Tiredness— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Your answer is generally natural and directly addresses the question. To improve, make the response more concise and use one clear topic sentence followed by one or two specific supporting details. Avoid repetition (“relax” / “again feel normal”) and try to use a linking phrase to show sequence (e.g., “after that” or “then”). Also vary vocabulary slightly (e.g., use “recover” or “recharge”).

Ejemplo: I don’t often feel tired, but after an especially long day at work I can feel exhausted. When that happens, I go straight home and relax for an hour to recharge, and then I usually feel back to normal.

Sugerencia: Good direct answer and relevant detail, but reduce hesitations (e.g., remove “uh”) and tighten sentence structure. Begin with a clear topic sentence, then give a specific reason and an example. Use linking words like “because” or “so” to connect cause and effect, and replace vague phrasing (“get adapted”) with more natural verbs like “adjust” or “learn.”

Ejemplo: I usually feel tired when I’m assigned a new task at work because it takes time to learn the new routine. For example, last month I had to learn a new reporting system, and I felt particularly drained after those first few days.

Sugerencia: This answer is clear and specific. To make it more natural and varied, combine short repetitive sentences into one or two coherent sentences and use linking words (e.g., “so” or “then”). Replace awkward phrasing (“put off the lights”) with more natural expressions like “turn off the lights,” and avoid repeating “I like.”

Ejemplo: I usually turn off the lights and listen to soft music to unwind, and if I’m very tired I’ll take a short nap while the music plays so I can fully relax.

× Not very often, but sometimes after having a tiring day at work, I do feel exhausted, so I come back home and try to relax at that time.

✓ Not very often, but sometimes after having a tiring day at work I do feel exhausted, so I come home and try to relax then.

Unnecessary use of 'come back home' is wordy; 'come home' is more natural. 'At that time' is awkward in this context; 'then' is the correct adverb to refer to that moment. Also remove the extra comma before 'I do feel' to improve flow. Suggestion: Use 'come home' and 'then' for natural spoken English and avoid redundant commas.

× After relaxing, I again feel normal.

✓ After relaxing, I feel normal again.

Word order is awkward. In English, the adverb 'again' typically follows the verb or object ('feel normal again') rather than precedes it. Maintain present tense 'feel' to match habitual action.

× I usually feel tired in days when I am given uh new task in my job.

✓ I usually feel tired on days when I am given a new task at my job.

Incorrect article: 'a new task' requires the indefinite article 'a'. Preposition 'in days' should be 'on days' to indicate particular days. 'At my job' is a more natural preposition for workplace. Remove filler 'uh' in corrected sentence.

× Sometimes it takes me time to get adapted to that new work.

✓ Sometimes it takes me time to get adapted to that new work.

This sentence is acceptable but 'get adapted to' is less natural than 'adapt to'. Recommended correction: 'Sometimes it takes me time to adapt to that new work.' Use 'adapt to' (verb) rather than passive 'get adapted to' for clearer, more natural expression.

× So on those days I feel very tired after returning home.

✓ So on those days I feel very tired after returning home.

Sentence is grammatically correct. No article error found; retained as is. (No change necessary.)

× I generally listen to light music.

✓ I generally listen to light music.

Sentence is grammatically correct. 'Listen to' requires the infinitive 'to' and the -ing form is not needed; no change necessary.

× I like to put off the lights of my room and just listen to the music.

✓ I like to turn off the lights in my room and just listen to music.

'Put off' is less natural than 'turn off' for lights. Use 'the lights in my room' or simply 'the lights'—'of my room' is awkward. Also 'listen to the music' sounds like specific music already mentioned; use 'listen to music' for general preference.

× I like to sleep while doing this so that I can relax myself.

✓ I like to sleep while doing this so that I can relax.

'Relax myself' is unnecessary and non-idiomatic in English; 'relax' is intransitive here so no reflexive pronoun is needed. Remove 'myself' to sound natural.