Tiredness— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be more concise and avoid repetition and fillers. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give two specific reasons using linking words. Correct minor grammar (e.g., "after turning 40" → "since turning 40", "come back to home" → "come home").

Ejemplo: Yes, I often feel tired. Since turning 40 and due to my hectic work schedule, I usually arrive home exhausted. In addition, I sometimes skip breakfast, which makes me feel low on energy during the day.

Sugerencia: Answer directly and organize reasons with linking words; avoid repeating the same points. Use precise phrasing (e.g., "commute takes about an hour" and "I skip breakfast"). Keep to 2–4 sentences.

Ejemplo: I usually feel tired in the evening after I come home. Mainly this is because my commute takes about an hour and my daily schedule is exhausting. Also, I often skip breakfast, which leaves me low on energy by the end of the day.

Sugerencia: Good structure and clear actions. Improve by adding a linking word for sequence and a brief reason for why these help. Use slightly more natural phrasing ("have a cup of tea," "rest for a while").

Ejemplo: When I feel tired, I usually have a cup of tea and then rest for about 20–30 minutes. Afterwards I eat a proper meal, which helps me regain energy and feel more refreshed.

Sugerencia: Good direct answer. Improve grammar and naturalness: use a clear topic sentence and one or two concise supporting reasons. Replace "don't prefer to" with "prefer not to" and simplify the list of actions.

Ejemplo: No, when I'm tired I prefer not to go out with friends because socialising requires energy. Instead, I usually relax at home, have a good meal and get an early night to recover.

× When I come back to home, I feel very tired, maybe because of my daily schedule and sometimes I skip my breakfast also.

✓ When I come back home, I feel very tired, maybe because of my daily schedule, and sometimes I skip my breakfast.

Remove the preposition 'to' before 'home' because 'come back home' is the correct idiom. Also remove the final 'also' (redundant) and add a comma before 'and' for clarity. Suggestion: use 'come back home' or 'come home' and avoid redundant adverbs. Grammar Problem Type ID: 11

× These are the reason I often feel tired.

✓ These are the reasons I often feel tired.

The noun 'reason' should be plural 'reasons' to agree with the demonstrative 'these' and the plural verb. Suggestion: use 'these are the reasons' when listing multiple causes. Grammar Problem Type ID: 1

× I usually feel tired in the evening after coming back to home.

✓ I usually feel tired in the evening after coming back home.

Same preposition error: do not use 'to' before 'home' with 'come back'. Use 'come back home' or 'come home'. Suggestion: 'after coming back home' is natural. Grammar Problem Type ID: 11

× It takes around one hour for me to get back to my work.

✓ It takes me around one hour to get back to work.

The phrase 'get back to my work' is awkward; 'get back to work' is the natural expression. Also place 'me' after 'takes' for normal English order: 'It takes me around one hour'. Suggestion: use 'It takes me around one hour to get back to work.' Grammar Problem Type ID: 26

× So these are the reasons I feel exhausted.

✓ So these are the reasons I feel exhausted.

No grammatical correction needed; sentence is correct. Included to show no change required. Grammar Problem Type ID: 1

× After that I take a good meal so that I could feel more energetic and more refreshed.

✓ After that I have a good meal so that I can feel more energetic and more refreshed.

Use present simple 'have' for habitual actions and modal 'can' (present ability/result) instead of 'could' which suggests conditional or past. Suggestion: 'I have a good meal so that I can feel more energetic.' Grammar Problem Type ID: 4

× When I feel tired, I don't prefer to go out with my friends because hanging out with my friends need energy.

✓ When I feel tired, I don't prefer to go out with my friends because hanging out with them needs energy.

Use pronoun 'them' to avoid repetition and change verb 'need' to 'needs' to agree with singular gerund 'hanging out' (treated as singular noun/ activity). Also 'prefer not to go out' is more natural than 'don't prefer to go out'. Suggestion: 'I prefer not to go out with my friends because hanging out with them needs energy.' Grammar Problem Type ID: 11

× So when I'm tired I prefer taking rest, taking a good meal and sleep peacefully at my home.

✓ So when I'm tired I prefer to rest, have a good meal and sleep peacefully at home.

Use parallel infinitive forms: 'prefer to rest, have, and sleep' instead of mixing 'taking' and 'sleep'. 'At my home' is unnatural; use 'at home'. Suggestion: maintain parallel structure and natural preposition. Grammar Problem Type ID: 12