phrases (e.g., 'lack sleep', 'doing nothing', 'at night'). Avoid vague or incorrect expressions.

Ejemplo: I usually feel tired when I don’t have enough to do or when I lack sleep. For example, if I stay up late studying, I feel exhausted the next day.

Sugerencia: Give a clear topic sentence then list 2–3 specific activities with linking words. Use correct verb forms and concise phrasing. Mention duration or frequency to make your answer more concrete.

Ejemplo: When I feel tired, I usually go outside to get some sunlight and walk for 30 to 60 minutes. I also do activities that boost my energy, such as light exercise or listening to upbeat music.

Sugerencia: Start with a clear direct answer (Yes/No) then explain briefly using a reason and an example. Use correct grammar (e.g., 'I want to be alone', 'things that make me happy', 'by myself'). Keep it concise.

Ejemplo: No, I usually prefer to be alone when I’m tired because I need quiet time to rest. For example, I might stay home and read or watch a movie to recharge.

× No, everything feel tared because I regularly exercise doing walking every day such as thirty, thirty to one arm, artery, I get sunlight and I'm basically doing housers when I home.

✓ No, I don't feel tired because I exercise regularly. I walk every day for thirty to sixty minutes, I get sunlight, and I basically do housework when I'm at home.

Multiple issues: subject-verb agreement ('everything feel' should be 'I don't feel' — subject mismatch and negative form), incorrect vocabulary ('tared' -> 'tired'), awkward gerund and phrasing ('doing walking' -> 'I walk'), unclear time/duration expression ('thirty, thirty to one arm, artery' likely 'thirty to sixty minutes'), missing preposition and verb forms ('when I home' -> 'when I'm at home'), and sentence structure run-on. Suggestion: break into shorter sentences, use correct subject and verb forms, use correct time expressions and prepositions.

× I feel tired when I'm not doing something, I lack of sleep, when I'm doing bedroom thing, that's why I feel tired.

✓ I feel tired when I'm not doing anything, when I lack sleep, or when I'm doing things in the bedroom. That's why I feel tired.

Errors include incorrect phrase 'not doing something' (should be 'not doing anything' to express inactivity), incorrect use of 'I lack of sleep' (correct is 'I lack sleep' or 'I don't get enough sleep'), and vague phrase 'doing bedroom thing' (use 'doing things in the bedroom' or be specific). Also run-on sentence; use commas or separate sentences. Suggestion: use 'anything' for negative polarity, remove unnecessary 'of' after 'lack', and choose clear nouns for activities.

× When I feel tired, I'm doing I'm going out and getting sunlight, do walking for thirty to sixty minutes and do a activity that I feel energetic.

✓ When I feel tired, I go out and get sunlight, walk for thirty to sixty minutes, and do activities that make me feel energetic.

Mixing present continuous with habitual actions is incorrect here; habitual responses use simple present ('I go out', 'I walk'). Incorrect verb forms: 'do walking' -> 'walk', 'do a activity' -> 'do activities' or 'do an activity', and 'I feel energetic' should be 'make me feel energetic' to show cause. Suggestion: use simple present for habitual actions, correct noun/article agreement ('an activity'), and parallel verb forms in the list.

× No, because probably I want to be alone and do all the things that makes me happy on my own company?

✓ No, probably I want to be alone and do all the things that make me happy on my own.

Errors: subject-verb agreement 'things that makes' should be 'things that make' (plural subject), incorrect phrase 'on my own company' should be 'on my own' or 'by myself' (company means presence of others), and unnecessary question mark. Also 'because probably' is awkward; 'probably' alone is sufficient. Suggestion: use correct verb agreement, choose appropriate expression for being alone ('by myself' or 'on my own'), and remove extraneous punctuation.