Tiredness— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be direct and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence answering the question, then give one or two specific reasons using correct grammar and linking words. Avoid repetition and long confusing phrases. Try: "No, I don't usually feel tired, but I sometimes do when I have a busy day." Use simple past/simple present forms correctly and limit to 2–4 sentences.

Ejemplo: No, I don't often feel tired. However, when I do, it's usually because I have a very busy day at home doing chores and shopping. As a result, I feel exhausted by the evening.

Sugerencia: Answer directly with a clear time reference, then give specific reasons and link them logically. Use correct verb forms (e.g., "I feel" / "I felt") and avoid vague phrases like "many works." Keep to 2–3 sentences and include linking words such as "after" or "because."

Ejemplo: I usually feel tired in the evening after attending my classes. Because I go to class and then do many household chores, I often feel worn out and my health suffers.

Sugerencia: Give a clear topic sentence stating what you do, then support with one or two specific activities and their effects. Use natural verbs (e.g., "chat" instead of "gossip"), correct pronouns and tense, and link ideas with words like "then" or "so." Keep it natural and under five sentences.

Ejemplo: When I'm very tired, I relax by spending time with my mother and having a cup of tea. I also talk to my husband on the phone, which motivates me and makes me feel much better.

× No, when I am usually do many works in my home so I feel tired and I am going outside for buying new clothes and different things so I work many many roads so that's why I feel very tired. It.

✓ No. Usually I do a lot of work at home, so I feel tired. I also go out to buy new clothes and other things, so I travel many roads; that's why I feel very tired.

Multiple sentence structure problems: incorrect word order ('when I am usually do'), unnecessary conjunctions ('so' repeated), incorrect collocations ('many works', 'work many many roads'), and a stray 'It.' Suggestion: break into shorter sentences, use correct collocations ('do a lot of work', 'go out to buy', 'other things', 'travel many roads' or better 'travel a lot'), and place adverbs (usually) before the main verb. Grammar problem type ID:26

× When usually I am go to the my class and attend my classes after that I am doing many works in my home.

✓ Usually I go to my classes and, after that, I do a lot of work at home.

Incorrect present-tense verb forms and word order: 'I am go' and 'I am doing' are wrong for habitual actions. For habitual routines use simple present ('I go', 'I do'). Remove unnecessary articles ('the my class' -> 'my classes') and use natural collocations ('a lot of work'). Grammar problem type ID:6

× So I feel tired and my health is not well.

✓ So I feel tired, and my health is not good.

Awkward adjective choice: 'not well' is acceptable but 'not good' is more natural here. Also join clauses with a comma and conjunction. Maintain simple present for general statements. Grammar problem type ID:6

× This is the main reason why I'm feeling tired.

✓ This is the main reason why I feel tired.

Use simple present ('I feel') for general facts or habitual states. Present continuous ('I'm feeling') implies a temporary action; in this context the simple present is more appropriate. Grammar problem type ID:6

× When I am very tired I am spend time with my mother and I am gossip with my mother and take a tea so I feel relaxed and I am talking with my husband and his motivated me and I feel very happy to contact with him.

✓ When I am very tired, I spend time with my mother. I chat with her and have a cup of tea, so I feel relaxed. I also talk with my husband; he encourages me, and I feel very happy to be in contact with him.

Multiple present-tense and collocation errors: avoid using 'I am' with simple verbs ('I am spend', 'I am gossip'). Use simple present for habitual actions ('I spend', 'I chat'). Correct verb choices: 'gossip with' -> 'chat with', 'take a tea' -> 'have a cup of tea', 'his motivated me' -> 'he encourages me', 'to contact with him' -> 'to be in contact with him' or 'to contact him'. Also split into shorter sentences for clarity. Grammar problem type ID:6

× When usually I am go to the my class and attend my classes after that I am doing many works in my home.

✓ Usually I go to my classes and, after that, I do a lot of work at home.

Article misuse: 'the my class' is incorrect because 'my' already specifies the noun; do not use 'the' with possessive determiners. Use plural 'classes' if attending multiple sessions. Use 'a lot of work' instead of 'many works'. Grammar problem type ID:22

× I also talk with my husband; he encourages me, and I feel very happy to be in contact with him.

✓ I also talk with my husband; he encourages me, and I feel very happy to be in contact with him.

Original had 'his motivated me' which is incorrect pronoun and verb agreement. Replace 'his' with 'he' as the subject and use proper verb form 'encourages me'. This fixes pronoun and agreement errors. Grammar problem type ID:12}]})}}