Tiredness— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be careful with tense consistency and avoid repetition. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two concise supporting details. Use linking words (for example, especially, because) and correct past/present forms. Also remove redundant phrases like “there after after.”

Ejemplo: Yes, I do feel tired sometimes, especially after a long, stressful day at work. For example, when I finish a demanding project I usually feel drained, so I eat a quick meal and rest to recover.

Sugerencia: Combine short fragments into complete sentences and maintain subject-verb agreement. Use linking words (firstly, secondly, because) and be specific about examples. Avoid fragmented sentences like “If my day at work was stressful.”

Ejemplo: I usually feel tired for two main reasons. Firstly, if my day at work is stressful and busy, I become mentally exhausted; secondly, if there are a lot of household chores, such as cleaning and cooking, the physical effort makes me tired.

Sugerencia: Keep answers fluent and avoid short unclear fragments like “This.” Use linking words (first, then, afterwards) and precise verbs (reheat, rest). One topic sentence followed by a sequence of actions is enough. Mention a brief reason or result to enrich the answer.

Ejemplo: When I feel tired, I usually take a warm shower first and then reheat a simple meal from the fridge. After that I lie down and sleep for a short time, and when I wake up I feel refreshed and more energetic.

× Yes, sometimes I can be exhausted, especially when I had a long stressful day at work.

✓ Yes, sometimes I can be exhausted, especially when I have had a long stressful day at work.

The original uses simple past 'had' but the context refers to a recent experience affecting the present; the present perfect 'have had' is appropriate to link the past event to current state. Use present perfect for actions that have relevance to now.

× When I get home all I do is eat and then sleep there after after just to recover from the fatigue.

✓ When I get home, all I do is eat and then sleep afterwards just to recover from the fatigue.

The phrase 'there after after' is redundant and incorrectly spaced; 'afterwards' is a single adverb placed after the verb phrase. Add a comma after the introductory clause. This corrects adverb placement and removes redundancy.

× I feel tired for two reasons. If my day at work was stressful.

✓ I feel tired for two reasons. First, if my day at work is stressful.

The fragment 'If my day at work was stressful.' is incomplete. Convert it to a complete clause and use present tense 'is' to match the general statement about reasons. Also add a sequencing word 'First' for clarity.

× Secondly, if the house chores at home is quite much, it can be very tiring.

✓ Secondly, if the house chores at home are too much, it can be very tiring.

'Chores' is plural, so the verb should be 'are' not 'is' (subject-verb agreement). 'Quite much' is unidiomatic; use 'too much' to express excessive quantity.

× Whenever I feel tired I take a shower, I warm up something for my fridge and then I sleep.

✓ Whenever I feel tired, I take a shower, warm up something from the fridge, and then sleep.

Add a comma after the introductory clause. Use parallel verb forms ('take', 'warm', 'sleep') and correct the prepositional phrase to 'from the fridge' rather than 'for my fridge'.

× This. Whenever I wake up I feel renewed and it feels like my energy is recovered.

✓ After that, whenever I wake up I feel refreshed and it feels like my energy has been restored.

'This.' is a sentence fragment; combine ideas into a full sentence. 'Renewed' is acceptable but 'refreshed' is more natural here. Use present perfect passive 'has been restored' or present perfect active to indicate recovery of energy up to now.