Politeness— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Answer directly by saying who taught you, then give one clear reason or example. Use “taught me” rather than “touch me,” and say “polite” rather than “polarized.” Avoid repeating ideas, and explain the reason in a complete sentence.

Ejemplo: My parents taught me to be polite when I was a child. They believed that good manners help people feel respected and comfortable. For example, they encouraged me to say “please” and “thank you.”

Sugerencia: Your opinion and example are relevant, but correct the sentence structure: say “Polite people are respectful” and “when someone says…” Use one example and explain its effect. Replace the unclear final phrase with a clear concluding thought.

Ejemplo: Yes, definitely. Being polite is important because it helps people feel respected. For example, saying “thank you” and smiling can make an interaction more pleasant. It also helps create a positive impression.

Sugerencia: Give a clear answer first, such as “We should be polite in all social situations,” then use one or two specific examples. Avoid repeating “every time,” and use natural phrases such as “when shopping at a supermarket” and “greet someone.” The final sentence is unclear, so finish with a relevant reason.

Ejemplo: We should be polite whenever we interact with other people. For instance, we can greet a neighbour when we see them and say “please” and “thank you” when shopping. These small gestures make everyday interactions friendlier.

Sugerencia: The answer is difficult to understand and does not give a complete example. Use the past tense (“I asked,” “I tried”) and describe one specific polite behaviour, such as greeting relatives or speaking quietly. Keep the answer focused and complete your final thought.

Ejemplo: As a child, I showed politeness by greeting adults when I met them. When I visited my hometown, I tried not to speak too loudly and listened while other people were talking. My parents taught me that these small habits showed respect.

× Personally, as a tale, my parents always touch me how to be polarized because they think as a female need to be polite, that other people's showing you they they more like you and they will talk, they will talk good about you.

✓ Personally, my parents always taught me how to be polite because they thought that, as a girl, I needed to be polite. They believed that other people would like me more and speak well of me.

The question asks about childhood, so use past-tense forms such as taught, thought, and needed. The original also lacks a clear subject after as a female and joins several ideas in an unclear way. Use a complete clause after because, and separate the explanation into clear sentences. The words touch and polarized appear to be transcription errors for taught and polite.

× All the person who being polite is very respectful and interesting.

✓ All people who are polite are very respectful and interesting.

Use the plural noun people after all. The relative clause needs are, and the main verb must also be plural: people are. Make sure the subject and verb agree in number.

× For example, is a person say always say thank you, you are welcome or always put a smile on their face.

✓ For example, if a person always says thank you or you are welcome and always puts a smile on their face, that is a good sign.

The original is missing a clear subject and clause structure. In an if-clause, use a subject before the verb. Because a person is singular, use says and puts, not say and put. The corrected sentence also makes the example a complete sentence.

× It is a good sign for people and other people to see oh.

✓ These are good signs for other people to see.

The original sentence has an unclear pronoun reference and an incomplete ending. Use these to refer clearly to the examples mentioned, and end the sentence after the complete idea.

× In my opinion, I think people should be polite every time they see other people or talking with another people.

✓ In my opinion, people should be polite whenever they see other people or talk to them.

Keep the verbs parallel after or: see and talk. The original changes from a finite verb to talking, which makes the structure uneven. Also, them is a natural pronoun reference to other people.

× Like every time around.

✓ People should be polite in almost every situation.

The original is a fragment without a main verb. Make it a complete sentence by adding a subject and a verb.

× Every time I replaced suggested in supermarket when you buy something or you meet other people, you need to say hello, how are you something like that?

✓ For example, when you buy something at a supermarket or meet other people, you should say, Hello, how are you?

Use a before the singular count noun supermarket. The original also contains an unclear opening and does not clearly separate the example from the question being quoted. The correction presents the situation in a complete clause and punctuates the greeting as a question.

× Personally, as a child, I always say, uh, asking about other people, how they act and they're OK and is they, It's something that and when I'm going to my hometown to meet people and never talk so loud and always organize something to be very.

✓ As a child, I always asked other people how they were and whether they were okay. When I went to my hometown to meet people, I never talked too loudly and always tried to behave politely.

Because the answer describes childhood, use past-tense verbs such as asked, went, and talked. In an indirect question, use a statement word order, as in how they were, rather than how were they. The original also joins incomplete ideas together; separating them into complete sentences makes the meaning clearer. The final phrase is unclear, so the correction uses a likely intended meaning.